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DIZ IS EALLY A LUV AND SAD STORY SORRY





IF DER IS A CONTUNE ILL TELL U.....OK


whoa... sad.

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Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.
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Minty236 wrote:

Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.

hey hey!! Don't worry about it, ganbatte! I'm looking forward to your stories! Plus, i'm not a good writer either
Posted 6/14/08

Minty236 wrote:

Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.


it is pretty funny...... i want to know more..... think that it ll be a nice story...^_^
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Minty236 wrote:

Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.


three cheers for u haha ^^

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I'll share my rather unfortunate love story. It happened about a month ago. I know that I'm a simpleton when in comes to love. I don't mind though.

It was on a Thursday. I was sick that day and was throwing up all morning. I was supposed to meet my girlfriend at the subway station at 12 that day. I went of course. I waited and waited. I called her and text messaged her a billion times but she was ignoring them. I was getting a little frustrated and upset and after an hour and a half of waiting I came back home. My fever was getting a bit worse then. Then I received a text message saying that she was busy doing school work so that she doesn't have to do them when she goes to Florida the week after. So, okay I felt relieved that I was ignored because she was studying.

Around 2:00, I received an email saying that she thinks that I am probably really mad and flustered by now. She said that she stood me up and ignored me because she could not face me. Then I saw a one liner in the middle of the message. "I thought I loved you, now I don't know anymore." It seriously crushed me. I tried calling her house but she kept the line busy by talking to her friend. I was so shocked that I did not know what to do.

So, I ran for the bus stop, went to the subway, ran for her house. I was hyperventilating. I just could not breathe and blood was rushing to my head. When she answered the door, she was mad at me for showing up. We talked it out and she said that the reason why she is dumping me is because I was too perfect for her and that I love her too much. She didn't want a perfect boyfriend because she was so guilty for not loving me back all this time. She said that she never wanted to put any effort in this and never will; she's giving up.

I really loved her and I was just so distraught and shocked. I am being tossed away because of those trivial reasons. She went to her room, I followed her. I hugged her really tight and I just could not let go. My head was blank and I didn't really know what to do, plus I had a fever going. I knew it had to end so I had to bite my lips just so I could let go. I decided to leave. I asked her if there was at least a very small chance that we can still fix this. She said she will never go back even if she wanted to have a new relationship. She was my princess, so I nicknamed her Hime-sama and she liked it. So, I guess this was pretty corny and stupid of my but I knelt in front of her and kissed her hand. And I said goodbye.

My fever just wont go down that night lol. Until now I am still in love with her. I still am holding on to the last thing that I got from her. Paper hearts made from subway transfer tickets, 3 of 'em, which I got after our last date. I can't decide whether I should throw it out or not.

So yeah, this is my stupid love story. Dream gone nightmare.
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(=.=...Wow...It's been two days after I wrote part one, sry for the delay...Comments and advices are welcomed.)

Chapter 1's part two (Finally, I actually moved my fingers already)

(Last part : Andrea gave the school's biggest prep, Drake Hutson, a knuckle sandwich that made him 'fly' across the floor. And all she wanted was to have a peaceful day at school,. But then again, I'll just say good luck on that girl, life isn't as easy as it seems.)

"*Sigh* Can't they just sit like a good dog and shut those mouths up?!" Beck said annoyed, while I stuffed my mouth with the fries and the burger I just picked up from the cafeteria. "Oooh shuddup abeary Bef!!" (Translation: Shut up already Beck) Alex said while munching his sandwich, Beck just rolled her eyes and turned to me saying, "Those pigs are annoying, riigghtt Andy??". Blinking my eyes, I swallowed the food down my throat and nodded, I wasn't in a mood for this. Alright, just to introduce these two, Beck Archer and Alexander Archer, they both have the same first name, 'Archer'; But the thing is, they're the total opposites, don't even mention food, everything they say or do is the total opposite, I'm just wondering: How can they be friends anyway?...

