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Posted 8/16/08

xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Inspired by the song Out of Reach by Gabrielle.

10 years ago~
"Ka-chan! Over here! Over here!" called a little girl with 2 pigtails.
"Ange!" called back a little boy smiling cheerfully at the little girl.
They were both on top of a big hill.
"Look, look!" the little girl pulled on the little boy's sleeve. "Isn't it beautiful!"
The little girl pointed at a sunset. The sky is not full with the colors orange, yellow and red.
"Ah, it is." said the little boy looking at the sky also.
"Ne ne, Ka-chan! Want to come again tomorrow?" asked the little girl smiling at the little boy.
The little boy turned back to the little girl and nodded.
6 years ago~
"Gomen Kai. Were you waiting long?" asked a 11 year old girl name Angel, wear her outdoor shoes.
"No, i just got out. How was Choir Class?" asked the 11 year old boy name Kai.
"It was great! Sensei that i will have a solo part during the Christmas Party!" exclaimed Angel.
"That's great to hear. I bet your really excited." smiled Kai.
"Yup! I am so excited!" Angel walked out of the school building with Kai walking right besides her.
4 years ago~
"Hey Kai!" Angel ran up to Kai who was just getting out if his first period class and heading towards his second.
Kai turned around not saying andything as Angel stopped in front of him panting.
"You want to walk home together today? You dont have basketball practice today right? Why dont we walk home together today." Angel smilied cheerfully at Kai.
Kai just stared at Angel and turned back to proceed to his class, but he paused for a moment and said, "I got something to do today." and he left for his class.
Angel stands there for a while thinking, "Did i do somthing wrong?" then she also left for her second period class.
2 years ago~
Angel's POV
"Ow." I rubbed my sore arm. Today in gym class we had to play volleyball. And my best friend Mimi and Nana was in my team and Kai. We won in the end, thanks to Mimi, since she was in the school's volleyball team. But that wasnt the worst part, the worst part was after the game.
Flashbacks~
"Hey Kai!" I caught Kai just right after the game ended and sensei declared us the winner. I really wanted to talk to Kai.
Kai ignored me and kept walking heading towards to locker rooms.
"Stop!" I reached for his arm and grabbed onto it and turned him to face me. "Why are you avoiding me!" I demanded as tears treaten to come out.
For the first time in Angel's life she actaully was scared of Kai.
"DO NOT TOUCH ME!" Kai said angrily. He fling his arm and my arm hit the cemment.
End of Flashbacks~
I went to the nurse's office so i can get my arm treated. When i went in there was no one in sight. I sighed and walked towards on of the beds and laid down. I stared at the cealing and the my eyes got blurry and tears slide down the corners of my house.
"Baka Kai." i wispered as i put my bruised arm on top of my eyes.
"Watashi Kai no goto suki." I was suprised at what i just said.
Then without knowing it, more tears came out.
"Why can't i reach you at all? Why are you so-so out of reach?"
I did not go to class, because if i did i will see him. I stayed at the nurse's office until school was over, until sunset came, until i no long have my love.
Present~
Angel's POV
It's been only a year since i left my hometown. Where all my happy memeries of Kai are and all my sad memories of him. Today is my very first vist back after a whole year. Nothing much has changed over the year. Mimi was recruited to represent Japan in the Oylimpics Volleyball team. Nana became a clother designer/creator, she now has her own clothing line. And i have became a novelist. I know, im suprised myself. I thought i wanted to become a singer, but i ended up becoming a novelist. Oh and Kai....hmmm how do i say this....Well he went to Tokyo U and is now a famous Basketball Player overseas. I still wonder how us being childhood friend, to complete strangers. Im just a normal writer and he is a famous Basketball Player...no wonder...because he is always out of reach....


This was kinda of a rush...so i hope you guys like it!


Hey yuki! I know that this section is for sad stories, and this one is great, but if u invented them then put them on the free stories section... ^_^ thanks and sorry for bothering @_@
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Posted 8/16/08

Lolle wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Inspired by the song Out of Reach by Gabrielle.

