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Just a few tips to make it easier to understand~
Author's Notes
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Nami
Shion
Risu
Kir
Ichigo
Jurius
Kami

Summer Time~
"Hey Nami!" called Risu, Nami's bestfriend.
Nami turns around and smiles.
"Hey Risu! Want to hangout at the new cafe down the street?" asked Nami.
"Sure!"
Summer Time~Cafe
"So how is summer so far?" asked Risu as she takes a bit of her muffin.
"Its okay so far. There really isnt much to do during summer time." said Nami taking a sip of her ice green tea.
Risu takes another bit of her muffin.
"Have you and Shion talk during the summer?" Risu asked.
Nami was silent for a moment. "No."
Risu looked up at Nami shock. "What happened?"
"I just feel like i need to forget about him." wispered Nami smiling sadly at her friend.
"You sure? You had such a big crush on him for 3 years already." Risu looked worried.
Nami nodded. "I want to concentrate on my studies for once." Nami smiles.
"I hope that is really what you want." Risu gets up and leaves. "Bye bye Nami see you."
First Day of School (senior year)~
"Hey Nami over here!" called Risu waving her hand at Nami.
"Oh hey Risu, Jurius, Ichigo, Kami, Kir." Nami walked towards her group of friends smiling.
"How was your summer Nami?" asked Kir.
"It was okay, how bout you Kir?" asked Nami smiling.
"Being a lifegaurd is really a pain. Too bad we didnt get to hangout during the summer." said Kir as a matter a fact.
"Yea i was too busy with my Church things too." said Jurius.
"Well at least we are together again now that school started!" cheered Kami.
"Hey Nami, Shio--" Ichigo was cut off when someone was walking towards them.
Nami turned around and was faced to faced with Shion Suzuki, her 3 year crush.
[Nami has like Shion since the first time she saw him. Since then she and Shion were some-what friends. Nami's friends are also friends of Shion...but Shion and Nami rarely talk, except saying hi when they bump into each other in the hall way or bye when everyone leaves the classroom. But still Nami couldnt help slowly falling in love with him. She loves everything about him, the way smart him that is always concentrating in class and the way he looks so serious in class; also the way he looks when he plays basketball, and also the way he smiles that one time when Nami helped him during math class. Just seeing him makes Nami's heart skip a beat.]
Nami's eyes meet Shions and she felt her heart race. She quickly turned around and face her friends again.
"Sorry guys but i have to go check in with Mr. Hayama. I'll see you guys at lunch okay!" Nami ran the other direction where Shion cam frrom.
"Hey isnt Mr. Hayama's office the other deriction?" said Ichigo pointing at the opposite direction.
"Shhhhh." Risu put a finger in front of her lips signaling Ichigo to be quiet.
Jurius watched as Nami runs away and then looks at Shion who is now talking to Kir.
After School~Nami's POV
"Finally the day is over." I thought.
I sigh as i walk down the hall way back to my locker.

*bumb* *bumb*
"Eh? What's that?" i thought as I walked towards where the sound was coming from and noticed it was coming from the gym. I turned the corner that leads to the gym and stopped, frozen at what i am seeing...Shion was playing basketball. My whole body went numb.
"No! I got to leave now!" I screamed in my head as I tried to turn back and run out of there as fast as i can, but i was too mesmerize but the way Shion focus and his form while playing basketball.
"Why do you do this to me? Why can i not forget about you? Why cant i just forget about you? Why do i still love you? Why" those thought kept repeating in my head over and over again. I watched silently too focus on Shion, little did i know tears was already pouring out of my eyes now clouded with tears.
I took a few deep breaths and finally was able to control my feets again, slowly i turned around. I took my first step still feeling numb, and my stuff stumble out of my arms. Awaken from the noise, i quickly bent down to pick up my things and leave as soon as possible.

"Nami?" I paused hearing the voice i have come to know so well. There was no more sound from the basketball court, except for my breathing and his. Once again tears betrayed me as they slowly slide down my cheek.
I quickly garther my things and stood up ready to run for my life. As i was about to run something caught my arm. Shion spun me around so i was now facing him again. I looked to my left making sure not to make any eye contact with him.

"Why are you running away? Why are you crying?" Shion held onto my shoulders forcing me to face him.
"Its nothing." Once again i wanted to avoid his stare, knowing it my see through my lie.
"It dosent look like nothing." Shion looked concerned.
I was shocked. He was actually worried about me. Something warm tingle in my stomach.
"I have to tell him! I have to tell him right now!" I thought. I looked down and then up again looking straight at Shion.
Shion looked suprised at my sudden change. I took a step back, but his hands still linger on my shoulders.
I took a deep breath, "Shion I lov--"

*ring ring*
"Sorry but do you mind if i take this call?" Shion wave his phone at my direction and i nodded. He held the phone to his ear and began to speak, "Hello?...Ah Risu...."
"Risu?" I was shocked to hear him say my bestriends name. "What am i worring about? It could be help for homework or something, they do have the same classes. Even so, why does my heart feel like it is breaking?"
"...Gomen but i was practicing out at the gym....Oh you got out of class already?...Sure. We can go catch a movie or something if you want....Okay i'll meet you at the front. Bye." Shion closed his phone and turned back to me again.
"Ah gomen ne Nami, i have to go meet Risu at the front. What were you going to say?"