"No way!! I can't believe it-Did she...-No way..." Bickering sounds snapped me back to reality, I furrowed my eyebrows and groaned, thinking: not again. Those cheerleaders and preppies, always gossiping and doing manicures, never doing a single sport but cheerleading and...Might just add shopping though. I glanced at them and realized that one of them, was glaring at me; Oh yeah, that's Drake's girlfriend, Ashley Summers, the second- No, I mean, the ugliest of the ugliest in the prep girl group. "Hey, Anderson *marches infront of me* I heard you beat up my boyfriend, you pig. And here *takes up alex's ice cream and puts it on my T-shirt*, that would go nice on you, you know." she said, while Beck and Alex just stared at her, thinking whether she just lost her brain or got possesed by some unknown spirit. I stood up and brushed the ice cream off, looking up at that cheap sl*t, I smirked and lazily said, "You think that can scare me, preppy?? *Inches closer* Look, I don't care what you do, or what you say, but I am NOT gonna break just 'cause of that. By the way..." I took a plate of spaghetti (Beck's lunch), and threw it on her face, smearing some of that heavy make up on her face.

Beck and Alex covered their mouths, making a "Ppffttt!!" sound, I winked at Alex and Beck, and...Let's get this party started..."FOOD FIGHT!!" he screamed, taking a slice of pizza (Don't know where that came from), he threw it at one of the jocks, aiming straight at the face. Soon enough, the food war began, giving me, Alex, and Beck a chance to sneak out. After coming out from the cafeteria, which by now has become a battlefield already, we all laughed our asses off, "AHAHA!! AHAHAAHAAA!!! It's killing me! It's killing meeeee!!!" Beck said while rolling on the floor laughing. We tried to calm ourselves down but the scene pictured in our minds kept us smiling like crazed maniacs. "Ha...Okay guys, I think we all are gonna die by laughing our heads off, cause I'm starting to feel like throwing up..." I said while staggering abit, they both nodded and we all went back to class.

After few hours of dead boring class...

"*Bell rings*", finally...Class is over already, I thought I was gonna drown in that hag's saliva and words...So..Many...Words...Ugghh...I can't think straight, that hag, her words are like lullabies!!! Anyway, I gotta get back home already. "*Hums a song* Hhmm...Ah!! I totally forgot that I had to get a job!!! *Pulls hair* Damn, no money and rental's tomorrow already!!!" I said, but then my ears pricked up and a shadow suddenly bumped into me, causing me to fall on my butt. "Ouch..." I said while rubbing where it hurt, but when I looked up, that guy was gone, whoever it was, they could've at least say sorry!!! Huh?? I looked down at my feet and spotted a chain necklace with a cross hanging around it.

Looks pretty...Who was that guy anyway?? I wondered while closing the door. Tired and confused, I flopped down on the bed and drift on to sleep. Maybe I'll find that guy tommorow, I guess...Just a maybe though...But I have a feeling that I was in for a suprise tomorrow.

End of Chapter 1's part 2. )("*sigh* I hope my story doesn't suck, it's quite long actually...And It hasn't even reached the exciting part yet!!! T.T... )






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I'll share my rather unfortunate love story. It happened about a month ago. I know that I'm a simpleton when in comes to love. I don't mind though.

It was on a Thursday. I was sick that day and was throwing up all morning. I was supposed to meet my girlfriend at the subway station at 12 that day. I went of course. I waited and waited. I called her and text messaged her a billion times but she was ignoring them. I was getting a little frustrated and upset and after an hour and a half of waiting I came back home. My fever was getting a bit worse then. Then I received a text message saying that she was busy doing school work so that she doesn't have to do them when she goes to Florida the week after. So, okay I felt relieved that I was ignored because she was studying.

Around 2:00, I received an email saying that she thinks that I am probably really mad and flustered by now. She said that she stood me up and ignored me because she could not face me. Then I saw a one liner in the middle of the message. "I thought I loved you, now I don't know anymore." It seriously crushed me. I tried calling her house but she kept the line busy by talking to her friend. I was so shocked that I did not know what to do.

So, I ran for the bus stop, went to the subway, ran for her house. I was hyperventilating. I just could not breathe and blood was rushing to my head. When she answered the door, she was mad at me for showing up. We talked it out and she said that the reason why she is dumping me is because I was too perfect for her and that I love her too much. She didn't want a perfect boyfriend because she was so guilty for not loving me back all this time. She said that she never wanted to put any effort in this and never will; she's giving up.

