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Poem of Love (:
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Some random poem I made which makes no sense at all....well love is not sensible at all XD

oh yeah I hold copyright to it hehe

Unaware

Fallen as a rock paralyzed at the base,
With the sight of heavens and light,
Comes a rain of questions of this conclusion
As to how high I reached and fell into a plight.

To transcend such emotions with ease?
A slight chance is nothing but a false hope,
Because it is fated whether or not willed
Liked humans do, to live, to cope.

Now to return to reality,
Isolation from a watery dream,
So inconstant, robbed with frozen consistency.
Fleeting emotions, labefaction to steam.

There is no need of a cry for help.
Loneliness conveys itself thus should be left alone.
So let sight enjoy what's left of this dream;
So let the body endure what's left to atone.

To be fated to separate ways is something we're aware of.
It's just hard to imagine something edible.
We should collect our thoughts and dispose of them.
It's always too late to mend something inevitable.

To love, to laugh, to get close, to feel.
Man's greatest needs yet we starve from them.
An insatiable appetite longing for infinity,
Is in simpler terms called true love.
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Posted 1/30/07
^ Mighty big words you've conjured there... Woah.
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Deviance wrote:

^ Mighty big words you've conjured there... Woah.


hmmm wahts wrong with using them...ah even here everyone thinks im a dictionary freak
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No, it's not that, I'm just amazed someone can actually use big words in a poem. I know a number of words exceeding the 8-letters-mark myself but I just can't place them in a poem.
Posted 1/30/07

Deviance wrote:

Now, no flames okay? I'm not a poet, but I do write poems every now and then.. :P
(If you could call mine poems...)

Eternal Wish

So the bells toll
Soon spins the spindle
To the wayfarer kindle
The cogs of fate call

Bounds break and times arise
Darkness’ fall and Light’s demise
Once the mark appears
Takes away and brings blood tears

For the splice of dreams come true
Placing together and going through
Reaching for what time creates
For all tomorrow waits

A wish to emerge and surface
To break all times and space

I've written a dozen free verse ones but it's not about love... oh well...


I think that's really good.

Posted 1/30/07
I have a question, do you guys just write them when your poems come to mind or do you take time thinking about them ?
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JessicaN2 wrote:

I have a question, do you guys just write them when your poems come to mind or do you take time thinking about them ?


gradual...sometimes when u get really inspired by something and cant share it to anyone else, thats when I turn to poetry lol....sometimes it just comes XD
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Stoney_Ducky wrote:

I dont think poems should be used on the one you love, If you really love somebody tell the person..

Ppl dont like pick up lines...

Most ppl here probarley just find the poems on google or another search machine, Sigh...


Well lets try to keep it on topic and post poems you made your self,,

I dont know if the author just want random poems, Somebody should make a description on this thread..

Stoney Ducky











wait wait wait....i dun think so my poems are publishd with my copyright
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Posted 1/30/07
Veo tu cara en las estrellas en el cielo
Siento tu beso en la lluvia
Recuerdas lo que me has prometido
Te lo suplico, levantate
No duermes más
Estuve esperando por dos años

elmar......

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Posted 1/30/07
wow i have a poem simlier to yours except shorter

the reason
the reason i love is cause your here on earth
the reason i breath is cause your next to me
the reason i eat is cause i know your eating
the reason im still alive is cause your still living
the reason i dont get sick is cause your my medicine
the reason i see is cause your beutiful
the reason i think is cause your so smart
the reason i hear is cause of your voice
the reason i wrote this is cause i love you

written by joshua doel chamorro

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Posted 1/30/07
ill post another

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Posted 1/30/07
heres another of mine
darkness


everyone has a drak side to complment there light side
but whys my dark side darker thatn others it dosent have a limit
it just keeps on devouring whats left of my light side
until nothings left but pain and fear and hatred
the only one that can save me is you your love
will free me from teh drakness or even it out but no matter what
ill love you even when im not myself youll be my dark angel the one to save me from my own fears and hatred

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Posted 1/30/07
Damn..! Why so sad

Aren;t there happy love poems?!
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Posted 1/30/07
yupers
if i was the sun i would aways be on you and noone else
if i was rain i would shower your enemys
if i was a earthquake i would destroy teh places you hate
if i was light i would alwalys light your path
but im not so the onlythings i can do for you are
love you
protect you
cheer you up or on
ill be your dark angel youll be my love taht im willing to die for
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Posted 1/30/07
that one isnt sad niether is this one

blue eyed angel


the first time i saw you you put me under your spell.
i couldnt resist you you were new i couldnotice your eyes were blue
whereever you went i watched you i dont think you ever noticed me you never looked back at me id turn around and hide my face
you were an angel whereevewr you went went i had to follow like a long game of follow the leader you were the leader i was the follower everyday i think of you
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