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Posted 4/29/08 , edited 10/8/08
Just add in your own short stories, whatever they might be

Also post links to stories that are on other sights :)

It can be anything:
- fantasy
- adventure
- anime
- romance
- mystery

Let your creative side out
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Posted 4/29/08 , edited 4/29/08
Like how short? Here's a really short yet sorrowful tale of a young boy who one day found himself unable to post any more threads....

It start with a boy, sent home from school for being too sick, vomiting and coughing uncontrollably. The boy quickly gets bored once at home, being not really that sick, and decides to spread hilarity to the internet, because the internet is his friend. He has many other friends though. He does, I'm serious. He's like super popular. Anyway, this kid is talking to this girl about sexual things and how they should just be friend or some shit, he's lost interest, because the internet is waiting for his genius to be unleashed. So he begins to make threads about seemingly pointless topics, which are actually pointless, but provide much lulz for said boy because other people post on them, and that's somehow funny to this weird kid. He continues to make these threads, while making card houses, which fall over when he coughs. This, combined with the fact that he soon finds his creative genius cut off because he can't post more than a certain amount of threads in one day, angers the kid kind of a little bit, and he hijacks other threads. It's all really boring, so the kid writes about the whole ordeal, because he's so bored. Big brother is on, and travis sounds so stupid (australian big brother) not that the kid is watching, coz he's in his room.

And man, that kid just saved your thread. Were was it? Gone, that's where.
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Posted 4/29/08
Ummm, can't seem to think of one.
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okay i saw guys is walking
then he die is dead in hell
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It's about a fallen angel who lands in a very poor comunity from heaven. Unable to use any of his angelic powers besides being able to see human's ages and names he sets out to try and get back into heaven. After meeting with a small boy and his mother god sends him a vision about the Pyro gang and how in three weeks they will loot and kill everyone in the community. The angel who now goes by the name Helios remebers his old mortal life and tries to help the community. He meets a young girl and become smitten. Helios and the girl fall in love and one day while up top of a hill a metor hits the earth. In the large crater is the Sword of paradise, the strongest weapon in heaven. Once Helios the only one able to touch the sword grabs the hilt, he recieves another message from god. Helios now had his powers back to defend and help the town. He grabs the girl who's name is Isabella Smilth and they fly across the town to her house and he tells her all about him. At 3 a.m the Pryo gang attacks and Helios singlehandly destroyed a large group of cars with a swing by the blade. The leader who gets close to hitting him is killed when the sword strikes his heart and Helios screamed "Let thy soul be purged to hell!" The leader crumples to ashes and Helios sees Isabella who was shot lying against the wall. She and him begin to talk as she suffers through the pain and Helios tells her all about heaven. Isabella soon dies leaving Helios in sadness. He walks to the top of the hill before saying goodbye to everyone. He had done his job and so he plunges the sword into his chest and the sword glows and his body turns to stone and crumbles to ash. The story concludes with Isabella and Helios talking to each other over a cup of coffee and Isabella said "I had the weirdest dream last night." They walk out of the shop and are in a paradise with such beauty that Isabella cries. Helios who saved thousands ranked up to Arch Angel but declined and the story ends with Isabella and Helios flying higher into heaven while Isabella sing a sacred song causing all the water in heaven to become clear and calm like glass. Helios wings glow and he begins to play a flute. In the kingdom of Heaven God says "Helios, you did good and here is your eternal rest."

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Posted 4/30/08
This middle-aged man was lonely. One day a miracle happened. He got a carebear for his birthday. And then he lived happily ever after.
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Here's Tragedy of an Angel's Feather that I wrote recently:
There she was flying in the air. Angel wings sprouted from her back pure as snow and helped her glide across the blue skies. Golden hair danced around her as the wind brushed it. Her strapless white gown ruffled in the wind. It was a beautiful day with the sun complimenting her hair and the spark of the sea in her eyes. Everything was as perfect as a fairytale.
Everything was supposed to be perfect until he came. He represented the darkness while she was light. He brought oblivion and destruction while she brought tranquility and happiness. The once calm sea below her turned into a vicious monster that started snapping its jaw, trying to swallow her whole. Thunder roared like a huge beast and flashes of lightning the only source of light now.
The Angel’s bright face had turned gloomy and her eyes full of fear. She dodged as many thunderbolts as she flew for her life. Dodge to the left! Dodge to the right! Zoom forward at a dangerous speed. Her wings screamed to stop and her fear turned to haste as she continued on, not stopping for it would mean the end. She knew that one hit would kill her.
The thunder increased as the rain fell down heavily on the Angel’s back like pebbles. The rain on her back was too much and it was making her descend towards the sea. The rain became her weakness as it clouded her vision and decreased her speed drastically. More water began to splash upon her, but this time it was from the sea as she was going down closer to it.
Her wet gown and hair dragged her even more below. The sea pulled at her legs, dragging her down below the surface like a hungry beast. She struggled and tried to grab the air but to no avail. Her wings failed her and were now useless. She surfaced up for oxygen a few times but the seas strength was much greater and dragged her below the surface. She couldn’t hold her breath any longer and the beatings of the sea made it harder. Her lungs began to burn hotter than fire as they screamed for oxygen. She let the air out for she was at her limits and closed her eyes as the sea carried her away to the bottom of the ocean.
The darkness has won and the light has failed. No more shall Angel’s rise. No more shall there be tranquility or balance. He had won and he will rule the fate of the world. War will break out and people will suffer. The sun will turn red and the sky will cry. There will always still be hope as one feather remains. That one single feather may be the last hope for the human beings to bring back tranquility to Earth.
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Posted 5/1/08
once apon a time there was a kid who posts ridiculos forums and got banned the end
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Posted 5/7/08

another day! another story!
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Once upon a time, in a far far country called Grindafjurdajur, lived a happy sheep couple.
The male sheep was painted blue and the female was white.
One day the female sheep got a blue spot on her back and a few months later a baby lamb was born...
The baby lamb was not an ordinary lamb...no...that thing had supernatural powers!

We call him now....


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Posted 5/7/08 , edited 8/23/08
...the bunny died...and was cooked for dinner...by a cow...who died of fatness...and then was eaten by humans...
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Posted 5/7/08
Once there was an old man
Who lived in a shoe
He wonder if he can bake
But yet it was burnt like you!

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Posted 5/7/08
This one time at band camp...
Nah...you don't wanna go there...

Umm ok, This one time I heard this ringing, and it just kept ringing and ringing and ringing, I looked everywhere for the ringing...maybe it was a phone...but it kept ringing and like ringing...and you know what? I never found it.

The end.

P.S I am more creative than that. I just don't want to make my talents public





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Posted 5/7/08
people! STOP IN UR TRAX!

don't help this guy, probably just getting ideas for english class

my cuz does this all the time, (he's chinese) and he heard the boy who cries wolf and was going to use it for his "original" short story for english..cuz he never heard it before and he thought it was interesting..i almost peed myself but i told him not to at the end.
Posted 5/7/08

faeriedustgrl wrote:

people! STOP IN UR TRAX!

don't help this guy, probably just getting ideas for english class

my cuz does this all the time, (he's chinese) and he heard the boy who cries wolf and was going to use it for his "original" short story for english..cuz he never heard it before and he thought it was interesting..i almost peed myself but i told him not to at the end.


If thats true, the kid's very good at finding ways of half arsing stuff (don't mean that in a bad way, infact, half arsing is sometimes an advantage)

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