I really loved her and I was just so distraught and shocked. I am being tossed away because of those trivial reasons. She went to her room, I followed her. I hugged her really tight and I just could not let go. My head was blank and I didn't really know what to do, plus I had a fever going. I knew it had to end so I had to bite my lips just so I could let go. I decided to leave. I asked her if there was at least a very small chance that we can still fix this. She said she will never go back even if she wanted to have a new relationship. She was my princess, so I nicknamed her Hime-sama and she liked it. So, I guess this was pretty corny and stupid of my but I knelt in front of her and kissed her hand. And I said goodbye.

My fever just wont go down that night lol. Until now I am still in love with her. I still am holding on to the last thing that I got from her. Paper hearts made from subway transfer tickets, 3 of 'em, which I got after our last date. I can't decide whether I should throw it out or not.

So yeah, this is my stupid love story. Dream gone nightmare.


aww dude thats heart breaking Trust me ur gonna find another one :)......im sure if uv got that much perfection and love...it just needs to go to the right person :D....

Anyways girls dont make sence....... "Not enough love" or "to much love"....... its hard to find the right balance or u can become a zombie like me.... LOL.... i have a very uneventfull relationship LOL... =/ so boring.... anyways girls are hard to figure out...i feel for u man!

Posted 6/29/08

Minty236 wrote:

Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.


OMG! AWESOME! THATS WHAT I WUD'VE DONE TOO! XDDD
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one day we had a new seat arrangement....after, at my back was one of the guys my friends liked.some days later he spread a message that says he likes me....in valentines he sent me a love letter.but i actually new he truth.the truth he doesnt really like me.he was always around this girl and they always looked like lovers...everyday i told that to my bestfriend but she doesn't believe me. after that day she asked about it to the guy...that guy confessed that he didnt really like me.he was just using me so that he could always be with the girl he was always with because once the girl knew that he like her she would go away from him because she was shy always whenever they tease her.my first love letter was a fake!!! i even fell for him.....well actually just a little!!!

........today,i'm sooo happy!!!two of the most popular boys are always near me!!!
the 1st boy is sitting in front of me and always talks to me!!!
the second boy seats a little far from me but i think that he likes me well it's because he always go near me,sits beside me,talks to me and also when it was raining , he took my umbrella and we were both walking in the rain and him holding the umbrella!!! we were walking for so long my friends even teased me...even after the rain he keeps on following me!!! it was like hours after he walked away because his friends called him!!! it was sooo romantic!!!kyaaaaahhhh!!!!! i'll never forget that!!!
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Minty236 wrote:

Hhmm..I'm new here, so my stories aren't that good, but comments are welcomed, or maybe some advice.....

Here it is! *gulps* ---->

Chapter 1's part one of two (I couldn't finish the story properly, so...I will continue it sooner or later) (Sry for inconvinience)

Hey, I'm Andrea Anderson, I'm 16, and I'm kinda of a rough tomboy. I have a pretty normal life, afew friends, a family, annoying sibilings, the works. And the one thing I hate about my life was, highschool. Highschool's pretty much like a prison, or hell for me; But hey, even if I'm a girl, I can do somethings a guy can, 'cause I'm definitely, n-o-t a girly-girl (like I said, I'm a rough tomboy). But then... After meeting with that person during my highschool years, my life was becoming more and more busier and complicated, and that's just what I needed (note the sarcasm please).

"Hey loser!! Watch where you're going!!" Barked one of the hugest preppies in school, Drake Hutson. Oh, did I mention that he was also one of the cutest guys in school? Maybe not but I hate myself for reminding that. Okay, back to where I was, I glared at him, he was so annoying, smirking that "Winner" smirk all the time, oh I just wanted to ruin that stupid face of his. And then... He gave me a hand gesture that triggered my nerves, that was the l-a-s-t straw alright. So, "WHAM" went on his face and he landed on the floor with a loud thump, he screamed in pain while the other's look at me with horrified faces. It was my turn to smirk then, "What's wrong prep, scared? Next time, it won't just be a knuckle sandwich, just so you know." I said turning and walking back to my class.

Well, to tell you the truth, I didn't have really much of a choice, I'm a rough one; And besides, that guy was annoying as flies at a horse's butt or mom's nagging, so I just wanted to shut him up for awhile and have a peaceful day at school.


OMG! AWESOME! THATS WHAT I WUD'VE DONE TOO! XDDD


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Honestly, I was walking really slow.. hoping he would catch up on me in case he was still there. When I reached the end of the street, people looked at me confusingly, wondering why I was walking really slow.

