Post Reply GUNDAM VENGEANCE
Posted 4/28/08 , edited 5/27/08

INTRO
Gundam Vengeance is a story about a mysterious man who goes by the name of Vincent. Vincent is the illegitimate son of a legendary gundam meister, his existence is the result of a one night stand at a night club. he is living a life of drugs,drink and loose women. vincent was approached by the united earths nations to pilot one of there powerful mobile suits but vincent agrees to pilot the mobile suit provided they pay him a million dollars. vincent has no skill when it comes to piloting a mobile suit but the mobile suits power makes up for that. as the story goes on vincent starts to find another motive for piloting a mobile suit besides money. vincent will pilot the suit to settle a personal score with his father and to protect the life of a women.



GUNDAM VENGENCE NOVEL PART 1 THE ORIGIN OF VENGEANCE


GUNDAM VENGEANCE PART 2 VINCENT


GUNDAM VENGEANCE PART 3 LEGACY


Posted 4/28/08 , edited 4/28/08
Hey guys it would be really cool if u could find the time to check out my novel. also if it isn't pushing my luck can u plz give me some feed back on it? it would be greatly appreciated if u do so. u can leave me feed back here or u can either leave me a comment or pm whatever way u like. i accept good and bad feedback as long as its honest. another thing guys feel free to buddy me.
Posted 4/29/08
hey lockon a amazing story.... the story is interesting and im looking foward to the part 4 keep on the gd work!!.....and also the gundam looks great, it looks like if its using trans am....
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Posted 5/24/08
Nice story
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Posted 5/26/08
Wow really creative It be better if you explained in more detail how the moon military conquered earth like a new weapon or some Godlike Gundam ... I feel the intro is the most important part if you don't captivate and grab the audience attention people wont read. Its good story lockon101 hope to read more :)


Posted 5/27/08 , edited 5/27/08
thanks 4 the advice jim and jason i agree with ya writeing a story is one thing but getting ppl to read it is another thing lol thats y i added this pic which i found on google with my title on here to draw ppl in. i thing i'll write some kind of short description of the story on this forum 2
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