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Posted 4/29/08 , edited 4/29/08
This is an old idea of mines that I had one day. ^__^ Just randomly popped into my head and I decided to write. Still need to make a continuation to it, but eventually I shall.

As the child sat there, tied to that uncomfortable chair, watching, waiting for the next move, he knew there was no survival.........not for him.....and not for his poor mother.....he saw what they did......how they pierced through her skin, making those big gaping holes through her body.....her clothes ripped into shreds........but what could he have done? nothing......absolutely nothing.....now the man approached him, with a needle and a thread in his hand.
"Don't worry, this will all be over soon..." One of the men grabbed his face tightly, while the other sowed away his mouth......and his eyelids.......the mother screamed in terror, asking what have they done to her baby? but all she heard were loud, muffled screams.....sad screams really, nothing enjoyable.....the two men laughed and turned to her now....
"It's your turn, sweety......" The man with the needle sowed her fingers together, her legs together and gouged out her eyeballs with a tooth pick...making sure the eye socket came out slowly and as agonizing as possible.............

The boy struggled to get out, but no luck…….. He knew that she was still alive, because he could hear her rustling about….hearing her move, and trying to yell, but couldn’t…..
“What should we do now?” the man was asking the other……
“Well what else is there to do?” He pondered, while fidgeting with his pocket knife.
“Hey……can I borrow that?” His name was Alex, because telling on his shirt, it was a mechanics shirt…so with that, there is more evidence to the crime…
“Oh this?” The other man started to play with it in his hand…..”For what?”
“ Well, let’s have some more fun! I’m bored….they aren’t really enjoyable…they don’t do much..” He kicked the lady and she yelped a bit….the boy was crying, and they could see tears of blood trickling down his face…..the man handed him the pocket knife and just leaned on the wall to watch…
“Oh, I know….” Alex went to the mother’s boy and kneeled down next to her…..he caressed her face, and she turned away….
“Such a pretty face of yours…” he brang out the pocket knife and opened up her mouth…She was squirming and screaming at the top of her lungs….She knew what was going to happen next…
“Oh, don’t cry sweety…..it’ll be over before you say ‘help”…..He let out a silent chuckle and started to cut some skin from her lips…and then progressed to her cheeks…..and then to her forehead….he made sure she was like a work of art…for everyone to see…..then, he grabbed hold of her chin and opened up her mouth once again…..he put in his fingers and pulled out her tongue…..She tried to bite back, but he just pressed slightly on her forehead, which was in pieces and blood falling down her face….She cried and kicked, but the boy across from her was just twisting and turning his face….not knowing what was happening….then a sudden gush was heard…..he actually did it…he cut off her tongue….but it didn’t seem to satisfy him enough…so he started to pick at her teeth, one by one……….She just couldn’t take it anymore …the agonizing pain, the torture….what did she do to deserve this?
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Posted 4/29/08
Heh heh heh..... you know... one of my story ideas involved Madness and the insane torture of several victims.

And sewing was going to be one of these.

But then I decided "Eh. Another time I suppose"
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Sewing is fun...... ^___^ Not to make it seem like in a total psychopathic way. Just in stories it makes it so interesting. Sometimes fun, other times just funny. ^___^ Yush, a twisted mind I haves, but it's controlled none the less. But i'm still trying to figure out a better way of working around these stories...something that catches the viewers attention more...something...unexpected, if you will. But usually my mind works best when either pressured, or needing to keep myself preocupied. ^____^
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Posted 4/30/08
NOT AS GRAPHIC? O_O;; that was sickiningly awesome!
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Posted 5/1/08
*laughs* Well I didn't think it was graphic. ^__^; But eh, I think it's just interesting. >=D and now...ONWARD TO OTHER BUSINESSES!!!! XD
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