Then, I heard this other guy whisper to his friend and said, "Dude, told you there's a funeral."

I was annoyed, really. So I jumped inside the first bus I saw, cursing the human-poser-guy that just passed by me.

'This is stupid', I thought as the jeep went through, 'Fate was on my side? Yeah, right,'

It was a bit traffic that day, so I sat inside the jeep, looking really, really bored. I got more annoyed when the driver asked me whether my boyfriend just broke up with me. I don't know, but my glare made the driver shut up.

This wasn't it. The annoying driver just asked me if I can get off the bus and ride on a different one because his tires got flat or something.. didn't heard him well. He gave my money back and I smirked when I saw that he gave me an extra peso.

''What can I buy with a P1.00? A piece of candy with an ant inside??,'' I whispered laughingly.

Honestly, I felt I was invisible or something, every time I wave for a bus that'll pass by.. the driver will just ignore me.. like I was invisible or something. I almost asked the guard that passed by me if I was invisible or just plain stupid. But I know the guard will look at me like I was a crackpot fool so I just waited for another bus to pass.

3rd bus passed..

5th..

WHAT THE HECK!!

6th..

Finally!! A kind driver noticed how I suffered while waiting for a bus to stop.

It was a bit dark when I entered the bus, the windows were tightly shut, besides, it was like 6:00 PM and the sun's a bit down.

I was about to pay the driver when someone suddenly grabbed my hand and a familiar voice said, "I payed it,"

I couldn't see who he was because of the darkness inside the bus.

I was about to ask him who he was when the driver opened the lights inside the bus.

There.

The person I've been waiting for a while ago.

I saw the same smile I saw an hour ago.

Same voice I heard an hour ago.

He was there, sitting beside me, smiling.

Then, I heard him say, "I thought fate was not on my side today,"


i wish that happened to me...
well it did...
but my ending was a little different from yours haha
Posted 8/13/08
well.. here it goes..

In seventh grade, I had a guy I liked so much, named Kyle. But soon I found out, he had confessed to my best friend, Michelle. No one knew, I had liked him. At that moment, my friend told me he confessed to her. I stood frozen, my heart nearly stopped beating. Thinking, NOO.... I like Kyle... please don't take him away from me... But the words that came out from my mouth were "Really ? Im happy for you." I just smiled &rushed out the door. I started running &running, so much tears was coming of my eyes &it wouldn't stop. Then I fell down, I tried smiling &muffled "Im happy for her.. I really am..." &I began crying. Michelle asked what happened to me for 3 days.. I said it was just a cold &ran away from her. But truthfully, I skipped 3 of those days of school. After school, when Kyle had base-ball practice, I would always sit near the window to see. So when I saw him today, I stared at him.. looking &looking, tears started rolling down. I put my face in my arms. Suddenly my classmate from school popped in &asked me, "You like him huh ? Why don't you confess to him, even if he likes someone else, you should at least let him know about your feelings." I was surprised by those words but convinced. The next day after school, I told him how I felt. But he said, "Im sorry, but I like Michelle" I just smiled &laughed, "Ha ha ha I know!" He had to go to practice, he smiled &tossed the base-ball to me &ran off. As the base-ball was in my hands, I smiled & began to cry. "Ha.. ha.. ha.. hahh..... hehhh.. ughhh *sniff* I know... you do... but being said to my face by you.... still hurts... *SOB*.. Kyle.. I like you...so.. muchh..ughh *SOB*." When I was in the classroom, looking at him practice. My classmate came in, "Michelle, ... I always thought that was a nice name.... if only... I was named Michelle... * Kyle: "Im sorry, but I like Michelle" * "thinking:...if only that were my name." Tears came down, I began crying in my arms. My classmate patted me on the head, "You did well." I didn't regret it, but I knew from then on... no matter... how hard I try, we would never be together... &no matter... how hard I cry, we would never be together....

