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sorry this one was really long, dont feel intimidated by it though. Please read and comment.
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sorry this one was really long, dont feel intimidated by it though. Please read and comment.


YAAAAY.... first 1 to comment!!!
Well i really liked it... it was very interesting, i wonder wat Sado had 2 think about?.... hmmm XD
O and the insignia thing was pretty unique, i liked it a lot =P
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Thanks, took me a while to think of them, for the other two, i was thinking i might use the symbols you and fallen drew, you did both draw symbols right?
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thats really good as always
so you decided to have rin in the other half in the end I know you where going to put her in the magical half of the clan before but this way it actually reads better I think.
Just pointin gout that it seems maybe a bit too much like Bleach I dont know if thats where you got the whole idea from just be careful when using ideas from other animes and mangas because eventually it seems like copying and cheating then there can be legal implimintations if you ever went to print
lol
sorry to put a downer i can be very criticle at times tell me if I ever am too mean and too much and il tone it down
ok back to happy
and yeh we both drew symbols but just warning most of mine are absolutely rubish!
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thats really good as always
so you decided to have rin in the other half in the end I know you where going to put her in the magical half of the clan before but this way it actually reads better I think.
Just pointin gout that it seems maybe a bit too much like Bleach I dont know if thats where you got the whole idea from just be careful when using ideas from other animes and mangas because eventually it seems like copying and cheating then there can be legal implimintations if you ever went to print
lol
sorry to put a downer i can be very criticle at times tell me if I ever am too mean and too much and il tone it down
ok back to happy
and yeh we both drew symbols but just warning most of mine are absolutely rubish!
lollong


Yeah, i did get a bit from Bleach.... But that is all i am getting from bleach. And rin isnt in the magical half because she uses a gun, but i could find a way to switch that if i should, couldnt decided whole heartedly on which faction she should be in
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hmm... really wonder what will happen next.
Is Yyusei going to transform to a vampire in the next episode?
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FallenAngel159 wrote:

thats really good as always
so you decided to have rin in the other half in the end I know you where going to put her in the magical half of the clan before but this way it actually reads better I think.
Just pointin gout that it seems maybe a bit too much like Bleach I dont know if thats where you got the whole idea from just be careful when using ideas from other animes and mangas because eventually it seems like copying and cheating then there can be legal implimintations if you ever went to print
lol
sorry to put a downer i can be very criticle at times tell me if I ever am too mean and too much and il tone it down
ok back to happy
and yeh we both drew symbols but just warning most of mine are absolutely rubish!
lollong


Yeah, i did get a bit from Bleach.... But that is all i am getting from bleach. And rin isnt in the magical half because she uses a gun, but i could find a way to switch that if i should, couldnt decided whole heartedly on which faction she should be in


you could say her mums from the cold weapons half n her dad (who she never knew) is from the magical! so she grew up knowin weapons but has the magical blood running through her strongly!
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Posted 4/22/08
hmmmmm, that might be an interesting thing, and maybe her parents were in high places and she is kind of the mediator between them?.... hmmmm. i dunno, not sure if i have something there or not
Posted 4/23/08
Nice deal whit factions I like it ....clan’s insignia hm pretty unique I especialy liked that idea, FallenAngel159 is right it was kinda corny maybe it's because you... wait you didn't steal the idea you just improvized yeah, I mean you have a lot of similiar things like that anyways I'm just telling what I think, like allways... so you're woried that it's maybe a little to big, well it's not when this became a episode I wonder if it should stick up in a 10 minutes... not to talk about other episodes I'm sorry... YOU SHOULD DEFINETLY MAKE A MANGA FIRST!
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Going to try to make a Manga, hopefully my friend will start drawing soon, and that will actually happen, or maybe i could learn to draw, but that would take a while, so hopefully he will draw them, lol.
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Posted 4/23/08
Should i just change the whole underground thing?
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Well, I wouldn't really change too much just kind of make it like a portal to a training ground that is outside somewhere. That way it wouldn't really be underground, though they go underground to get to it.
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Well, I wouldn't really change too much just kind of make it like a portal to a training ground that is outside somewhere. That way it wouldn't really be underground, though they go underground to get to it.


Thanks, great idea. It would avoid that whole thing, thanks. =)
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yeah, I figured it would help ya out, considering that you had already had most of the story out and so this way you only have to modify it a little, giving it a more personal touch.
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