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Part of a story.... Please read and comment
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Posted 4/30/08
It would be interesting to those who are into that genre, but I suggest you add some spaces.

Where do you plan to post this?
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hmm if you would like to continue, I suggest that you make a page in your profile, so that we could read it easily, and yes please continue
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coolness a little on the freaky side but it awesome great job! you should definetly continue it! good luck! (and try not to make it toooo bloody...^.^)
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callmejenny wrote:

from what anime is this? =]
or is it a fanfic? =]


"it's PURELY fan fic. I already wrote 160 pages of IT... I just want your opinions on the certain parts


Guys, if u want me to write the continuation(which is full of fighting) just tell me

I put the link on my profile"


Read please
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22 / M / Philippines, Luzo...
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Posted 4/30/08
Ouch! I think It went straight to my heart!
Continue on.
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Posted 4/30/08

callmejenny wrote:

from what anime is this? =]
or is it a fanfic? =]


This isnt fanfic, I made it all by myself this is an original

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Posted 4/30/08

OohJimmy wrote:


callmejenny wrote:

from what anime is this? =]
or is it a fanfic? =]


"it's PURELY fan fic. I already wrote 160 pages of IT... I just want your opinions on the certain parts


Guys, if u want me to write the continuation(which is full of fighting) just tell me

I put the link on my profile"


Read please

ummmm... sorry about that... I didnt know the meaning of fan fic..... a friend just told me what it meant.... and well...
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damn...............that was so so............plssss continue.....trhen i'll continue what i was about to say................hehehehehe
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heshiron wrote:


OohJimmy wrote:


callmejenny wrote:

from what anime is this? =]
or is it a fanfic? =]


"it's PURELY fan fic. I already wrote 160 pages of IT... I just want your opinions on the certain parts


Guys, if u want me to write the continuation(which is full of fighting) just tell me

I put the link on my profile"


Read please

ummmm... sorry about that... I didnt know the meaning of fan fic..... a friend just told me what it meant.... and well...


lol~! hahas
that's kei =] well, its a good story =] cant wait to read the next one :]]

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Jenny30 wrote:

ne ne, hahas... is this a fanfic?
hmmm, imma like to know what happen next pls XD



its not fanfic, I already have the continuation.

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Posted 5/1/08

kenwil wrote:

hmm if you would like to continue, I suggest that you make a page in your profile, so that we could read it easily, and yes please continue




http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-186541/Part-of-the-Story-2-Please-read-and-comment.html


here is the continuation if you want to read it... LOL
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26 / M / Las Islas Filipinas
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Posted 5/1/08
This is pretty good, but not something I'd write.

The mood was sort of stirred because I was listening to a semi-tragic tune.
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Posted 5/1/08
Threads like these don't belong on this forum, we don't have a section for Written Works. So please don't continue submitting them here.

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