So.. I hope you liked it ^ ^"
Remember all this &writing it down, made me tear... hehh..
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Shion
Risu
Kir
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Kami

Summer Time~
"Hey Nami!" called Risu, Nami's bestfriend.
Nami turns around and smiles.
"Hey Risu! Want to hangout at the new cafe down the street?" asked Nami.
"Sure!"
Summer Time~Cafe
"So how is summer so far?" asked Risu as she takes a bit of her muffin.
"Its okay so far. There really isnt much to do during summer time." said Nami taking a sip of her ice green tea.
Risu takes another bit of her muffin.
"Have you and Shion talk during the summer?" Risu asked.
Nami was silent for a moment. "No."
Risu looked up at Nami shock. "What happened?"
"I just feel like i need to forget about him." wispered Nami smiling sadly at her friend.
"You sure? You had such a big crush on him for 3 years already." Risu looked worried.
Nami nodded. "I want to concentrate on my studies for once." Nami smiles.
"I hope that is really what you want." Risu gets up and leaves. "Bye bye Nami see you."
First Day of School (senior year)~
"Hey Nami over here!" called Risu waving her hand at Nami.
"Oh hey Risu, Jurius, Ichigo, Kami, Kir." Nami walked towards her group of friends smiling.
"How was your summer Nami?" asked Kir.
"It was okay, how bout you Kir?" asked Nami smiling.
"Being a lifegaurd is really a pain. Too bad we didnt get to hangout during the summer." said Kir as a matter a fact.
"Yea i was too busy with my Church things too." said Jurius.
"Well at least we are together again now that school started!" cheered Kami.
"Hey Nami, Shio--" Ichigo was cut off when someone was walking towards them.
Nami turned around and was faced to faced with Shion Suzuki, her 3 year crush.
[Nami has like Shion since the first time she saw him. Since then she and Shion were some-what friends. Nami's friends are also friends of Shion...but Shion and Nami rarely talk, except saying hi when they bump into each other in the hall way or bye when everyone leaves the classroom. But still Nami couldnt help slowly falling in love with him. She loves everything about him, the way smart him that is always concentrating in class and the way he looks so serious in class; also the way he looks when he plays basketball, and also the way he smiles that one time when Nami helped him during math class. Just seeing him makes Nami's heart skip a beat.]
Nami's eyes meet Shions and she felt her heart race. She quickly turned around and face her friends again.
"Sorry guys but i have to go check in with Mr. Hayama. I'll see you guys at lunch okay!" Nami ran the other direction where Shion cam frrom.
"Hey isnt Mr. Hayama's office the other deriction?" said Ichigo pointing at the opposite direction.
"Shhhhh." Risu put a finger in front of her lips signaling Ichigo to be quiet.
Jurius watched as Nami runs away and then looks at Shion who is now talking to Kir.
After School~Nami's POV
"Finally the day is over." I thought.
I sigh as i walk down the hall way back to my locker.

*bumb* *bumb*
"Eh? What's that?" i thought as I walked towards where the sound was coming from and noticed it was coming from the gym. I turned the corner that leads to the gym and stopped, frozen at what i am seeing...Shion was playing basketball. My whole body went numb.
"No! I got to leave now!" I screamed in my head as I tried to turn back and run out of there as fast as i can, but i was too mesmerize but the way Shion focus and his form while playing basketball.
"Why do you do this to me? Why can i not forget about you? Why cant i just forget about you? Why do i still love you? Why" those thought kept repeating in my head over and over again. I watched silently too focus on Shion, little did i know tears was already pouring out of my eyes now clouded with tears.
I took a few deep breaths and finally was able to control my feets again, slowly i turned around. I took my first step still feeling numb, and my stuff stumble out of my arms. Awaken from the noise, i quickly bent down to pick up my things and leave as soon as possible.

"Nami?" I paused hearing the voice i have come to know so well. There was no more sound from the basketball court, except for my breathing and his. Once again tears betrayed me as they slowly slide down my cheek.
I quickly garther my things and stood up ready to run for my life. As i was about to run something caught my arm. Shion spun me around so i was now facing him again. I looked to my left making sure not to make any eye contact with him.

