Create Your Own Anime Story
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Posted 1/23/07
title.overlord
characters:rim(main character)joey,yabon,dankuo,(friends)neoni,dana,(girls)roca(dad)
deoni(moom)ceeshp(rim's,joey's,yabon,dankuo's and roca's race

a movie story=ep.1:roca's death.
one night a recon appeard in a ship.this night rim was 5 years old with deoni.
they had a great time with each other.roca's friends had died so only the captain and the 2 friends are alive.they trained to defeat zora one of the recon's and the king.
he killed roca's friends.rim has abbility to sence his dad.back at planet ceeshp roca spotted zora.he tried to defeat him but couldn't land one singe scratch on zora.his son was staying outside waiting for his dad to come back.the captain and roca's friends were killed!!roca transformed into a super ceeshp.and only landed 10 punches on his face but did had affect.zora blasted his chest and heart and roca had his death.
rim found out that roca was dead.then told his:mommy daddy's dead.oh dear said rim's mom.(deoni)deoni was crying for 1 hour cuz roca was dead.the end!!!
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28 / M / Cheese land (aka...
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Posted 1/23/07
Don't quit your day job.

Also, if your really interested in writing your own story, take it seriously. Take some time on it. Don't rush it so much.

Also, use proper grammar. It makes things much easier to read.

Learn to spell too.
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Posted 1/23/07
wow.............
uh no comment
I could probably turn that into a good story with some work.... it sounds interesting but I'm working on a story of my own
do you actually write stories or was that something you just made up for a post???
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Posted 1/24/07
I try to write stories.....but vahner ends up just taking and making them like ten trillion times better ....but its coool though i still get to animate the stories we make lol.
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Posted 1/24/07
There was already a thread like this.
http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=1301&pg=0

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