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Posted 4/28/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

HHAHAHHA LMAO sunglasses haha. The airport. That was halarious. And extremely sweet and lovely. I love Miki. She's amazing >.< Haha. Nice story =]


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Aww.....so cute!! u should be a professional manga author seriously!! have u evr considered dat?


yes!!! i really wanna be one!!! sooo bad!!! >.< i luv writing stories it's my life!!!!


maybe u can enter some competition so dat u can get recognized or something



really??? we can do that??? how???


like sometimes in shojou beat they hve manga competitions....atleast dats wat my friends said....mayb u should check it out or something!!^^


but i have no idea where??

um....i think u have to look in manga magazines cuz they sometimes offer competitions and other stuff like dat

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I Hate Boys!

Say you love me

{at school }

Miki-chan: ko-chan are u going with me to see kazuki off??

Ko-chan: …..i don’t really feel good, im not going (I decide not to go…I’ll only cry there)

Miki-chan: are u sure?? I know u like him, you can’t just give up like that ko-chan!

Ko-chan: even if I go….he’ll forget about me in his new school…

Miki-chan: *hits her in the head* BAKA!!! He is you friend why in the world would he forget his most precious friend!!!

Ko-chan: that hurts miki!! *rubbing her head to make it feel better*

Miki-chan: your going whether you like it or not!!! (she’s also demanding)

Ko-chan: I don’t want to see kazuki go far away…..

Miki-chan: think about kazuki for once!!! IDIOT!! How would kazuki feel if your not there to see him off!!!

Ko-chan: ……..

Miki-chan: you don’t want to make him sad right??

Ko-chan: *nods head* yea….but I don’t know if I can hold back my tears…

Miki-chan: don’t worry, just wear sunglasses

Ko-chan: but it’s winter….

Miki-chan: hey, winter can be very bright too *nods head in agreement*

Ko-chan: I’ll think about it….

Miki-chan: no thinking, your going!! Even if I have to drag you (she really will do that)

Ko-chan: when is he leaving??

Miki-chan: today at 8 pm

Ko-chan: ok

Miki-chan: you better come!!!

Ko-chan:….


{2nd period}


Kazuki: ohiyo ko-chan, miki-chan

Ko-chan: ohiyo!! Kazuki ^_^ (remember to be happy) *forcing on a smile*

Kazuki: …..why do you look so weird??

Ko-chan: huh? N-no I don’t *touching face*

Kazuki: that’s more like you ^_^

Ko-chan: (kazuki….he’s worry about me….) ne, kazuki what school are u going to??

Kazuki: ….don’t know yet

Ko-chan: really?? Awww!! I wanted to see you in your new uniform *disappointed*

Kazuki: it’s a good thing I haven’t decided yet…

Ko-chan: guess what I made for you!!~ ^ ^

Kazuki: what??

Ko-chan: hehe, I worked very hard for this, u better not lose it!!

Kazuki:…..what this?? (looks like poop)

Ko-chan: me!~ whenever u feel lonely you can just look at this =)

Kazuki: thank you ^_^

[note: the thing that ko-chan gave to kazuki was a little stuff toy of ko-chan (she made it herself…took her a long time…)

Kazuki: well I gotta go now…bye

Ko-chan: bye bye

Ko-chan…*sigh* what should I do??….

Kazuki: (im going to keep this forever ^_^) (he really likes it)

{lunch}

Miki-chan: did u decide yet??

Ko-chan: not yet…

Miki-chan: your going!

Ko-chan: ….

Miki-chan: cheer up ko-chan, you can always talk to him even though he’s far away ne? ^ ^

Ko-chan: miki….thank you!!

Miki-chan: that’s what friends are for =)

Ko-chan: un!~

Miki-chan: then your coming (gets right to the point)

Ko-chan: ….i will (just decide that)

Miki-chan: YAY!!

{after school}

Ko-chan: bye miki, im going to my house and change first, I’ll meet you there

Miki-chan: ok

{ko-chan’s house}

Ko-chan: hmm…what should I wear?? *trying on clothes*

Ko-chan: *sigh* I don’t know *falls on bed* ( I wish kazuki wouldn’t go…) *closes eyes*, (she falls asleep)



[her cell phones rings]

Ko-chan:…hmm..*picks up phone* …..hello?...

Miki-chan: KO-CHAN!!!! I CALL YOU 10 TIME ALREADY!!!!, FINALLY I REACHED YOU!!! WHERE ARE YOU??? KAZUKI IS ABOUT TO LEAVE RIGHT NOW!!!