10 years ago~
"Ka-chan! Over here! Over here!" called a little girl with 2 pigtails.
"Ange!" called back a little boy smiling cheerfully at the little girl.
They were both on top of a big hill.
"Look, look!" the little girl pulled on the little boy's sleeve. "Isn't it beautiful!"
The little girl pointed at a sunset. The sky is not full with the colors orange, yellow and red.
"Ah, it is." said the little boy looking at the sky also.
"Ne ne, Ka-chan! Want to come again tomorrow?" asked the little girl smiling at the little boy.
The little boy turned back to the little girl and nodded.
6 years ago~
"Gomen Kai. Were you waiting long?" asked a 11 year old girl name Angel, wear her outdoor shoes.
"No, i just got out. How was Choir Class?" asked the 11 year old boy name Kai.
"It was great! Sensei that i will have a solo part during the Christmas Party!" exclaimed Angel.
"That's great to hear. I bet your really excited." smiled Kai.
"Yup! I am so excited!" Angel walked out of the school building with Kai walking right besides her.
4 years ago~
"Hey Kai!" Angel ran up to Kai who was just getting out if his first period class and heading towards his second.
Kai turned around not saying andything as Angel stopped in front of him panting.
"You want to walk home together today? You dont have basketball practice today right? Why dont we walk home together today." Angel smilied cheerfully at Kai.
Kai just stared at Angel and turned back to proceed to his class, but he paused for a moment and said, "I got something to do today." and he left for his class.
Angel stands there for a while thinking, "Did i do somthing wrong?" then she also left for her second period class.
2 years ago~
Angel's POV
"Ow." I rubbed my sore arm. Today in gym class we had to play volleyball. And my best friend Mimi and Nana was in my team and Kai. We won in the end, thanks to Mimi, since she was in the school's volleyball team. But that wasnt the worst part, the worst part was after the game.
Flashbacks~
"Hey Kai!" I caught Kai just right after the game ended and sensei declared us the winner. I really wanted to talk to Kai.
Kai ignored me and kept walking heading towards to locker rooms.
"Stop!" I reached for his arm and grabbed onto it and turned him to face me. "Why are you avoiding me!" I demanded as tears treaten to come out.
For the first time in Angel's life she actaully was scared of Kai.
"DO NOT TOUCH ME!" Kai said angrily. He fling his arm and my arm hit the cemment.
End of Flashbacks~
I went to the nurse's office so i can get my arm treated. When i went in there was no one in sight. I sighed and walked towards on of the beds and laid down. I stared at the cealing and the my eyes got blurry and tears slide down the corners of my house.
"Baka Kai." i wispered as i put my bruised arm on top of my eyes.
"Watashi Kai no goto suki." I was suprised at what i just said.
Then without knowing it, more tears came out.
"Why can't i reach you at all? Why are you so-so out of reach?"
I did not go to class, because if i did i will see him. I stayed at the nurse's office until school was over, until sunset came, until i no long have my love.
Present~
Angel's POV
It's been only a year since i left my hometown. Where all my happy memeries of Kai are and all my sad memories of him. Today is my very first vist back after a whole year. Nothing much has changed over the year. Mimi was recruited to represent Japan in the Oylimpics Volleyball team. Nana became a clother designer/creator, she now has her own clothing line. And i have became a novelist. I know, im suprised myself. I thought i wanted to become a singer, but i ended up becoming a novelist. Oh and Kai....hmmm how do i say this....Well he went to Tokyo U and is now a famous Basketball Player overseas. I still wonder how us being childhood friend, to complete strangers. Im just a normal writer and he is a famous Basketball Player...no wonder...because he is always out of reach....


This was kinda of a rush...so i hope you guys like it!


Hey yuki! I know that this section is for sad stories, and this one is great, but if u invented them then put them on the free stories section... ^_^ thanks and sorry for bothering @_@


soo i have to put this one there and my other one too?
Posted 8/17/08

xXyuki202Xx wrote:


Lolle wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Inspired by the song Out of Reach by Gabrielle.

......

This was kinda of a rush...so i hope you guys like it!


Hey yuki! I know that this section is for sad stories, and this one is great, but if u invented them then put them on the free stories section... ^_^ thanks and sorry for bothering @_@


soo i have to put this one there and my other one too?

no don't worry, leave this ones in this section, the next stories u ll write put them on the right section. bye and thanks for your stories, I like them very much ^_^
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Posted 8/17/08

Lolle wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:


Lolle wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Inspired by the song Out of Reach by Gabrielle.

......

This was kinda of a rush...so i hope you guys like it!


Hey yuki! I know that this section is for sad stories, and this one is great, but if u invented them then put them on the free stories section... ^_^ thanks and sorry for bothering @_@


soo i have to put this one there and my other one too?

no don't worry, leave this ones in this section, the next stories u ll write put them on the right section. bye and thanks for your stories, I like them very much ^_^


oh okay! thanks for telling me! and thanks for reading my stories! XD
Posted 8/24/08
This is the story of a very sickly man named George. He was a healthy man approaching seniority but sadly had a devastating stroke. With his children well grown and settled in different states the only person he could rely on was his wife, Sara. She was very healthy compared to her husband and was surprisingly mobile for her age whereas her husband who walks with a cane. So with George bedridden Sara had to nurse him back to full health. She could have hired a nurse but her determination wouldn't allow help from anyone.

It was a difficult experience for her, but she was successful. George was healthy again and it brought eternal joy to this elderly couple. So on one average Sunday mourning they decide to plant flowers. They spend the entire day engulfing their back yard with petunias, daises, roses, and sun flowers. When those flowers fully bloomed it made an average backyard look like the Garden Of Eden. However as it started to get cold the flowers started to die and Sara was starting to stray from her usual self. She couldn't sleep, was developing excruciating joint pain (which was later diagnosed as arthritus), and couldn't eat. Suddenly on one seemingly average wednesday mourning as George awoke to the early morning sun, he turns over to see his wife motionless. He then rests his hand on her cheek to find it frightfully cold.

He then calls the an ambulance, however when they arrive they were sad to admit that Sara was already dead. On September 6th 2000, Sara was pronounced dead in her NY home. Doctors stated her death was because of natural causes. George was heart broken. He was a man who's fufilled his duties to this life and wished that he and his wife could died together but it didn't come true.

