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Posted 5/6/08

stickynote_girl wrote:


Morwien wrote:

The Glow of Flame in the Midst of Air
Volume 1

Story by:
Morwien



wooooowwww



why thank you!

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Posted 5/6/08 , edited 5/6/08

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kashieca_yen wrote:

silence

Ever since we first met
I know you are special
Special in a way I never expect
I just woke up one morning
And realize something
Something I never thought would happen
I finally understand why
Why you are so special to me
It’s because I’m falling for you
I tried to ignore it
And pretend that it was nothing
Coz I know you don’t feel the same
Afraid to ruin our friendship
Afraid of losing you
I decided to love you in silence


Firstly I like to apologize for not saying anything about this for so many days.
Alright anyway, it's a good peom, very strong emotion behind it. I like it.



thanks
i'm trying to improve my writing skills so i hope you can help me
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Posted 5/6/08

stickynote_girl wrote:


kashieca_yen wrote:

silence

Ever since we first met
I know you are special
Special in a way I never expect
I just woke up one morning
And realize something
Something I never thought would happen
I finally understand why
Why you are so special to me
It’s because I’m falling for you
I tried to ignore it
And pretend that it was nothing
Coz I know you don’t feel the same
Afraid to ruin our friendship
Afraid of losing you
I decided to love you in silence


torn between friendship and love for one person the worst feeling anyone can feel tsktsk such a thin line between friendship and love


yeah it hurts a lot
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kashieca_yen wrote:



hopefully its not too late to say anything, I find the rhyme scheme interesting and the context of the poem is very straightforward approach which is plain and simple its nice in its own way.
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Posted 6/4/08 , edited 6/4/08

Morwien wrote:

The Glow of Flame in the Midst of Air
Volume 1

Story by:
Morwien



That is a really nice storyline which was rather *erotic I guess couldn't stop reading till the end, Oh yeah! nice passage thats what it is
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Posted 6/4/08

I hear your name
Like a bell...
Ringing... Ringing...
In the air...
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Posted 6/11/08
Alright i've finally came up with an assignment for everyone.

What I want you to do is pretend you've walk into a room with a flower in it, describe the flower.
Also I would like you to pm them to me, but you don't have to if you don't want to.
After I get them and read them over i'll tell you what makes this assignment important ^__^ or unimportant(sp? )

Oh and one last thing, Don't forget that writing has no limits.
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Posted 6/11/08
ahhh, so im included in this class now. hehe. hiya professor.

i'll do my assigment later. i have lots of homework to do.
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Posted 6/11/08 , edited 6/11/08

psyopslayerx wrote:


Morwien wrote:

The Glow of Flame in the Midst of Air
Volume 1

Story by:
Morwien



That is a really nice storyline which was rather *erotic I guess couldn't stop reading till the end, Oh yeah! nice passage thats what it is



hope you felt the same in the story. haha. thats what i aim. make the reader's feel the atmosphere of the story. if they are breathless, you should be. lol
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Posted 6/12/08

Morwien wrote:

ahhh, so im included in this class now. hehe. hiya professor.

i'll do my assigment later. i have lots of homework to do.


^__^ That's goood to hear. I'm looking forward to it.
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ahh i wanna join this class please
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I like your medical vocabulary ^__^ very nice.

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ezzah3 wrote:

ahh i wanna join this class please


I don't have a problem with it so feel free.
Oh and if you do then please do the assignment above.
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