"Why? Why? WHY?" I thought. "Why is it Risu?" my head throb as i thought about it.
"Are you and Risu going out?" i wispered as i look down.

Shion got nervous and his face turned a bit red. "Yea, we've been going out since the begining of summer, but Risu didnt want me to tell anyone. So can you help me keep it a secret?"
I looked up and saw that he looking at me with those eyes and smile i fell in love with.
"Sure! Oh you better hurry before Risu gets mad at you!" I gave him my most cheerful smile.

"Thanks a lot Nami!" Shion gave me a hug, that i wish that time would just stop there and never end. He let go of me after my passing thought and dashed up the stairs to meet my bestfriend.
I listen as his footstep slowly fade away. I sink to the floor and l gave in to the tears that already clouded my eyes. My hands over where my heart once was.
"Watashi baka ne? Shion suki! Daisuki! Aishite!" I screamed and covered my face with my hands, wondering why would Risu do this. Seeing Shion this happy makes tears run down my cheek. Thinking that Shion loves Risu really makes me wonder...
I wispered, "Could you ever love me that way?"


Gomen but this is really really long!...its a sad romance story...and it was inspired by the song Could You Ever Love Me This Way, By Nikki Flores. Gomen ne is it is too sad or ifit dosent mad since...


AWESOME [: it made me tear tho


Arigato...it made me cry when i was writing it too...
Posted 8/18/08 , edited 8/18/08

xXyuki202Xx wrote:


Sweetx3 wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Just a few tips to make it easier to understand~
Author's Notes
Thoughts
Nami
Shion
Risu
Kir
Ichigo
Jurius
Kami

Summer Time~
"Hey Nami!" called Risu, Nami's bestfriend.
Nami turns around and smiles.
"Hey Risu! Want to hangout at the new cafe down the street?" asked Nami.
"Sure!"
Summer Time~Cafe
"So how is summer so far?" asked Risu as she takes a bit of her muffin.
"Its okay so far. There really isnt much to do during summer time." said Nami taking a sip of her ice green tea.
Risu takes another bit of her muffin.
"Have you and Shion talk during the summer?" Risu asked.
Nami was silent for a moment. "No."
Risu looked up at Nami shock. "What happened?"
"I just feel like i need to forget about him." wispered Nami smiling sadly at her friend.
"You sure? You had such a big crush on him for 3 years already." Risu looked worried.
Nami nodded. "I want to concentrate on my studies for once." Nami smiles.
"I hope that is really what you want." Risu gets up and leaves. "Bye bye Nami see you."
First Day of School (senior year)~
"Hey Nami over here!" called Risu waving her hand at Nami.
"Oh hey Risu, Jurius, Ichigo, Kami, Kir." Nami walked towards her group of friends smiling.
"How was your summer Nami?" asked Kir.
"It was okay, how bout you Kir?" asked Nami smiling.
"Being a lifegaurd is really a pain. Too bad we didnt get to hangout during the summer." said Kir as a matter a fact.
"Yea i was too busy with my Church things too." said Jurius.
"Well at least we are together again now that school started!" cheered Kami.
"Hey Nami, Shio--" Ichigo was cut off when someone was walking towards them.
Nami turned around and was faced to faced with Shion Suzuki, her 3 year crush.
[Nami has like Shion since the first time she saw him. Since then she and Shion were some-what friends. Nami's friends are also friends of Shion...but Shion and Nami rarely talk, except saying hi when they bump into each other in the hall way or bye when everyone leaves the classroom. But still Nami couldnt help slowly falling in love with him. She loves everything about him, the way smart him that is always concentrating in class and the way he looks so serious in class; also the way he looks when he plays basketball, and also the way he smiles that one time when Nami helped him during math class. Just seeing him makes Nami's heart skip a beat.]
Nami's eyes meet Shions and she felt her heart race. She quickly turned around and face her friends again.
"Sorry guys but i have to go check in with Mr. Hayama. I'll see you guys at lunch okay!" Nami ran the other direction where Shion cam frrom.
"Hey isnt Mr. Hayama's office the other deriction?" said Ichigo pointing at the opposite direction.
"Shhhhh." Risu put a finger in front of her lips signaling Ichigo to be quiet.
Jurius watched as Nami runs away and then looks at Shion who is now talking to Kir.
After School~Nami's POV
"Finally the day is over." I thought.
I sigh as i walk down the hall way back to my locker.