Now at this current day of age George is surprisingly still alive well over 90 years of age. His son bought a house close by and checks on him periodically. All of the flowers in the back yard have been dead for many years, moreover it hasn't been touched in the same amount of years. So George's son had to ask " Why won't you let me into the backyard" and George responded " Because your Mother wouldn't want you stepping on her flowers".
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here`s my sad story..

there was once a girl named, Arielle..
she have good clothes, food, friends, education, yayas, ( personal maid) and.. parents..
Arielle loved her parents so much!!! she even studied really hard just to make her parents happy..
she grew into a fine and kind girl..
and when this day came,( she`s 8 years old here.. ) while Arielle was playing dollies with her friends, her yaya, called her, saying that her mother is requesting her to have a talk with her..


and when Arielle was already in the house, her mother wore a serious face..
she wondered why.. even her yaya`s face and her daddy`s face looked serious also..

mommy, why did you called me?.. asked Arielle..
oh, I just want to tell you something.. her mom rensponsed..

what is it?.. she questioned..
you`ll promise never to say this to everyone.. okay.. her mom commanded.. Arielle nodded..

do you know, Arielle, you`re not are true daughter., her mother said..
oh, I see.. mom.. Arielle answered..
she tried to resist the flow of her tears.. and she managed to succeed..

then, she said, ''okay then mom, I`m going to play with yaya now.. ''
her mom smiled and said, '' okay then, have fun!''

Arielle happily grabbed her yaya`s hand and went to her room..
when they proceeded to Arielle`s room, her tears silently flowed.. and she sobbed all of the sudden..
yaya! why did my real mom left me?!!! *sobs*
I don`t know either..


your mom(not real) said that when you`re real mother gave birth, she just left you with your '' twin sister'' into her room..
your real mom is not prepared to take that renspopnsibilities so she` didn`t knew what to do..

after some days, you sister died so, your mom right now took you so you can grow into a beautiful young lady..

after that incident, Arielle hated her real mother and just studied really hard..


THIS IS A TRUE STORY..




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It was the birthday of my dad and we were supposed to celebrate his birthday in the hospital where my grandma is,but the adults told us children to stay at home instead.We had no idea why. The next day,as I woke up..I noticed that no one was home and that my mom left her phone. Her phone rang,I read the message even thought I wasn't allowed to.It says:"Grandma is gone forever..." I was shocked,I couldn't believe it at all! I cried and cried..
On the day of the funeral,I wasn't allowed to go near her,because according to the Chinese beliefs, People under year of the dog aren't allowed to go near my grandma or it will cause bad luck.My dad took me back to the car and comforted me as I cried. I can still hear that sad song from afar...
I was expecting a miracle,that she wasn't dead..but it's impossible. For days,I can't smile..
I haven't even visited her before she died..May she rest in peace.
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It was the birthday of my dad and we were supposed to celebrate his birthday in the hospital where my grandma is,but the adults told us children to stay at home instead.We had no idea why. The next day,as I woke up..I noticed that no one was home and that my mom left her phone. Her phone rang,I read the message even thought I wasn't allowed to.It says:"Grandma is gone forever..." I was shocked,I couldn't believe it at all! I cried and cried..
On the day of the funeral,I wasn't allowed to go near her,because according to the Chinese beliefs, People under year of the dog aren't allowed to go near my grandma or it will cause bad luck.My dad took me back to the car and comforted me as I cried. I can still hear that sad song from afar...
I was expecting a miracle,that she wasn't dead..but it's impossible. For days,I can't smile..
I haven't even visited her before she died..May she rest in peace.


Im sorry for you

This is a really sad story. I hope u cheer up and continue on with ur life
Posted 10/6/08

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abiigeil wrote:

It was the birthday of my dad and we were supposed to celebrate his birthday in the hospital where my grandma is,but the adults told us children to stay at home instead.We had no idea why. The next day,as I woke up..I noticed that no one was home and that my mom left her phone. Her phone rang,I read the message even thought I wasn't allowed to.It says:"Grandma is gone forever..." I was shocked,I couldn't believe it at all! I cried and cried..
On the day of the funeral,I wasn't allowed to go near her,because according to the Chinese beliefs, People under year of the dog aren't allowed to go near my grandma or it will cause bad luck.My dad took me back to the car and comforted me as I cried. I can still hear that sad song from afar...
I was expecting a miracle,that she wasn't dead..but it's impossible. For days,I can't smile..
I haven't even visited her before she died..May she rest in peace.


