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Posted 4/28/08
Why must you always be so dark
Is there no light
Is hope completely lost
For those with sins and darken hearts

Must there always be despair
Is that really all that's left
A broken path
And one more day

Has darkness really turned your heart to stone
Can life really be so spiteful to turn so bleak
Is there no rainbow on the other side
Is facelessness all that you’ve become

Why can’t you laugh and laugh for real
Why must you wait for someone else to heal
The broken soul
That once was full

Why are you holding on so dear
To the darkness that would hold your soul
Forsaking a brighter day
Forsaking the brighter way

Why can’t you just be grateful
For an existence that has no match
A brilliant future which some don’t have
A second chance in a world that’s cruel

Let go of all your darkness
It’s time has ended
And yours just began

Run out and scream
Sing and shine
Take each block with a ray of light
Tear down all the walls
And steal some time to heal

Then when all is said and done
Turn you face and engulf the sun
And when you do remember
How lucky you’ve become


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Posted 4/29/08

Tsukirena wrote:

Why must you always be so dark
Is there no light
Is hope completely lost
For those with sins and darken hearts

Must there always be despair
Is that really all that's left
A broken path
And one more day

Has darkness really turned your heart to stone
Can life really be so spiteful to turn so bleak
Is there no rainbow on the other side
Is facelessness all that you’ve become

Why can’t you laugh and laugh for real
Why must you wait for someone else to heal
The broken soul
That once was full

Why are you holding on so dear
To the darkness that would hold your soul
Forsaking a brighter day
Forsaking the brighter way

Why can’t you just be grateful
For an existence that has no match
A brilliant future which some don’t have
A second chance in a world that’s cruel

Let go of all your darkness
It’s time has ended
And yours just began

Run out and scream
Sing and shine
Take each block with a ray of light
Tear down all the walls
And steal some time to heal

Then when all is said and done
Turn you face and engulf the sun
And when you do remember
How lucky you’ve become




WoW I really love this poem <3 Im going to fav this for sure ;)
its really great how you writed it
Posted 4/30/08
Great poem X3, expertly written!
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Posted 4/30/08
thanks so much
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