"Why are you running away? Why are you crying?" Shion held onto my shoulders forcing me to face him.
"Its nothing." Once again i wanted to avoid his stare, knowing it my see through my lie.
"It dosent look like nothing." Shion looked concerned.
I was shocked. He was actually worried about me. Something warm tingle in my stomach.
"I have to tell him! I have to tell him right now!" I thought. I looked down and then up again looking straight at Shion.
Shion looked suprised at my sudden change. I took a step back, but his hands still linger on my shoulders.
I took a deep breath, "Shion I lov--"

*ring ring*
"Sorry but do you mind if i take this call?" Shion wave his phone at my direction and i nodded. He held the phone to his ear and began to speak, "Hello?...Ah Risu...."
"Risu?" I was shocked to hear him say my bestriends name. "What am i worring about? It could be help for homework or something, they do have the same classes. Even so, why does my heart feel like it is breaking?"
"...Gomen but i was practicing out at the gym....Oh you got out of class already?...Sure. We can go catch a movie or something if you want....Okay i'll meet you at the front. Bye." Shion closed his phone and turned back to me again.
"Ah gomen ne Nami, i have to go meet Risu at the front. What were you going to say?"

"Why? Why? WHY?" I thought. "Why is it Risu?" my head throb as i thought about it.
"Are you and Risu going out?" i wispered as i look down.

Shion got nervous and his face turned a bit red. "Yea, we've been going out since the begining of summer, but Risu didnt want me to tell anyone. So can you help me keep it a secret?"
I looked up and saw that he looking at me with those eyes and smile i fell in love with.
"Sure! Oh you better hurry before Risu gets mad at you!" I gave him my most cheerful smile.

"Thanks a lot Nami!" Shion gave me a hug, that i wish that time would just stop there and never end. He let go of me after my passing thought and dashed up the stairs to meet my bestfriend.
I listen as his footstep slowly fade away. I sink to the floor and l gave in to the tears that already clouded my eyes. My hands over where my heart once was.
"Watashi baka ne? Shion suki! Daisuki! Aishite!" I screamed and covered my face with my hands, wondering why would Risu do this. Seeing Shion this happy makes tears run down my cheek. Thinking that Shion loves Risu really makes me wonder...
I wispered, "Could you ever love me that way?"


Gomen but this is really really long!...its a sad romance story...and it was inspired by the song Could You Ever Love Me This Way, By Nikki Flores. Gomen ne is it is too sad or ifit dosent mad since...
Posted 8/14/08

xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Just a few tips to make it easier to understand~
Author's Notes
Thoughts
Nami
Shion
Risu
Kir
Ichigo
Jurius
Kami

Summer Time~
"Hey Nami!" called Risu, Nami's bestfriend.
Nami turns around and smiles.
"Hey Risu! Want to hangout at the new cafe down the street?" asked Nami.
"Sure!"
Summer Time~Cafe
"So how is summer so far?" asked Risu as she takes a bit of her muffin.
"Its okay so far. There really isnt much to do during summer time." said Nami taking a sip of her ice green tea.
Risu takes another bit of her muffin.
"Have you and Shion talk during the summer?" Risu asked.
Nami was silent for a moment. "No."
Risu looked up at Nami shock. "What happened?"
"I just feel like i need to forget about him." wispered Nami smiling sadly at her friend.
"You sure? You had such a big crush on him for 3 years already." Risu looked worried.
Nami nodded. "I want to concentrate on my studies for once." Nami smiles.
"I hope that is really what you want." Risu gets up and leaves. "Bye bye Nami see you."
First Day of School (senior year)~
"Hey Nami over here!" called Risu waving her hand at Nami.
"Oh hey Risu, Jurius, Ichigo, Kami, Kir." Nami walked towards her group of friends smiling.
"How was your summer Nami?" asked Kir.
"It was okay, how bout you Kir?" asked Nami smiling.
"Being a lifegaurd is really a pain. Too bad we didnt get to hangout during the summer." said Kir as a matter a fact.
"Yea i was too busy with my Church things too." said Jurius.
"Well at least we are together again now that school started!" cheered Kami.
"Hey Nami, Shio--" Ichigo was cut off when someone was walking towards them.
Nami turned around and was faced to faced with Shion Suzuki, her 3 year crush.
[Nami has like Shion since the first time she saw him. Since then she and Shion were some-what friends. Nami's friends are also friends of Shion...but Shion and Nami rarely talk, except saying hi when they bump into each other in the hall way or bye when everyone leaves the classroom. But still Nami couldnt help slowly falling in love with him. She loves everything about him, the way smart him that is always concentrating in class and the way he looks so serious in class; also the way he looks when he plays basketball, and also the way he smiles that one time when Nami helped him during math class. Just seeing him makes Nami's heart skip a beat.]
Nami's eyes meet Shions and she felt her heart race. She quickly turned around and face her friends again.
"Sorry guys but i have to go check in with Mr. Hayama. I'll see you guys at lunch okay!" Nami ran the other direction where Shion cam frrom.
"Hey isnt Mr. Hayama's office the other deriction?" said Ichigo pointing at the opposite direction.
"Shhhhh." Risu put a finger in front of her lips signaling Ichigo to be quiet.
Jurius watched as Nami runs away and then looks at Shion who is now talking to Kir.
After School~Nami's POV
"Finally the day is over." I thought.
I sigh as i walk down the hall way back to my locker.