Im sorry for you

This is a really sad story. I hope u cheer up and continue on with ur life


yupyup... hope you to go on well!! it is really sad....
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oooo!i got another one! ok.....so once there was this girl,her name was Snow.she has a friend name Melvin.one day melvin had to move...so they shook hands and melvin promised Snow tat they will see snow together wen he comes back.(Snow was born in the winter so she never saw snow before) then... years later Snow and her family was gunna move to where melvin is.Snow was so happy,wen they arrived snow decided to take a walk...then,while she was walking her heart suddenly stoped...and she fainted...then melvin saw her..he didnt belive it was Snow at first but wen snow's parents came he was shocked the doctor told the parents tat Snow had heart cancer....mevin was speechless... then when Snow woke up mevin took her to a restrant..they ate..and then he took her to lots of other places she never went to before!then wen it was time to go home,melvin decided to take her to one last place,he took her to the sunsets,"its so pretty here melvin!"said Snow "i'm glad you like it" said melvin. "melvin..wat if i wont ever see you again?Wont you be lonly?" asked snow."Snow..your gunna live for hundred years!come on,lets get you home"said melvin...the next day Snow's mom phoned melvin to tell him tat Snow was in the hospital...melvin ran as fast as he could...wen he got there,he grabed snow and took her somewhere "come on Snow..its gunna snow soon!" said melvin..then Snow woke up! "mel.." said Snow.."dont worry Snow,its gunna snow soon! lets watch it together!" said melvin."mel..i'm so tired..." said Snow."dont! we havent watched snow together yet!" cried melvin..."tats enough..all the times i've spent with you.." said Snow...then she closed her eyes..."NO!!!!" cried melvin..then it started to snow.."Snow! wake up!its snowing!!wake up!!!" yelled melvin."WHY?!!WHY CANT YOU JUST LET HER WATCH IT?!!!YOUR SO UNFAIR!!!!"yelled melvin..THE END.....was tat sad?cause i teared up at the ending...
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Like any other day, it was just a normal day. Walking the same street is still the same, but suddenly one day walking with him changed. I felt the pressure in my heart beating fast. bum-bum, bum-bum. faster and faster it goes, along with his bright smile I could not resist. Later on I knew I'll regret this.
He was my only guy friend, it seem every guy I interact always end up liking me. but him, he's different. We live in two different society classes. He's high class as I'm middle. he was out-going and i was just there to support whatever he does.
It was our last year in high school and we all, him, Emma, Gordon, and I, were deciding our colleges. later on the day i went home with him.
" Amy, I want to confess to someone I like. . . can you help me?" he was shy.
" You don't need me, you can do it on your own. I know you, your strong," I was shock.
" I like Emma!" he shouted.
" Daniel . . . I'll . . . help," I spoke softly.
he was over joyed and we stop at the same place a walk to my house.
As we walk slowly, i told him that I promised not to tell anyone. As day passes, my heart beat faster when I'm around them. At school us four were really popular. We almost knew every single person. he never confess to her yet, i bet it's because they've been friend longer than us. She's closer to him than me.
It was a raining suddenly one spring and when I got home . . . my family were . . . murder. I never came back to my normal self. I was so angry and sad. I wanted to hurt others because of my pain. . .

Everyone at school would avoid eyes contacts with me, even though i was wearing sun glass to hid my sleepy eyes. Even the teacher didn't want to bother me. Then one day, that one day I made my biggest mistake. Daniel yelled at me because the way I acted. He didn't know how much pain I felt! He . . . just made me so mad that I told Emma. . . I broke our promised. When Daniel find out, we weren't friends anymore. we are nothing anymore. With all the money I had, I disappeared for a month. I went to Japan, South Korea, China, and Europe within a month. but . . . during the trip, I fell ill. then I realize and was told that I'm getting sicker and sicker each day. Psh. . . what bad luck. Brain tumor . . .
After I return to school afterward, I had a month to live and five day of school left. Only five . . . everything is going to change.

1st Day
When I arrived at school, I went to the library where Emma was at every morning. She was quietly reading her book. Such a prefect person. She had looks, the personality, the type that most guys loved to marry one day. No wonder Daniel loves her so much. I went up to her, but she kept ignoring me. So I told her to listen.
"Emma, I'm sorry for what I've done. I want to take it back, but it was too late. After we graduate I'll stay away from you guys forever."
After I told her that, she stop me.
"Why do you want to ignored us forever!?!" she yelled in the library. Only 5 people, including the supervisor, were there. I stood there, with my back towards her.
" I never wanted to be your guys friends, I felt sorry for you guys that's why I became friends with you guys."
Then I walk away, holding my tears. That was it, the rest of the day I just pay attention to the teacher and went home and sleep.

2nd Day
When I came into school, I took my motorcycle. Everyone was surprised that I can ride one of them. Then suddenly Daniel came running towards me, then SLAP! It was in pain for a while. Then I punch him.
"What's your problem?!?"
"Why did you say that to Emma yesterday?!?! She's been crying because of YOU!!" he was furious.
"Because it's true . . ."
I was furious too, so took off. suddenly my head was in pain and I couldn't stand it. I crash and was sent to the hospital immediately. When I woke up, no one was there to visit me. Not even Emma, who I made her felt awful. But she's the type of person, no matter what happen between us, would be worried about me.
After I check out, all the nurse and doctor told me not to, I went to the ocean and stare at the sky.

3rd day
I was just returning back from the beach. I didn't want to attend class anymore, so I went on the roof. The roof, my hidden place. The janitor gave me the key to it back in freshmen year. I like it there so much that I would go there almost everyday. I love the wind blowing towards me, it feel like it would always listen to me. It took me to another world where there's no diseases, no bad life, and just good dreams.
"Ah! Amy? Why are you hear"
I stood up and it was Gordon. He have a key too.
"I just want to get away from you guys. So I'm guessing I'll just go home now, bye." I begin to leave. Then he grab my hand.
"Please don't leave me, I don't want you to go away from us. Lets go back to the past." he was sad.
"Sorry, things changes for a reason." I pull his hand off of mine and I walk away. When I got to the door, he turn me around and kiss me passionately. At first I let him do it, but i begin to push him off. Then I slap him.
I went home and begin to re-read Hana Yori Dango again. I begin to cry knowing that it's my fault. Our friendship been destroy by me.

4th day
I went to school today to pick up my diploma. I told the teaches and principal that I will not walk. They all wonder why including the graduate students. I smile at them and told them congrats and went back to the beach. Again I watch the sky turn into dark and counted the stars. As I begin to leave, I wrote a letter and put where we bury our letters.
Back in our junior year we came here and bury letter for our future self. I took mine out and read it, then put back in. It was under a rock and craved on it was 'the F4.'