*bumb* *bumb*
"Eh? What's that?" i thought as I walked towards where the sound was coming from and noticed it was coming from the gym. I turned the corner that leads to the gym and stopped, frozen at what i am seeing...Shion was playing basketball. My whole body went numb.
"No! I got to leave now!" I screamed in my head as I tried to turn back and run out of there as fast as i can, but i was too mesmerize but the way Shion focus and his form while playing basketball.
"Why do you do this to me? Why can i not forget about you? Why cant i just forget about you? Why do i still love you? Why" those thought kept repeating in my head over and over again. I watched silently too focus on Shion, little did i know tears was already pouring out of my eyes now clouded with tears.
I took a few deep breaths and finally was able to control my feets again, slowly i turned around. I took my first step still feeling numb, and my stuff stumble out of my arms. Awaken from the noise, i quickly bent down to pick up my things and leave as soon as possible.

"Nami?" I paused hearing the voice i have come to know so well. There was no more sound from the basketball court, except for my breathing and his. Once again tears betrayed me as they slowly slide down my cheek.
I quickly garther my things and stood up ready to run for my life. As i was about to run something caught my arm. Shion spun me around so i was now facing him again. I looked to my left making sure not to make any eye contact with him.

"Why are you running away? Why are you crying?" Shion held onto my shoulders forcing me to face him.
"Its nothing." Once again i wanted to avoid his stare, knowing it my see through my lie.
"It dosent look like nothing." Shion looked concerned.
I was shocked. He was actually worried about me. Something warm tingle in my stomach.
"I have to tell him! I have to tell him right now!" I thought. I looked down and then up again looking straight at Shion.
Shion looked suprised at my sudden change. I took a step back, but his hands still linger on my shoulders.
I took a deep breath, "Shion I lov--"

*ring ring*
"Sorry but do you mind if i take this call?" Shion wave his phone at my direction and i nodded. He held the phone to his ear and began to speak, "Hello?...Ah Risu...."
"Risu?" I was shocked to hear him say my bestriends name. "What am i worring about? It could be help for homework or something, they do have the same classes. Even so, why does my heart feel like it is breaking?"
"...Gomen but i was practicing out at the gym....Oh you got out of class already?...Sure. We can go catch a movie or something if you want....Okay i'll meet you at the front. Bye." Shion closed his phone and turned back to me again.
"Ah gomen ne Nami, i have to go meet Risu at the front. What were you going to say?"

"Why? Why? WHY?" I thought. "Why is it Risu?" my head throb as i thought about it.
"Are you and Risu going out?" i wispered as i look down.

Shion got nervous and his face turned a bit red. "Yea, we've been going out since the begining of summer, but Risu didnt want me to tell anyone. So can you help me keep it a secret?"
I looked up and saw that he looking at me with those eyes and smile i fell in love with.
"Sure! Oh you better hurry before Risu gets mad at you!" I gave him my most cheerful smile.

"Thanks a lot Nami!" Shion gave me a hug, that i wish that time would just stop there and never end. He let go of me after my passing thought and dashed up the stairs to meet my bestfriend.
I listen as his footstep slowly fade away. I sink to the floor and l gave in to the tears that already clouded my eyes. My hands over where my heart once was.
"Watashi baka ne? Shion suki! Daisuki! Aishite!" I screamed and covered my face with my hands, wondering why would Risu do this. Seeing Shion this happy makes tears run down my cheek. Thinking that Shion loves Risu really makes me wonder...
I wispered, "Could you ever love me that way?"


Gomen but this is really really long!...its a sad romance story...and it was inspired by the song Could You Ever Love Me This Way, By Nikki Flores. Gomen ne is it is too sad or ifit dosent mad since...


AWESOME [: it made me tear tho


Arigato...it made me cry when i was writing it too...


my god! is it a true story ?! :OOO
Posted 8/18/08

yu-chan495 wrote:

one day we had a new seat arrangement....after, at my back was one of the guys my friends liked.some days later he spread a message that says he likes me....in valentines he sent me a love letter.but i actually new he truth.the truth he doesnt really like me.he was always around this girl and they always looked like lovers...everyday i told that to my bestfriend but she doesn't believe me. after that day she asked about it to the guy...that guy confessed that he didnt really like me.he was just using me so that he could always be with the girl he was always with because once the girl knew that he like her she would go away from him because she was shy always whenever they tease her.my first love letter was a fake!!! i even fell for him.....well actually just a little!!!

........today,i'm sooo happy!!!two of the most popular boys are always near me!!!
the 1st boy is sitting in front of me and always talks to me!!!
the second boy seats a little far from me but i think that he likes me well it's because he always go near me,sits beside me,talks to me and also when it was raining , he took my umbrella and we were both walking in the rain and him holding the umbrella!!! we were walking for so long my friends even teased me...even after the rain he keeps on following me!!! it was like hours after he walked away because his friends called him!!! it was sooo romantic!!!kyaaaaahhhh!!!!! i'll never forget that!!!


