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there was a man name Bryan, Bryan is married with no kids, on their 5th anniversary, Bryan forgot. His wife was furious and told him that when she wakes up the next morning there better be something in the driveway that goes from 0 to 200 in 6 seconds. The next morning his wife woke up and was surprise that there was a gift wrapped sitting on the driveway. She took it inside the house and opened it and it was a weigh scale. 3 days later Bryan went missing and is still missing till this day.

THE END
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If anyone who reads this wants to read more send me a pm. Its taken from my story " Past the Stars "

They stood a good couple of yards away, backs turned. How did they make it here, after all the time together? This thought was on both their minds as they slowly turned. Abel almost cried at his best friend and worst enimies appearance. The pain was evident in his body. Cains left hand was missing from their last fight, his right eye gone. And now he was as tatered and beaten as abel was himself. In his right hand pointed the gun, the only means of producing the pain onto others that he craved, that he needed. Abel held his gun in his left hand, his eyes not filled with the rage that his former best friends were. The fire in the cathedral raged around them, but to the two young men it was no more than a dream.
" Cain... you're my best friend, but I will not allow you to kill anymore people. I don't do this for revenge for Mary's life, I dont do this to avenge all the people you've hurt...i do it because you're my best friend, you're a brother to me...and I love you."
" Abel...I need to kill. This life is nothing but pain, don't you see. The world laughs while I hurt, and I...I can't stand it, I must destroy it!"
" I dont want your hands to be stained with blood anymore, Cain. Killing is wrong, and I'll do whatever I can to stop you from killing anymore. I want you to have a peaceful life!"
"Enough! DIE!"
They fired, each aiming and hitting their target...

Cain looked at his right hand as it dropped the gun. Abels shot had hit in the right spot, shattering and mangling it. Cain's shot his its mark too, square in Abel's chest. Looking down at his hand, then back to his dying friend, Cain's eyes seemed unclouded again, as they were five years ago.
Abel smiled, blood pouring from his wounds and mouth. " There...it hurt...but now, you can never use that hand again...your free, you cant hurt anymore peop..." the brunette never finished, the life leaving his gentle eyes as he fell...
For the first time in years, Cain could feel his heart, and as the tears fell from his eyes he new it was breaking. His best friend had saved him with his death, had somehow reached past the ice that filled his heart to the child he was when they first met.
In that night, Abel saved his best friend.
In that night, Cain doth slay Abel...

Two years later, Cain died peacefully in his sleep. He was well known, not as a criminal anymore, but as a man who dedicated his last remaining years to helping life...as his best friend did. He was buried next to Abel and Mary's graves, and one could tell by the way stars gleamed that day that the three friends were together again, somewhere past the stars.
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Posted 5/7/08

faeriedustgrl wrote:

people! STOP IN UR TRAX!

don't help this guy, probably just getting ideas for english class

my cuz does this all the time, (he's chinese) and he heard the boy who cries wolf and was going to use it for his "original" short story for english..cuz he never heard it before and he thought it was interesting..i almost peed myself but i told him not to at the end.


im pretty damn sure he's just seein how many people hav short stories or are interested in writin them ^^
im also pretty certain he can write his own.
Bt nehoo, i can understand ur concern, there r sum total freaks on th internet lol
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Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there
I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called Bel Air

In west Philadelphia born and raised
On the playground was where I spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shootin some b-ball outside of the school
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Startin making trouble in my neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my mom got scared
She said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air'

I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she packed my suite case and send me on my way
She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket.
I put my walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'.

First class, yo this is bad
Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass.
Is this what the people of Bel-Air Living like?
Hmmmmm this might be alright.

But wait I hear there're prissy, wine all that
Is Bel-Air the type of place they send this cool cat?
I don't think sow
I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air

Well, the plane landed and when I came out
There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out
I ain't trying to get arrested
I just got here
I sprang with the quickness like lightening, disappeared

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say this cab is rare
But I thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air
Posted 5/7/08
Once apon a time.... something happened.... everyone died.... the end...
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Once upon a time in space, there was a guy named shinji.
He loves sushi that's why he created the world called crunchyroll...