5th and last day.
As everyone was getting ready, I kept reading the manga. Makino just made a promise with Domyoji's evil mother. It was raining and she broke up with him. It was so dramatic even I begin to cry all over again. As time passes, I finish the manga for the tenth time. Then it was time for the graduation. I went silently and secretly. I took another way in and when a teacher saw me, I hide my face and told them I was getting my stuff out of my locker. They fell for it. So afterward, I went to the roof and watch them come in. I took pictures of them 3. After the ceremony, I went back to the beach and place the memory card in a envelope.

That's the last time I saw them. Now I'm in LA, California to get a cure to this dumb disease. Yet no ones knows about it. I post picture of myself being healthy on my blog. Telling everyone that I'm doing good and having fun. I told them that I was even traveling the world and put the picture from travel online. I was one big lie, but at least I'm going to see my family soon. I never know if the other 3 open the letters. On July 4 I fell in to a deep sleep and past away. Now in heaven I could play with my sibling. I hope Daniel, Emma, and Gordon are ok . . .


the End.

If you want to know the other point-a-view just tell me and I'll write it down here.
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Like any other day, it was just a normal day. Walking the same street is still the same, but suddenly one day walking with him changed. I felt the pressure in my heart beating fast. bum-bum, bum-bum. faster and faster it goes, along with his bright smile I could not resist. Later on I knew I'll regret this.
He was my only guy friend, it seem every guy I interact always end up liking me. but him, he's different. We live in two different society classes. He's high class as I'm middle. he was out-going and i was just there to support whatever he does.
It was our last year in high school and we all, him, Emma, Gordon, and I, were deciding our colleges. later on the day i went home with him.
" Amy, I want to confess to someone I like. . . can you help me?" he was shy.
" You don't need me, you can do it on your own. I know you, your strong," I was shock.
" I like Emma!" he shouted.
" Daniel . . . I'll . . . help," I spoke softly.
he was over joyed and we stop at the same place a walk to my house.
As we walk slowly, i told him that I promised not to tell anyone. As day passes, my heart beat faster when I'm around them. At school us four were really popular. We almost knew every single person. he never confess to her yet, i bet it's because they've been friend longer than us. She's closer to him than me.
It was a raining suddenly one spring and when I got home . . . my family were . . . murder. I never came back to my normal self. I was so angry and sad. I wanted to hurt others because of my pain. . .

Everyone at school would avoid eyes contacts with me, even though i was wearing sun glass to hid my sleepy eyes. Even the teacher didn't want to bother me. Then one day, that one day I made my biggest mistake. Daniel yelled at me because the way I acted. He didn't know how much pain I felt! He . . . just made me so mad that I told Emma. . . I broke our promised. When Daniel find out, we weren't friends anymore. we are nothing anymore. With all the money I had, I disappeared for a month. I went to Japan, South Korea, China, and Europe within a month. but . . . during the trip, I fell ill. then I realize and was told that I'm getting sicker and sicker each day. Psh. . . what bad luck. Brain tumor . . .
After I return to school afterward, I had a month to live and five day of school left. Only five . . . everything is going to change.

1st Day
When I arrived at school, I went to the library where Emma was at every morning. She was quietly reading her book. Such a prefect person. She had looks, the personality, the type that most guys loved to marry one day. No wonder Daniel loves her so much. I went up to her, but she kept ignoring me. So I told her to listen.
"Emma, I'm sorry for what I've done. I want to take it back, but it was too late. After we graduate I'll stay away from you guys forever."
After I told her that, she stop me.
"Why do you want to ignored us forever!?!" she yelled in the library. Only 5 people, including the supervisor, were there. I stood there, with my back towards her.
" I never wanted to be your guys friends, I felt sorry for you guys that's why I became friends with you guys."
Then I walk away, holding my tears. That was it, the rest of the day I just pay attention to the teacher and went home and sleep.

2nd Day
When I came into school, I took my motorcycle. Everyone was surprised that I can ride one of them. Then suddenly Daniel came running towards me, then SLAP! It was in pain for a while. Then I punch him.
"What's your problem?!?"
"Why did you say that to Emma yesterday?!?! She's been crying because of YOU!!" he was furious.
"Because it's true . . ."
I was furious too, so took off. suddenly my head was in pain and I couldn't stand it. I crash and was sent to the hospital immediately. When I woke up, no one was there to visit me. Not even Emma, who I made her felt awful. But she's the type of person, no matter what happen between us, would be worried about me.
After I check out, all the nurse and doctor told me not to, I went to the ocean and stare at the sky.

3rd day
I was just returning back from the beach. I didn't want to attend class anymore, so I went on the roof. The roof, my hidden place. The janitor gave me the key to it back in freshmen year. I like it there so much that I would go there almost everyday. I love the wind blowing towards me, it feel like it would always listen to me. It took me to another world where there's no diseases, no bad life, and just good dreams.
"Ah! Amy? Why are you hear"
I stood up and it was Gordon. He have a key too.
"I just want to get away from you guys. So I'm guessing I'll just go home now, bye." I begin to leave. Then he grab my hand.
"Please don't leave me, I don't want you to go away from us. Lets go back to the past." he was sad.
"Sorry, things changes for a reason." I pull his hand off of mine and I walk away. When I got to the door, he turn me around and kiss me passionately. At first I let him do it, but i begin to push him off. Then I slap him.
I went home and begin to re-read Hana Yori Dango again. I begin to cry knowing that it's my fault. Our friendship been destroy by me.