OMG!! UR SO LUCKYYYYY!! ><
The guy i used to like, he was a year older than me... so when he found out i liked him. He told his friends (of course) then all of them started teasing me soon it became harassment. They were always saying my name &saying my name likes the guy i likes' name!! my god so annoying! -__________- but everybody knew he liked me too but never admitted it >______>
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Sweetx3 wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:


Sweetx3 wrote:


xXyuki202Xx wrote:

Just a few tips to make it easier to understand~
Author's Notes
Thoughts
Nami
Shion
Risu
Kir
Ichigo
Jurius
Kami

Summer Time~
"Hey Nami!" called Risu, Nami's bestfriend.
Nami turns around and smiles.
"Hey Risu! Want to hangout at the new cafe down the street?" asked Nami.
"Sure!"
Summer Time~Cafe
"So how is summer so far?" asked Risu as she takes a bit of her muffin.
"Its okay so far. There really isnt much to do during summer time." said Nami taking a sip of her ice green tea.
Risu takes another bit of her muffin.
"Have you and Shion talk during the summer?" Risu asked.
Nami was silent for a moment. "No."
Risu looked up at Nami shock. "What happened?"
"I just feel like i need to forget about him." wispered Nami smiling sadly at her friend.
"You sure? You had such a big crush on him for 3 years already." Risu looked worried.
Nami nodded. "I want to concentrate on my studies for once." Nami smiles.
"I hope that is really what you want." Risu gets up and leaves. "Bye bye Nami see you."
First Day of School (senior year)~
"Hey Nami over here!" called Risu waving her hand at Nami.
"Oh hey Risu, Jurius, Ichigo, Kami, Kir." Nami walked towards her group of friends smiling.
"How was your summer Nami?" asked Kir.
"It was okay, how bout you Kir?" asked Nami smiling.
"Being a lifegaurd is really a pain. Too bad we didnt get to hangout during the summer." said Kir as a matter a fact.
"Yea i was too busy with my Church things too." said Jurius.
"Well at least we are together again now that school started!" cheered Kami.
"Hey Nami, Shio--" Ichigo was cut off when someone was walking towards them.
Nami turned around and was faced to faced with Shion Suzuki, her 3 year crush.
[Nami has like Shion since the first time she saw him. Since then she and Shion were some-what friends. Nami's friends are also friends of Shion...but Shion and Nami rarely talk, except saying hi when they bump into each other in the hall way or bye when everyone leaves the classroom. But still Nami couldnt help slowly falling in love with him. She loves everything about him, the way smart him that is always concentrating in class and the way he looks so serious in class; also the way he looks when he plays basketball, and also the way he smiles that one time when Nami helped him during math class. Just seeing him makes Nami's heart skip a beat.]
Nami's eyes meet Shions and she felt her heart race. She quickly turned around and face her friends again.
"Sorry guys but i have to go check in with Mr. Hayama. I'll see you guys at lunch okay!" Nami ran the other direction where Shion cam frrom.
"Hey isnt Mr. Hayama's office the other deriction?" said Ichigo pointing at the opposite direction.
"Shhhhh." Risu put a finger in front of her lips signaling Ichigo to be quiet.
Jurius watched as Nami runs away and then looks at Shion who is now talking to Kir.
After School~Nami's POV
"Finally the day is over." I thought.
I sigh as i walk down the hall way back to my locker.

*bumb* *bumb*
"Eh? What's that?" i thought as I walked towards where the sound was coming from and noticed it was coming from the gym. I turned the corner that leads to the gym and stopped, frozen at what i am seeing...Shion was playing basketball. My whole body went numb.
"No! I got to leave now!" I screamed in my head as I tried to turn back and run out of there as fast as i can, but i was too mesmerize but the way Shion focus and his form while playing basketball.
"Why do you do this to me? Why can i not forget about you? Why cant i just forget about you? Why do i still love you? Why" those thought kept repeating in my head over and over again. I watched silently too focus on Shion, little did i know tears was already pouring out of my eyes now clouded with tears.
I took a few deep breaths and finally was able to control my feets again, slowly i turned around. I took my first step still feeling numb, and my stuff stumble out of my arms. Awaken from the noise, i quickly bent down to pick up my things and leave as soon as possible.

"Nami?" I paused hearing the voice i have come to know so well. There was no more sound from the basketball court, except for my breathing and his. Once again tears betrayed me as they slowly slide down my cheek.
I quickly garther my things and stood up ready to run for my life. As i was about to run something caught my arm. Shion spun me around so i was now facing him again. I looked to my left making sure not to make any eye contact with him.

