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Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?


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Posted 4/22/08

kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




Îts really lovly poem, I really like it <3 I can undearstand those fellings I feel them myself sometimes <.<
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Posted 4/24/08

Yamira wrote:


kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




Îts really lovly poem, I really like it <3 I can undearstand those fellings I feel them myself sometimes <.<


thank u, glad u lke it.... ^^
I made it when I have that feeling

Posted 4/24/08

kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




Awesome poem I really love it, this is one of my favourite poems
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Posted 4/27/08

kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




So many people are superficial and fake these days >.< But a really good poem =]
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Posted 4/30/08

kagura4 wrote:


kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




Awesome poem I really love it, this is one of my favourite poems


thanks

I hope u will also like my next poem (still dont know when I'll make it)
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Posted 4/30/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




So many people are superficial and fake these days >.< But a really good poem =]


haha that's rite, I'm agree with u....
anyway thank u ^^

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Posted 5/6/08

kallitadasuki wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


kallitadasuki wrote:

Do I really belong in this place?
It seems that I know no one here...
I undertand no one...

All the fake smiles that they smile for so many times
smiles without joy....
I can only reply their smiles,
pretending to be happy...
and looking at them
with cold empty eyes....

I dont know their truths....
I also never bother to tell them my truth
nor feelings...

like a doll forever dead
I'm just starring at those lies from the corner...
having my mind blank...
or
wish I was never there...

should I just go?
I dont like to be here..
but where should I go?

maybe to a place where an angel lives...
an angel that has the smile,
I love the most..
I know that she cares me the most
I just know it...

Is this just my fantasy?
or real?




So many people are superficial and fake these days >.< But a really good poem =]


haha that's rite, I'm agree with u....
anyway thank u ^^



You're welcome ^^ Always <3
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