4th day
I went to school today to pick up my diploma. I told the teaches and principal that I will not walk. They all wonder why including the graduate students. I smile at them and told them congrats and went back to the beach. Again I watch the sky turn into dark and counted the stars. As I begin to leave, I wrote a letter and put where we bury our letters.
Back in our junior year we came here and bury letter for our future self. I took mine out and read it, then put back in. It was under a rock and craved on it was 'the F4.'

5th and last day.
As everyone was getting ready, I kept reading the manga. Makino just made a promise with Domyoji's evil mother. It was raining and she broke up with him. It was so dramatic even I begin to cry all over again. As time passes, I finish the manga for the tenth time. Then it was time for the graduation. I went silently and secretly. I took another way in and when a teacher saw me, I hide my face and told them I was getting my stuff out of my locker. They fell for it. So afterward, I went to the roof and watch them come in. I took pictures of them 3. After the ceremony, I went back to the beach and place the memory card in a envelope.

That's the last time I saw them. Now I'm in LA, California to get a cure to this dumb disease. Yet no ones knows about it. I post picture of myself being healthy on my blog. Telling everyone that I'm doing good and having fun. I told them that I was even traveling the world and put the picture from travel online. I was one big lie, but at least I'm going to see my family soon. I never know if the other 3 open the letters. On July 4 I fell in to a deep sleep and past away. Now in heaven I could play with my sibling. I hope Daniel, Emma, and Gordon are ok . . .


the End.

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It was just a normal day for us 4, having fun, enjoying the attention, and enjoying each other company. We were the idol, the bests of friends, and the great pals anyone would dream to have. But then everything changed. I remember one day at lunch, she was coming to sit with us. Her beauty, out-going character, and rich smile. I loved her, Amy. But suddenly when us 2 were alone, I then realize I like Emma more. One the same day, as I walk Amy home. I ask her the most regretful words that I shouldn’t ask. I ask if she could help me get together with Emma and made a promise to not tell. After I got home, Emma call me and tells me she’s dating her pen pal that she meet a couple days ago. I should have told Amy about this, but I didn’t. As day passes by, everything was going great. But then that one raining day, it was just horrible. Amy’s family was killed. We went to their funeral and the looks on Amy face, we never know if she’ll ever come back.

It was almost 2 month since she finally came back. This time she wore sunglasses and behaved cold to others. She was like that for the entire week. She wouldn’t even talk to us. Every time I see her, she wouldn’t respond back to the person. I got even angrier when she just ignored me and Emma. Then when she bump into Emma she didn’t apologized to her. Then . . . I yelled at her.
“Why are you acting so cold to everyone?!? Put yourself together! If you‘re not going to change, then might as well not be friends with me any more!!” ah~ it came out wrong. . . She ran off. I chase after her about 5 minutes later. Then I heard her . . . She broke our promised. The next day I yelled at her again for breaking our promised. I was so furious that the next day she never came back. For the whole month I was so worry about her. My heart couldn’t forget her. I want to be with her, I want to be the one who bring back to normal . . . The truth is that in reality I’ve always love her. Now my sister is going to kill me for what I’ve done. They reason why we meet is because of my older sister. During the days Amy wasn’t here, I was able to gather all my courage and told me sister. Of course they yell at me, but I didn’t notice how much she was really important to her. Amy was the one who help her to go for her dream and she was able to do her dream. She will soon become a great nurse. My sister was a senior when the 4 of us became friends and enter high school.
“Daniel . . . Answer these question, ok?
1. Do you care about her?”
“Yes”
“2. Are you right now worry about her?”
“Yea”
“and 3. Did you ever had feelings for her?”
“. . . yea . . . ”
“Can‘t you see, you loved her. But something got between you two and both change. OR!!!”
“Or what? Tell me sis!”
“Or like the Chinese belief Amy told me once. The ‘Red String of Fate.’
She told me that ‘An invisible red thread connects those who are destined to meet, regardless of time, place, or circumstance. The thread may stretch or tangle, but it will never break.’”
“Wow . . . Is she the one for me?” I spoke to myself because sis fell asleep.

During the month, the senior , us, went to trips and had fun for our last month in high school. Though I was having fun, I was still so worried about Amy. Everyday I would check her blog. Begging to see her smile again. Her great personality she had, but I knew . . . I wouldn’t able to see for awhile. When the month pass, we had 5 more days left of school. I was so happy, but yet so sad.

1st day
I saw her, she was heading towards the library. I knew she was going to Emma. I slowly walk behind her. As she spoke to Emma, I hid behind the book shelf. I heard her, I heard everything. Emma was crying, so I comfort her. But her words kept on repeating in my head and my heart.
“I never wanted to be your guys friends, I felt sorry for you guys that's why I became friends with you guys.” I want to cry with her too. I really care about Emma‘s feelings, so I got mad at Amy again. During the whole entire day, I couldn’t chose either yell at her or make up with her. Emma was still crying, so I stupidly chose to yell at her.


