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Khadar747 story/manga/anime "Grafitti"
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Posted 4/28/08
Yeah, along with fallen, you change your tense sometimes, i do that a lot too, and it rlly aggravates my brother, lol. Other than a few grammatical errors, it is really good. =)
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