***to be continued
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faeriedustgrl wrote:

people! STOP IN UR TRAX!

don't help this guy, probably just getting ideas for english class

my cuz does this all the time, (he's chinese) and he heard the boy who cries wolf and was going to use it for his "original" short story for english..cuz he never heard it before and he thought it was interesting..i almost peed myself but i told him not to at the end.




Lol, i could see your point, but im one of the top in my English class lol.
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Posted 5/9/08

Gomix wrote:

there was a man name Bryan, Bryan is married with no kids, on their 5th anniversary, Bryan forgot. His wife was furious and told him that when she wakes up the next morning there better be something in the driveway that goes from 0 to 200 in 6 seconds. The next morning his wife woke up and was surprise that there was a gift wrapped sitting on the driveway. She took it inside the house and opened it and it was a weigh scale. 3 days later Bryan went missing and is still missing till this day.

THE END


somehow i find that amusing cuz my friends name is bryan and he's gay....lol
but i dont get what u meant that goes from 0 to 200 in 6 seconds?

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Posted 5/9/08

DRO1 wrote:

Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there
I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called Bel Air

In west Philadelphia born and raised
On the playground was where I spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shootin some b-ball outside of the school
When a couple of guys
Who were up to no good
Startin making trouble in my neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my mom got scared
She said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air'

I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she packed my suite case and send me on my way
She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket.
I put my walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'.

First class, yo this is bad
Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass.
Is this what the people of Bel-Air Living like?
Hmmmmm this might be alright.

But wait I hear there're prissy, wine all that
Is Bel-Air the type of place they send this cool cat?
I don't think sow
I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air

Well, the plane landed and when I came out
There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out
I ain't trying to get arrested
I just got here
I sprang with the quickness like lightening, disappeared

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say this cab is rare
But I thought 'Now forget it' - 'Yo homes to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air



omg nice, wow *claps* dude that is so "orginal", lol............
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There were once 3 men; a mage, a swordsman and an archer. They were travelling through a rain forest when they suddenly came to a waterfall with an old priest standing beside it. The priest tells them, "If you let me bless you and you jump off this waterfall you can become anything you want.

The mage agreed to go first. The priest blessed him, he jumped off the waterfall and said, "LION!" The mage turned into a lion and ran off into the jungle.

Next, was the swordsman. He too was blessed by the priest. He then jumped off the waterfall and said, "TIGER!" The swordsman turned into a tiger and ran off into the jungle.

Finally, it was the archer's turn. The priest blessed him and he climbed to the top of the waterfall. However, he was scared of heights. As he stood at the top of the waterfall he gazed down and his legs began to shake. He decided not to jump, but as he started to walk away a gust of wind blew him off the cliff and he shouted...

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Gomix wrote:

but i dont get what u meant that goes from 0 to 200 in 6 seconds?






Saying shes fat
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Once upon a time, a bored boy called ''hollow-soull'' decides to make a boring game called, ''short story''. The End.
Posted 10/9/08
once upon a time a nameless kid was at the point of his life where he's so misrable and it all changed when he won $ 999 billion.. out of no where.. and after that it seems that all the luck of the world is in his side.. he got married to hot wife ahs children became famous.. earned more money until the day he died.. THE END..
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here's one.

there was this girl crazy over this celebrity.
she loved him but he doesn't even know she
exist. one day she couldnt take it anymore
so took a trip to visit him and meet him in
person. she finally did meet him, but he
was with a girl. she was so mad, she stalked
the her celeb crush all day. at the end of the
night she decided they should be together,but
there was no way. so what she did was she
acted like she was a worker in the hotel he
stayed him, and went up to him and took
him by surprise with a knife, stabbed him in
the heart and he died, she then stabbed her
heart and died together. she did it because it
was the only way they could be together.

anywho whatever! haha i didnt want to write
a long story. haha. here goes a lame one! lol
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