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25 / F / getting into trou...
Posted 4/25/08 , edited 4/25/08
"a passionate romance starts with a dance
the dance of luvers and friends
a tango of good times that never ends
in the mist of it all the personal expance
becomes intence the romance turns to heat
and ur ur body burns from this fire because of ur desire
this dance is a slowmoving feind that always intervene
u cant stop urself ur involved in this tango and its a forever deal
between us time will never conseal only reveal the future
as as we together with this love and romance nuture
this isnt only moving bodies n the moonlight this is a passionate romance
and it feels right "

tell me wat u think of this poem off te top of me head too hehehehe
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28 / M / California, US
Posted 4/25/08
One thing I can say is, spelling is a bit hard to follow like urself should be yourself and the other spellings. I can see your description which is lovely like a moonlit night full of harmony in a symphony which is lovely description. I like it.
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23 / M / Tulsa Ok
Posted 4/25/08
i thought it was great and i wouldnt change a thing (including spelling) <_<;
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