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Posted 4/25/08 , edited 4/25/08
hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..
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okay here's mine...

Title: infinity by negative (i dunno why i thought of it)

you, you went away now im alone with nothing to say/ my room's empty and dark no signs of light, no sense of life/ tell me the reason behind cuz im melting like a candle with fire/ i can't make anything right and im broken, im broken as i say

chorus: so long goodbye to you i say hello to sadness that will confine me/ i can't take it anymore i kept breaking all the rules i cry...

i keep hearing voices in my ear/ i can't take it it's all unclear/ im a wake but feeling cold/ dehydrated and separated from the world outside/ i cry...as i say (chorus)

all the memories we've had/ all the things that we have shared now shattered into pieces i cry...

hope you like it.
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Posted 4/25/08

ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?
Posted 4/25/08

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ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?


the word L.O.V.E. and its rock more like soft rock hehe im trying to get the melody
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Posted 4/25/08

ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?


the word L.O.V.E. and its rock more like soft rock hehe im trying to get the melody


that's cool...mine's kinda dark rock but not emo...i made my song last year while messing with my guitar.
Posted 4/25/08

elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?


the word L.O.V.E. and its rock more like soft rock hehe im trying to get the melody


that's cool...mine's kinda dark rock but not emo...i made my song last year while messing with my guitar.


i cant play any insturment nor can i sing that why im making an animated band like the gorrilaz hehe lol
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Posted 4/25/08

ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?


the word L.O.V.E. and its rock more like soft rock hehe im trying to get the melody


that's cool...mine's kinda dark rock but not emo...i made my song last year while messing with my guitar.


i cant play any insturment nor can i sing that why im making an animated band like the gorrilaz hehe lol


wow...how will you make it?
Posted 4/25/08

elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:


elleryc wrote:


ahmad_williams2003 wrote:

hey i wanted to know how many song writters are there in cr if so post some of ure lyrics hehe i go first
IM IN MY OWN MIND TRYING TO FIND A BETTER WAY...TO YOU.....CANT YOU SEE...DONT YOU KNOW..THE WORD LOVE....THE WORD LOVE..THE WORD LOVE... IM IN MY HEART TRYING TO FIND MY WAY THROUGHT THE DARK... CANT YOU SEE YOU.. THE WORD L.O.V.E......YOU FLY HIGH HIGH...I FLY LOW....CANT YOU GIVE OUR LOVE HO.O.O.PE..UH HUH.I CAN SEE YOU BUT CANT SEE ME.YEAH.YEAH,YEAH. OH OH OH WHOA WHOA... I LOVE LOVE BUT DONT LOVE ME OHH NO..OHH NO... I FIND YOU BUT YOU LOSE ME. I CANT SEE WHY I FALL IN LOVE AGAIN WHEN WHEN WHEN WHEN..I BREAK MY HEART ALL BY MYSELF IT LOOKS LIKE I DONT NEED NO HELP..I TRY.. OHHH I TRY..TO LOVE.. BUT YOU DONT LOVE ME ME ME NO WHOA.... I WONDER WHY..I DO THIS TO MYSELF AGAIN. I TRY TO WIN BUT YOU ALWAYS SUCCEED...DONT YOU THAT ITS LOVE I NEED...WHY DO YOU PULL MY STRINGS..


hey what's the title of your song and what genre is it?


the word L.O.V.E. and its rock more like soft rock hehe im trying to get the melody


that's cool...mine's kinda dark rock but not emo...i made my song last year while messing with my guitar.


i cant play any insturment nor can i sing that why im making an animated band like the gorrilaz hehe lol


wow...how will you make it?


no idea haha
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Posted 4/25/08
^ lol that's some kind of answer! ^_^
Posted 5/28/08
I'm a song writer, well, more like an arranger for instrumental bands.
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yeah i was under the impression that you meant music not lyrics. You want a lyricist to help you out on this one.

But really, best thing for you is to listen to some different music about the subject from a different genre, people in a rock band would use different words than people in a pop group when talking about love. I.E Lay Down by Priestess
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