2nd day

I saw her coming in her older brother’s motorcycle. I ran to her and slap her. I yelled at her for Emma’s sake. Then she punch me and ran off. I was going to chase her again but Gordon stop me, then he punch me at the same spot where Amy punch me.
“ You idiot! Do you even know how she felt!?! Do you even know what’s going through her damn life?!?! Why did you yelled at her!?!” Gordon was furious.
“Why do you care so much about her? You’ve been the quiet one around us!”
“Cause I love her! Her entire family pass away. She must been in pain and tired because of it. You just don’t know how it feel to lose someone you love!!” he kept yelling.
“Gordon . . . But . . . ” I knew I lost already.
Gordon run off too. After that day, I never know what will happen next. Later on the day, Emma slap me for what I’ve done. She was mad at me for my mistake and called up my sis. My sis came here as soon as possible. When she arrived, Gordon was there and Emma too. My sis kept on hitting me with the newspaper.
“You idiot! Dumb person, dense person, dumbo, and immortal. You like her, but you yelled at her. ” she yelled at me.
“Huh!?!? What?!?!” Gordon and Emma didn’t know.
“ So you like her too, but all you can do is yelled at her!!! You are an immortal persons.” Gordon yelled at me.
“We all knew you both like each other, that‘s why Gordon didn’t pursue her . . . Have you ever thought of that? Gordon lost his mother in a fire and his doesn‘t speak to him like they use to. Don‘t you remember?” Emma yelled at me too.
“I had enough of liking people. I always thought Amy was coming back to herself, but I lose hope.” I softly spoke.
“You idiot! She was sleep walking the entire day!” Gordon yelled at me.
I didn’t notice her sleepy eyes, it was . . . all my fault . . .



3rd Day

I haven’t seen her, I wanted to apologized to her for what I’ve done. I went everywhere, then it hit me. The beach! I drove there as fast as I can, but in the end she wasn’t there. So I just sat there letting everything go.
“I‘m sorry!!! I‘ve finally realize that you‘re the one! The only one I loved! I‘m sorry! I‘m an idiot!!” I begin to cry. I want her, I need her, and I can’t breath with out. What hurt the most was begin so close, but I lost it all of it. I wanted her more than my own life. Suddenly Gordon came and sat next to me.
“ I kiss her, but she push me away. “ Gordon smiled.
“You . . . kiss her? ” I was surprised.
“I bet she still loved you.” he begin to cry.
Then I begin to cry again. We went home that night not knowing what Amy will do next.


4th Day

We were all at the practice of the ceremony for our graduation. All but Amy was there, everyone bet that she wouldn’t come. Then she suddenly appeared. She spoke the teacher, and they were shock. Everyone was curious about it. The she turn and smile at us. She congrats us and leave, everyone was blushing even the girls. Amy and her amazing power to cheer up a crowd. When she finally was gone from our site, one of the student ask what happen.
“We are sadly to announced that Amy will not walk with you tomorrow night. ” the principal was sadden. After I he was finish I ran to chase after Amy, but the teacher stop me.
“Let me go!!” I keep repeating wanting to see her so badly. Then I yelled her name. They wouldn’t me go.


5th Day

Like any other graduated, we were all was getting ready. Yet I wasn’t, I was still remember what happen yesterday. Her smile, the way she spoke, and her walk through the ally. All of it in my mind. Then flashback on how we use to be. . . I miss her terribly. The suddenly time came fast as lighting and it was time to go. I just sat at the theater. Emma comfort me, she knew I was in pain. I follow the procedure. It went by fast for me, afterwards I just put a fake smile on and went home. Emma and Gordon came over and soon or later we begin to talk about the past. Suddenly talking about Amy’s courage, dumbness, and how she always make us laugh. We begin to cry, we couldn’t stop the tears. It was the first time I’ve seen Gordon cry too. Suddenly my sister came in with a huge bang. She saw all of us crying and begin to hug us all and cry along too. We started to laugh and hope to see Amy soon.

After a couple of days, my sister got a call. She gather us all up. She was crying.
“I . . . got bad news. One of my friend from college saw Amy at the beach on graduation night. She was burying something, they say. But the worst part was that Amy was sent the hospital. She collapse in front of them.” she was crying harder.
We all were crying. When sis got the hospital address, we all went there as soon as possible. But when we got there, she was already gone. The doctors and nurses wouldn’t tell us where she went. So we went to the beach. It took us awhile to find the rock with ‘The F4’ carved into it. When we unburied it. There were 2 more letters in it. We open one, and it was a memory card. Then we open the 2nd one. Emma read it out loud:

Dear guys and Emma,

I’m sorry for ruining out friendship, but sooner or later I knew I had to one day. To tell you the truth, I’ve been sick lately. I didn’t want to ruin your fun too. Sorry for promise I broke, and breaking your heart. I’m sorry for everything. Sometimes I think I shouldn’t have been here. But I regret saying that. You guys are the best part of my life. And when I’m gone, don’t cry over me. Live your dreams . . . Good bye . . . Forever now.
Amy.

We all begin to weep and fill up with mix emotion. The my sis show the pictures to us. It was our graduation, Amy was there. She was always there.


