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Posted 4/28/08
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I will edit it again with pics appearing clearly. So how is it I know it's my first
Posted 4/28/08
Is it good as a starter?
Posted 4/28/08
It's a good beginin,....
so keep it up......I like yer way in drawin'
...yer way it has a lot of action,...
but ur problem is that u don't draw the char' from all directions...
and for the manga u have to use a special pen to paint it...I don't mean color..only lines >.<
I Know u got bored now .....lol
but I'm happy that I'm the first who gave my opinion.
Posted 4/28/08
Cuz no one would comment after you >_> this topic is dead ... no one take a look on it

But ppl when they read about hentai or sex they make like 1,000 pages -_-'
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Posted 4/28/08
hi peeps, i can't draw manga but i do write plot lines, i prefer writng romance comedy adventure and fantasy. a fantasy manga is great to write, there are just no limits to how far you go with it. Well i love my stories and people in my skwl always want to read them who knows maybe my friends can create the drawings for me heehee. ^O<
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Posted 4/28/08
it looks good, but you shouldn't draw on lined paper and you should ink your drawings so they stand out more :D

people probably aren't commenting much because there have been several topics like this already
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So it ain't nice ... I worked hard on it though.
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Posted 4/30/08
i upload my manga....but 2months they didnt approve
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coloured some more
haihz
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Posted 4/30/08

Rikix wrote:

My Manga Title

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I will edit it again with pics appearing clearly. So how is it I know it's my first



wow thats nice you are talented...
Posted 4/30/08
waw .. nakanaks ! ka-bilib 'to.
nyahaha. :))
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Posted 4/30/08

Rikix wrote:

My Manga Title

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I will edit it again with pics appearing clearly. So how is it I know it's my first


Keep drawing, you can get better. btw, you got some familiar-ish looking eyes on the fifth page. at least you got that. X3


kambing123 wrote:

i upload my manga....but 2months they didnt approve
= =..
coloured some more
haihz


I wanna see. ^_^
Posted 4/30/08
Yeah Halo plz tell me my mistakes in the drawing I wanna get better .. the only problem I know is .. I dunno the manga basics or w/e is called like the dividing pages and what type of box ..blah blah XD
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Posted 4/30/08
Unfortunately, I can't really see the pages very clearly but that's alright. I noticed when your manga continues, your paneling went more and more compressed. The first page was good there. Maybe give a little more setting around the characters to tell where they are.

While I was turning my head to the side like eating a taco, I can see that you can get better on perspectives in the classroom.

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