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Posted 4/24/08
i hope u guys like it its my first time..

Which side...

Three girls all friends
talk an hang out at lunch
One day two of them
get in an argument
and the one girl already knows
Which side ot pick

Days go by and the two
girls still dont talk
but they talk to the
girl who didnt get involved
Which side to pick

Both girls want her attention
but she is only one person
back and forth listening to
both of them thinking
Which side to pick

By the end of the week
the two girls are still
fighting the girl that wasnt
involved finally figures
out which side she should pick
which is her own

sooo wat do u guys think...is it good
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Posted 4/24/08
i liked it and it was pretty cool for a first poem.
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Posted 4/25/08
It was fun reading and depicts such situation with truth in it. Stanza really worked well with the poem, It quite well for a first since its quite organized. good in my book
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Posted 4/25/08
thanks everybody i appreciate it :)....hope my next one is as good
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