*bumb* *bumb*
"Eh? What's that?" i thought as I walked towards where the sound was coming from and noticed it was coming from the gym. I turned the corner that leads to the gym and stopped, frozen at what i am seeing...Shion was playing basketball. My whole body went numb.
"No! I got to leave now!" I screamed in my head as I tried to turn back and run out of there as fast as i can, but i was too mesmerize but the way Shion focus and his form while playing basketball.
"Why do you do this to me? Why can i not forget about you? Why cant i just forget about you? Why do i still love you? Why" those thought kept repeating in my head over and over again. I watched silently too focus on Shion, little did i know tears was already pouring out of my eyes now clouded with tears.
I took a few deep breaths and finally was able to control my feets again, slowly i turned around. I took my first step still feeling numb, and my stuff stumble out of my arms. Awaken from the noise, i quickly bent down to pick up my things and leave as soon as possible.

"Nami?" I paused hearing the voice i have come to know so well. There was no more sound from the basketball court, except for my breathing and his. Once again tears betrayed me as they slowly slide down my cheek.
I quickly garther my things and stood up ready to run for my life. As i was about to run something caught my arm. Shion spun me around so i was now facing him again. I looked to my left making sure not to make any eye contact with him.

"Why are you running away? Why are you crying?" Shion held onto my shoulders forcing me to face him.
"Its nothing." Once again i wanted to avoid his stare, knowing it my see through my lie.
"It dosent look like nothing." Shion looked concerned.
I was shocked. He was actually worried about me. Something warm tingle in my stomach.
"I have to tell him! I have to tell him right now!" I thought. I looked down and then up again looking straight at Shion.
Shion looked suprised at my sudden change. I took a step back, but his hands still linger on my shoulders.
I took a deep breath, "Shion I lov--"

*ring ring*
"Sorry but do you mind if i take this call?" Shion wave his phone at my direction and i nodded. He held the phone to his ear and began to speak, "Hello?...Ah Risu...."
"Risu?" I was shocked to hear him say my bestriends name. "What am i worring about? It could be help for homework or something, they do have the same classes. Even so, why does my heart feel like it is breaking?"
"...Gomen but i was practicing out at the gym....Oh you got out of class already?...Sure. We can go catch a movie or something if you want....Okay i'll meet you at the front. Bye." Shion closed his phone and turned back to me again.
"Ah gomen ne Nami, i have to go meet Risu at the front. What were you going to say?"

"Why? Why? WHY?" I thought. "Why is it Risu?" my head throb as i thought about it.
"Are you and Risu going out?" i wispered as i look down.

Shion got nervous and his face turned a bit red. "Yea, we've been going out since the begining of summer, but Risu didnt want me to tell anyone. So can you help me keep it a secret?"
I looked up and saw that he looking at me with those eyes and smile i fell in love with.
"Sure! Oh you better hurry before Risu gets mad at you!" I gave him my most cheerful smile.

"Thanks a lot Nami!" Shion gave me a hug, that i wish that time would just stop there and never end. He let go of me after my passing thought and dashed up the stairs to meet my bestfriend.
I listen as his footstep slowly fade away. I sink to the floor and l gave in to the tears that already clouded my eyes. My hands over where my heart once was.
"Watashi baka ne? Shion suki! Daisuki! Aishite!" I screamed and covered my face with my hands, wondering why would Risu do this. Seeing Shion this happy makes tears run down my cheek. Thinking that Shion loves Risu really makes me wonder...
I wispered, "Could you ever love me that way?"


Gomen but this is really really long!...its a sad romance story...and it was inspired by the song Could You Ever Love Me This Way, By Nikki Flores. Gomen ne is it is too sad or ifit dosent mad since...


AWESOME [: it made me tear tho
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