Ko-chan: HUH!!?? *looks at clock* OMG!!! It’s 7:40 already!!! I need to go right now!!!

Ko-chan: bye miki, im coming right now, don’t let them leave ok?

Miki-chan: yea, only IF!! Someone haven’t fallen asleep!!, Bye

Ko-chan: *running downstairs to the door* (WHY!!?? did i fall asleep on such a IMPORTANT day??!!, I HATE MYSELF!!!)

Ko-chan: *running to the airport* (nobody was home to drive her there, and she didn't have money to go on the train)

Ko-chan: *huff* oh no!!, I forgot which way the airport was!!! I think it was this way… (goes off to the wrong directions, and ended up in the forest instead)

Kazuki’s dad: well….it’s almost time to go..

Miki-chan: (oh uh, gotta do something) umm….Mr.Teno how is your new job like?? (trying to stall time)

Kazuki:…(I guess she’s not coming…)

[while they are talking, ko-chan is]

Ko-chan: I think I took the wrong path….it looks like the jungle here….*hears a loud noise* scary….

Ko-chan: *trips on a vine* ouch! (she scraped her knees)

[Airport]

Kazuki’s dad: sorry miki, but another time we have to go now

Miki-chan: (no!! where are you ko-chan!!!) uhh..wait don’t you want to eat first before you leave?, it’s a long way u might get hungry

Kazuki’s dad: we already ate before we can here , bye miki, take good care of yourself *starts to leave*

Miki-chan: please wait!!, ko-chan is coming

Kazuki’s dad: fine….but im only going to wait for 5 minute if she dosen’t come by then we’re leaving

Miki-chan: thank you (come on ko-chan!!)

[forest]

Ko-chan: gotta get there *huff* ouch….the forest sure have a lot of pointy vines everywhere, just my luck (note: she got cut by the vines, all over her body because she took the short cut by swinging on the vines like Tarzan)

Ko-chan: IM GOING TO MAKE IT!!! Just a bit more!!

[Airport]

Kazuk’s dad: one more minute

Miki-chan: (HURRY!! UP KO-CHAN!!)

Kazuki’s dad: 35 seconds left

Kazuki’s dad: 15 seconds

Miki-chan: (he’s getting on my nerves!!)

Kazuki’s dad: 4, 3, 2, 1 ,and 0

Kazuki’s dad: well….it looks like she didn’t come, we’ll be leaving now goodbye

Miki-chan: wait just for another 1 minute?? Please!!

Kazuki’s dad: im sorry but miki our plane is leaving

Miki-chan:…..(im sorry ko-chan!!) I understand, goodbye

Kazuki: *leaving*

Ko-chan: *huff* *huff* WAIT ONE MINUTE!!! KAZUKI!!! *runs to kazuki*

Everybody in airport: *looks at ko-chan* (note: since she came back from the forest she looks like jungle girl, her clothes are all rip up and bloody)

Kazuki: KO-CHAN!! WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU??!! *rushing to ko-chan*

Ko-chan: never mind about that (she got toughen up by the forest, can’t feel any pain)

Ko-chan: I just wanted to see you for the last time ^_^

Kazuki: I wanted to see you too

Miki-chan: such a beautiful moment

Ko-chan: ….and also I wanted to tell u this too…..i-I don’t want you to leave me!! >.<

Kazuki:…..*looks at ko-chan* I understand I’ll stay with you, but you have to do me one favor ^_^

Ko-chan: REALLY!!?? You’ll stay!!, what do I have to do??

Kazuki: say you love me

Ko-chan: *blush* W-WHAT!!!?? I-I can’t do that!!

Kazuki: I guess you don’t want me to stay *starts to walk away*

Ko-chan: *grabs his shirt* fine…*looking down* i-I…..love..you *blush*

Kazuki: I can’t hear you

Ko-chan: I said I love you….

Kazuki: I still can’t hear you (playing with her)

Ko-chan: *gets angry* I SAID I LOVE YOU!!!!! NOW DO U HEAR ME!!!!

Kazuki: *kisses her* I hear you loud and clear ^_^ I love you too, you big idiot! *hugs her*

Everybody in airport: *clapping and cheering, some people are crying)

Miki-chan: *crying* such a sweet couple

Ko-chan: but…how are u going to stay here??

Kazuki: I wasn’t even going to New York at the first place

Ko-chan: EH!!!????