"Why are you running away? Why are you crying?" Shion held onto my shoulders forcing me to face him.
"Its nothing." Once again i wanted to avoid his stare, knowing it my see through my lie.
"It dosent look like nothing." Shion looked concerned.
I was shocked. He was actually worried about me. Something warm tingle in my stomach.
"I have to tell him! I have to tell him right now!" I thought. I looked down and then up again looking straight at Shion.
Shion looked suprised at my sudden change. I took a step back, but his hands still linger on my shoulders.
I took a deep breath, "Shion I lov--"

*ring ring*
"Sorry but do you mind if i take this call?" Shion wave his phone at my direction and i nodded. He held the phone to his ear and began to speak, "Hello?...Ah Risu...."
"Risu?" I was shocked to hear him say my bestriends name. "What am i worring about? It could be help for homework or something, they do have the same classes. Even so, why does my heart feel like it is breaking?"
"...Gomen but i was practicing out at the gym....Oh you got out of class already?...Sure. We can go catch a movie or something if you want....Okay i'll meet you at the front. Bye." Shion closed his phone and turned back to me again.
"Ah gomen ne Nami, i have to go meet Risu at the front. What were you going to say?"

"Why? Why? WHY?" I thought. "Why is it Risu?" my head throb as i thought about it.
"Are you and Risu going out?" i wispered as i look down.

Shion got nervous and his face turned a bit red. "Yea, we've been going out since the begining of summer, but Risu didnt want me to tell anyone. So can you help me keep it a secret?"
I looked up and saw that he looking at me with those eyes and smile i fell in love with.
"Sure! Oh you better hurry before Risu gets mad at you!" I gave him my most cheerful smile.

"Thanks a lot Nami!" Shion gave me a hug, that i wish that time would just stop there and never end. He let go of me after my passing thought and dashed up the stairs to meet my bestfriend.
I listen as his footstep slowly fade away. I sink to the floor and l gave in to the tears that already clouded my eyes. My hands over where my heart once was.
"Watashi baka ne? Shion suki! Daisuki! Aishite!" I screamed and covered my face with my hands, wondering why would Risu do this. Seeing Shion this happy makes tears run down my cheek. Thinking that Shion loves Risu really makes me wonder...
I wispered, "Could you ever love me that way?"


Gomen but this is really really long!...its a sad romance story...and it was inspired by the song Could You Ever Love Me This Way, By Nikki Flores. Gomen ne is it is too sad or ifit dosent mad since...


AWESOME [: it made me tear tho


Arigato...it made me cry when i was writing it too...


my god! is it a true story ?! :OOO


it is actually....but i kinda left some stuff out...
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Sweetx3 wrote:


yu-chan495 wrote:

one day we had a new seat arrangement....after, at my back was one of the guys my friends liked.some days later he spread a message that says he likes me....in valentines he sent me a love letter.but i actually new he truth.the truth he doesnt really like me.he was always around this girl and they always looked like lovers...everyday i told that to my bestfriend but she doesn't believe me. after that day she asked about it to the guy...that guy confessed that he didnt really like me.he was just using me so that he could always be with the girl he was always with because once the girl knew that he like her she would go away from him because she was shy always whenever they tease her.my first love letter was a fake!!! i even fell for him.....well actually just a little!!!

........today,i'm sooo happy!!!two of the most popular boys are always near me!!!
the 1st boy is sitting in front of me and always talks to me!!!
the second boy seats a little far from me but i think that he likes me well it's because he always go near me,sits beside me,talks to me and also when it was raining , he took my umbrella and we were both walking in the rain and him holding the umbrella!!! we were walking for so long my friends even teased me...even after the rain he keeps on following me!!! it was like hours after he walked away because his friends called him!!! it was sooo romantic!!!kyaaaaahhhh!!!!! i'll never forget that!!!


OMG!! UR SO LUCKYYYYY!! ><
The guy i used to like, he was a year older than me... so when he found out i liked him. He told his friends (of course) then all of them started teasing me soon it became harassment. They were always saying my name &saying my name likes the guy i likes' name!! my god so annoying! -__________- but everybody knew he liked me too but never admitted it >______>