Later on of the month, I kept reading her blog. She say she’s been fine and getting well. She travel the world like she wanted to. But after that month, we never knew we would be going to her funeral. We try to hold our tears like she told us to not cry. We still love her, even we never got to see her again.
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This is a kinda semi-fanfic...
Anyone who figures out what it's from gets a cookie~
but well, it IS sad, in emptyful ways


“Well, then… I just stood over him. And he was bleeding like mad. There were sirens in the distance… But there were so many cars around… I knew he wouldn’t make it.”
She said all of these words so mater-of-fact-ly.
“I didn’t even look at him. I just asked him… Well, why? Why did you protect me? And he answers me… He said, ‘because I like-no, love you, Nana-chan.’ Then he died. The ambulance got here… But they were too late. Satoshi died.”
Her expression was emotionless, and she was nodding nonchalantly as if she was gauging the weather.
“Then I went home, and did what I usually do, what I always do. But then that night, I couldn’t sleep. I thought insomnia was acting up again. So I went into my living room and lay on that sofa; that black leather sofa. I turned on the TV, but then… I… I wasn’t watching. I sat there, in front of that screen… And just sat there. I don’t know for how long. I don’t remember anything from then. I just… I didn’t think, I didn’t talk, I wasn’t listening… Yeah.”
The last word became a whisper. Her eyes turned towards us. They were normal, not tearful like you would normally expect them.
“So when you ask me how it feels when a loved one leaves you… I’m not sure I know. Did I love Satoshi? He was just a toy at the beginning. No… he was always a toy, all the way until the end. I didn’t think twice about what he said… I only know that all the other boyfriends supplied me with money… Satoshi did too. But… it felt…”
Her brows furrowed and she bit her bottom lip; thoughtful.
“Better… It felt better with Satoshi. He said he loved me… Not like, as the other boys say. He called me beautiful, not hot, as the other boys say. He walked in on me making out with other boys more than once, that I know. But he never said anything. He smiled and kept me happy through our dates.”
Her gaze wondered back to somewhere on the ceiling again, though I doubt she’s really seeing anything.
“Was he special to me? I really didn’t know. But one night… It was raining, raining really, really hard. I just dumped a boyfriend, and his friend dropped me off at my house goggling at me. It was normal actually. But then that night, there was a black out. Too much energy used in our city. Everything was dark… And I couldn’t sleep. So I threw on a jacket and took a walk. I didn’t have a particular destination in mind, but before I know it, I was at the scene where Satoshi died. It was weird, when the rest of the houses and buildings were dark, that single street lamp was on. It was flickering, about to be put out. Then all of a sudden…”
Her voice stopped abruptly. Her expression changed too. Tears suddenly swam in her eyes, and there was a light grimace on her face.
“All of a sudden tears started falling. I stood under that street lamp, and I cried. The rain was around me, so loud that I don’t know if I made any sounds or not. All I remember was that it was cold, raining, and painful. I couldn’t breathe. It felt as if I was empty. But that hollowness was so painful. It stung, hitting me again and again. And I cried. I cried while looking up to that street lamp, the light flickering on and off. I don’t know what time it is… last time I checked it was 11. But I stood there and I cried. I cried until I couldn’t anymore. When I opened my eyes the rain had stopped and the night was pitch dark and…”
She took a sharp breath here, biting her lip again. The tears had faded away now.
“And that light… The light was out too. Everything was dark and silent. I checked my watch… It was midnight. So I walked home. Then I sat onto my sofa… Then checked the calendar. It was July 23rd. I started wondering why I had cried, so I sat back, slung my arms around the back of the sofa, and thought.
“Was today special? How?
“I was clueless as to what had made me do that, so I started walking to bed. Then the phone ran. When I picked it up it was a man on the other line, with a husky voice. He said, ‘walk out from behind that wall and onto the balcony.’”
I breathed in.
“I did that. The phone was still at my ear. Then he said, ‘I’m going to kill you.’ I looked forward to the building in front of mine. There was a man there, holding a gun. He looked about 20-something, with light brown hair and azure eyes, a pleasant smile on his face. I waved at him, and he waved back. Then I asked into the phone, Why? He answered, ‘I’m doing you a favor by killing you on the day your boyfriend was killed. I had failed last time, but not today.’”
I breathed out.
“It didn’t make sense to me. My boyfriend? Which one? Then it dawned on me. So I asked into the phone, Satoshi? He nods, the earpiece wire shaking out from under his hair. He tucks it back. ‘Do you miss him? I saw you crying there earlier that night. Last chance too, right?’ he said. My gaze fell from him as I leaned across the railing. ‘Hm… So that’s why…’ I remember saying. ‘You forgot?’ he muttered. I shook my head with a smile. ‘No, I never knew.’ He seemed surprised. ‘Wasn’t he special to you? He saved you after all.’ I answered, ‘I never asked him to. He did that himself. And… is he special to me?’ He was completely dumbfounded now. He sighed. ‘Well, I don’t really care. So I’m going to kill you, alright?’ I dropped the phone, watching it whistle through the air before hitting the black trash bags, which muffled the sound. I looked up and smiled at him, then nodded.”
Then how did she survive?!
“He nods, aims, but hesitated. He takes out the bullets, then switches it to something else. Then he aimed again, then fired. It didn’t make a sound. I don’t remember being hit, but when I woke up… Well, I was like this.”
I sat there in silence, looking at her. She sat herself onto a table across from mine, and stared back with a smile on her face. But slowly, just slowly tears started flooding out of her eyes and trail down her pale cheeks. She smiled.
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