Kazuki: I talked to my dad about it, he said it was fine, im going to stay with my aunt

Ko-chan: REALLY!!?? Yay!~ ……*thinking* …..then….WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME!!!!!! *angry*

Kazuki: because I wanted to see if u really love me ^_^ and I was right

Ko-chan: ur mean!!

Kazuki: sorry, when we get back I’ll buy you all the pudding you want ok? And get your cuts bandaged, gezz what were u doing??

Ko-chan: ehhe….i overslept and got lost, and ended up in the forest….ehehe

Kazuki: that could only happened to you (--___---) (what iam going to do with her…)

Kazuki: lets go ^_^ *takes her hand and runs off*

Ko-chan: un!~

And they became a lovely dovey couple ^ ^

The End =)

Mayu and yoshi met each other at Kyoto, and bcame a couple too ^ ^


And i bet u wanna know how in the world did ko-chan get lost in a forest!!??

It was a really!!! Big greenhouse and it was right next to the airport too, ko-chan keep on going around the circle….what an idiot (--___---)

PS: iam going to write another story so plzzz!!! read it too, it's going to be call My Babysitter



actually i wanted yoshi 2 be with ko chan!! well..........i like kazuki 2.it's reallt great!! thnx 4 wriying this!! i'll wait 4 another story!!



thanks!!! and plus i already wrote my other story ^ ^


really?? i want 2 read it!!!
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Posted 4/30/08
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!! i <33333 it! if only this was a real manga haha i've probably said that a million times by now XD but its so true!!! cant w8 to read ur new story! CONGRATULATIONS & Good Luck! Keep up the awesome work!
Posted 4/30/08
Love the ENDING!!!!!
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Posted 5/1/08
its finished .. uwaaaaaaahhhhh so sweet good luck for your next story..
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Posted 5/2/08

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KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!! i <33333 it! if only this was a real manga haha i've probably said that a million times by now XD but its so true!!! cant w8 to read ur new story! CONGRATULATIONS & Good Luck! Keep up the awesome work!


wow!!!~ thanks very much!!!! i think ur the only one who saids that =) it makes me feel happy
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Posted 5/4/08

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fusiongirl50 wrote:

KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!! i <33333 it! if only this was a real manga haha i've probably said that a million times by now XD but its so true!!! cant w8 to read ur new story! CONGRATULATIONS & Good Luck! Keep up the awesome work!


wow!!!~ thanks very much!!!! i think ur the only one who saids that =) it makes me feel happy


lol no prob! u deserve it! XD
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Posted 5/10/08
so kewl! i feel so happy after reading ur story! ganbatte!
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Posted 5/11/08
THANKS!!! EVERYONE!!!!!!!
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Posted 5/14/08 , edited 5/16/08
=='' wah...fast but fine...^^ tat's kinda good...pro girl...u're pro...ahaz.
gampade ne!!!(for da last time i said it)....................GAMPADE NE~~!! ^^



wat happened 2 yoshi?...u didnt mention bout him anymore...sigh...(tat's a big prob..ya knw)..
n...there got 1 time when u wrote tat yoshi will not lose from kazuki..den nth happened..lolz...
it'll b interesting if yoshi n kazuki fight..lolz...but nvm...gud job...u put a lotta effort on it...^^
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Posted 5/19/08

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=='' wah...fast but fine...^^ tat's kinda good...pro girl...u're pro...ahaz.
gampade ne!!!(for da last time i said it)....................GAMPADE NE~~!! ^^



wat happened 2 yoshi?...u didnt mention bout him anymore...sigh...(tat's a big prob..ya knw)..
n...there got 1 time when u wrote tat yoshi will not lose from kazuki..den nth happened..lolz...
it'll b interesting if yoshi n kazuki fight..lolz...but nvm...gud job...u put a lotta effort on it...^^


yea...about yoshi, i didn't want to make the story very long since it might be kinda boring for people they might get sick of it TT~TT and at the same time i had this other story in my mind that was like EXPLODING!!! if i didn't write it down...i have no idea what could had happened so yea...but if i do make this in a real manga one day i'll make sure i'll change all the errors ^ ^ THANKS VERY MUCH!!!! for telling me what i did wrong even though i was really scare ehhe yea thats how i am TT_TT me not very strong but i still read it YAY!!~ ^_^
Posted 5/20/08
aww kawaii ^-^
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Posted 5/21/08
shank you!!~
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Posted 5/22/08
i loved it! it was the best even if it was short for chapters!! THE BEST
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