at first they also teased the guy,not me,then the whole class heard it then the teachers....what they heard was that he liked me!!!after that they also teased me!!! he was even seated beside me!!! so i blushed just a little..
at first i didn't mind it then after some days i couldn't stop thinking about him i don't even know why!!! so that's when i started to like him!!! hahaha!!! i really am lucky!!! having cute guys in the same class as me!!!
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o!i got one!^^(but this is like a like a sad love story..)ok so once there was this girl who had a crush one this boy at high skool^^(awww)one day she confessed her love to him..then he said he liked her too!then they started going out..but they loved each other in different ways..for the girl the boy was the only one for her..but for the boy she was just another girl...and everyday he would send her a doll...and on the girl's b-day she waited and waited for the boy to call..but he never called...so whent it was 1pm the girl dicided to go to sleep..then her phone rang..it was him.."come outside" he said....so the girl ran outside and was so happy to be able to see him on her b-day..but that happiness didnt last so long....."here" the boy saidwhen she arrived..."what is this?" asked the girl..."its your b-day present"said the boy"i didnt give it you to yesterday so i'm giving it to you now.." the girl was shocked how could he?acting like nothin happened..then the next day at skool she saw the boy with another girl he handed the girl a doll too...and he smiled..the thing he never showed her,,,,one day he came to sent her another doll then she said "say you love me.." "what?" asked the boy."say you love me,please" "its not that easy for me to say i love you so easily...if you want to hear me say i love you so bad..then go and find another guy.."said the boy..then he left..just liked that...the girl was crushed...the next day she waited for his call..waiting for his apoligy...but it never came..untill late at night..her phone rang "come outside" he said..then the girl went out..walking and thinking that this was it..she was going togive him a piece of her mind...she met him at the bus stop..and there he was..holding a doll as usual..."wow..you really came?i thought you were pissed^^" said the boy..the girl was heartbroken..he was acting like nothing happened at all...he held out the big doll..."i dont need it.."said the girl.."what?why?" asked the boy. the girl grabed the doll and threw it onto the road.." I DONT NEED IT!I DONT NEED IT ANYMORE!I DONT WANT TO SEE A PERSON LIKE YOU EVER AGAIN! she spat out the words that were inside of her.."i-i'm srry.."said the boy in a tiny voice...then he went to the road to pick up the doll.."stupid!y are you picking up the doll?just throw it away!"shouted the girl..thehn.. HONK!HONK! a truck was heading right for the boy!the girl shouted"hey!move!there's a-" BOOM!!!!!! that was the last of him...then the girlwent home..and counted the dolls...1..2..3..200..240..285..400....440....485.....thats where it ENDED then she huged the last doll tight i love you~ shocked she droped the doll..then she pressed all the other doll's stomachs..i love you,i love you,i love you~~~ came out nonstop..how could she be so foolish?he loved her all the time...then she took out the big doll..the one still stained with his blood then she pressed its stomach..then came out the voice witch she was missing so much.."(w/e her name is) we have been loving each other for 485 days...you know what 485 means?it means that i liked you too..but..um..i was too shy to say it..but if you forgive me and take this doll..then i will say i love you everyday.. until i die.. so...i love you<3" then the girl started to cry..how could she be so dumb???he loved her until his last breath!and thats the reason it gave me courage,to live a wonderful life.....i love you too (w/e his name is) THE END.. well..you guys might have herd this befor but..just letting people who dont know this to know it!it was so sad...hope you liked it!^^
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o!i got one!^^(but this is like a like a sad love story..)ok so once there was this girl who had a crush one this boy at high skool^^(awww)one day she confessed her love to him..then he said he liked her too!then they started going out..but they loved each other in different ways..for the girl the boy was the only one for her..but for the boy she was just another girl...and everyday he would send her a doll...and on the girl's b-day she waited and waited for the boy to call..but he never called...so whent it was 1pm the girl dicided to go to sleep..then her phone rang..it was him.."come outside" he said....so the girl ran outside and was so happy to be able to see him on her b-day..but that happiness didnt last so long....."here" the boy saidwhen she arrived..."what is this?" asked the girl..."its your b-day present"said the boy"i didnt give it you to yesterday so i'm giving it to you now.." the girl was shocked how could he?acting like nothin happened..then the next day at skool she saw the boy with another girl he handed the girl a doll too...and he smiled..the thing he never showed her,,,,one day he came to sent her another doll then she said "say you love me.." "what?" asked the boy."say you love me,please" "its not that easy for me to say i love you so easily...if you want to hear me say i love you so bad..then go and find another guy.."said the boy..then he left..just liked that...the girl was crushed...the next day she waited for his call..waiting for his apoligy...but it never came..untill late at night..her phone rang "come outside" he said..then the girl went out..walking and thinking that this was it..she was going togive him a piece of her mind...she met him at the bus stop..and there he was..holding a doll as usual..."wow..you really came?i thought you were pissed^^" said the boy..the girl was heartbroken..he was acting like nothing happened at all...he held out the big doll..."i dont need it.."said the girl.."what?why?" asked the boy. the girl grabed the doll and threw it onto the road.." I DONT NEED IT!I DONT NEED IT ANYMORE!I DONT WANT TO SEE A PERSON LIKE YOU EVER AGAIN! she spat out the words that were inside of her.."i-i'm srry.."said the boy in a tiny voice...then he went to the road to pick up the doll.."stupid!y are you picking up the doll?just throw it away!"shouted the girl..thehn.. HONK!HONK! a truck was heading right for the boy!the girl shouted"hey!move!there's a-" BOOM!!!!!! that was the last of him...then the girlwent home..and counted the dolls...1..2..3..200..240..285..400....440....485.....thats where it ENDED then she huged the last doll tight i love you~ shocked she droped the doll..then she pressed all the other doll's stomachs..i love you,i love you,i love you~~~ came out nonstop..how could she be so foolish?he loved her all the time...then she took out the big doll..the one still stained with his blood then she pressed its stomach..then came out the voice witch she was missing so much.."(w/e her name is) we have been loving each other for 485 days...you know what 485 means?it means that i liked you too..but..um..i was too shy to say it..but if you forgive me and take this doll..then i will say i love you everyday.. until i die.. so...i love you<3" then the girl started to cry..how could she be so dumb???he loved her until his last breath!and thats the reason it gave me courage,to live a wonderful life.....i love you too (w/e his name is) THE END.. well..you guys might have herd this befor but..just letting people who dont know this to know it!it was so sad...hope you liked it!^^


hehe....... it s saaad!! but i like it ^_^
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Love stories >.< . My life over the pass 16 years is sad I didnt have any crush on any girl and niether they had on me.

So... Yeah my love life is sad

I hope a romantic event happens to me soon
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how millions of people feel across the world.....

People say i dont pay attention anymore. In conversations i just seem to stare right through them. Every now and then id tune in but something on my mind is bugging me?......"how should i ask her".......again a scenario would go through my head of how id like to idealy express how i feel...As i think about this..anything around me seems completly obliviouse....id walk into a wall if there was one in my way....

It always seems that the way id picture us being together would never turn out to be like that in real life *sigh*...i just need a chance..to be alone with her to tell her how i feel..for no one else to tell me what i should do...to be completly honest with her......the one chance i need is the the one i pictured in my thoughts LOL.....actually iv been told love is unpredictable and what ever happens happens....Funny that..im a big believer in fate and if things dont go my way i learn to accept that its how the cookie crumbles...

So did i get a chance? How could i know iv hade a chance if i dont even know she likes me....whens a good time to decide with confidence to ask her the big question or to even know she feels something?....is she waiting? is she getting too impatient? is her heart gonna explode with fustration and become mad at me because im too much of a coward....that im not living up to the man she thought i was??.....nahhh dont think like that.... she likes u...at the very least....AS A FRIEND....

Well....she smiles at me when shes sad....She rests her forehead on my chest when shes tired.....when shes happy...its probably because im there......holding my hand for no apparent reason.....is that a chance?....maybe.....I feel good being able to be a good friend of hers...even if we are not together as a couple...

Going out with a couple of friends.....its probably is fate that i get to see her again ( thats my opinion anyways ROFL!)....or maybe chance....or maybe even luck......
Even being in a large group of fun people she seems to only stay with me....talking to me about everything i am interested in....its nice being able to get along so well and not be a bastard and not let my mind get sidetracked by some girls big rack or sexy slick body when she walks past usfor ....."iv never stared at someones eyes so long in my life....."

At work she stares at me and says nothing.....she doesnt smile and seems exhausted.....do i go and ask her if shes okay?.......haha she puts her head on my chest...."Shes tired"......i get this wiered feeling in my heart..or was it my stomach? i donno i think its both...."is everything okay??".......she says its all not okay........ she takes her head off me and walks away without another word.... did i do something wrong again >_<?

CONFUSION!!!......iv known her for so long and havent been able to tell her how i feel!........Its been so long that now i cant tell wether shes my friend or something more....any little thing she does....im not sure if its because she really wants to be with me or not.....shes mad at me one day...and glad to see me the next.......its my fault for waiting so long i guess.....


I NEED TO TELL HER HOW I FEEL....i cannot go on like this....i tried distracting myself with other girls...but the whole world seems to remind me of her.....thinking of her perfume,thinking of her soft silky hair, thinking of the way she laughes,thinking of the way she smiles,watching her eat,watching her sleep,The feeling of her warm hugs,the feeling of her smooth skin, holding her hand, listening to her sweet voice, the way she looks so cute when shes angy, the way u feel when shes sad.........*TAKES A BREATH* i will do it i swear the next time i see her......

ill tell her how i feel god damn it >_<

I wont get to see her for another two weeks.....i guess the anticipation is gonna kill me...but when i see her ill show her how i feel and how iv always felt......no matter the outcome i guess its the only way id ever know and the only way i will ever be able to move on with my life....hopefully with her :)....

someone once said to me.....love kills ur taste for anything good in this world...

i have no idea what that means but i guess i cant enjoy most things in life because im thinking about her and me 2 much.....


I Like her....

but i have a Girlfriend..... Y_Y;.....sometimes u meet the right girl for u when its too late.....










T H E------------E N D

LOL WHAT A GAY STORY :P

this ones for aichi ^^ LOL thought ud like to see me write a love story ROFL!...plz tell me its good LOL!!...btw its completly made up >_>; ROFL!...


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how millions of people feel across the world.....

People say i dont pay attention anymore. In conversations i just seem to stare right through them. Every now and then id tune in but something on my mind is bugging me?......"how should i ask her".......again a scenario would go through my head of how id like to idealy express how i feel...As i think about this..anything around me seems completly obliviouse....id walk into a wall if there was one in my way....

It always seems that the way id picture us being together would never turn out to be like that in real life *sigh*...i just need a chance..to be alone with her to tell her how i feel..for no one else to tell me what i should do...to be completly honest with her......the one chance i need is the the one i pictured in my thoughts LOL.....actually iv been told love is unpredictable and what ever happens happens....Funny that..im a big believer in fate and if things dont go my way i learn to accept that its how the cookie crumbles...

So did i get a chance? How could i know iv hade a chance if i dont even know she likes me....whens a good time to decide with confidence to ask her the big question or to even know she feels something?....is she waiting? is she getting too impatient? is her heart gonna explode with fustration and become mad at me because im too much of a coward....that im not living up to the man she thought i was??.....nahhh dont think like that.... she likes u...at the very least....AS A FRIEND....

Well....she smiles at me when shes sad....She rests her forehead on my chest when shes tired.....when shes happy...its probably because im there......holding my hand for no apparent reason.....is that a chance?....maybe.....I feel good being able to be a good friend of hers...even if we are not together as a couple...

Going out with a couple of friends.....its probably is fate that i get to see her again ( thats my opinion anyways ROFL!)....or maybe chance....or maybe even luck......
Even being in a large group of fun people she seems to only stay with me....talking to me about everything i am interested in....its nice being able to get along so well and not be a bastard and not let my mind get sidetracked by some girls big rack or sexy slick body when she walks past usfor ....."iv never stared at someones eyes so long in my life....."

At work she stares at me and says nothing.....she doesnt smile and seems exhausted.....do i go and ask her if shes okay?.......haha she puts her head on my chest...."Shes tired"......i get this wiered feeling in my heart..or was it my stomach? i donno i think its both...."is everything okay??".......she says its all not okay........ she takes her head off me and walks away without another word.... did i do something wrong again >_<?

CONFUSION!!!......iv known her for so long and havent been able to tell her how i feel!........Its been so long that now i cant tell wether shes my friend or something more....any little thing she does....im not sure if its because she really wants to be with me or not.....shes mad at me one day...and glad to see me the next.......its my fault for waiting so long i guess.....


I NEED TO TELL HER HOW I FEEL....i cannot go on like this....i tried distracting myself with other girls...but the whole world seems to remind me of her.....thinking of her perfume,thinking of her soft silky hair, thinking of the way she laughes,thinking of the way she smiles,watching her eat,watching her sleep,The feeling of her warm hugs,the feeling of her smooth skin, holding her hand, listening to her sweet voice, the way she looks so cute when shes angy, the way u feel when shes sad.........*TAKES A BREATH* i will do it i swear the next time i see her......

ill tell her how i feel god damn it >_<

I wont get to see her for another two weeks.....i guess the anticipation is gonna kill me...but when i see her ill show her how i feel and how iv always felt......no matter the outcome i guess its the only way id ever know and the only way i will ever be able to move on with my life....hopefully with her :)....

someone once said to me.....love kills ur taste for anything good in this world...

i have no idea what that means but i guess i cant enjoy most things in life because im thinking about her and me 2 much.....


I Like her....

but i have a Girlfriend..... Y_Y;.....sometimes u meet the right girl for u when its too late.....










T H E------------E N D

LOL WHAT A GAY STORY :P

this ones for aichi ^^ LOL thought ud like to see me write a love story ROFL!...plz tell me its good LOL!!...btw its completly made up >_>; ROFL!...




Oh my, oh my, oh MY!! For once i thought it was real!! Lol, you got me, Chad! Way to go!!

Sooooo romantic.... Hohoho...
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Sorry, I removed my story, it wasnt fiction...
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the same thing that was said on the one up ^_-
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Sorry, I removed my story, it wasnt fiction...


why dont you put it in the free stories... i wasnt able to read it!! srr!!
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Name: Alice in Wonderland...It's Not as Wonderful as you think....

Chapter 1 - Wonderland? This is FAR from wonderful...

Alice Scarlet -
Bunny Boy (Bobby or Bobtail) - (Please imagine him as what I wrote, and imagine him to be cuter)

I yawned and stretched lazily across my soft carpeted floor, my hands hitting something hard when stretching absent mindedly. "Ow..." I muttered while glaring at the hard object I just hit, a book. My eye twitched, for a book it really felt like hard brick somehow, I then picked it up and read the cover : Alice in Wonderland. Such a thick fat book it was. I rolled my eyes at my stupidity, guess yesterday I putted it right beside my head after hitting the covers--I mean the carpeted floor. I then looked at the clock : 12:00 p.m....I slept at 6 yesterday...Or maybe it was yesterday?

Strange. But as I wanted to stand up, I felt something soft and warm near my left foot. Wait. Warm? My head alarm quickly fired up and I jumped away, accidentally hitting it alittle. "Ouch! And I was having a nice sleep too---Wa! I'm late~! She's going to have my head sooner or later!" A cute yet boy-ish pitched voice sounded through my ears as I stared blankly at the "intruder" who just woke up. A boy, no older than 17 or 16, pale skin with pink-ish hue against his cheeks, pale blond hair and bright baby-blue eyes with a spark of sea blue in them, adding rosy pink lips of course; and he wore really strange clothings : A red waist coat, white frilly shirt on the inside, with black bell wide pants on the ends. He looked so fragile like a doll. And then he turned his anxious gaze toward me, but then it turned into a glare as he pointed an accusing finger toward me. "You!! What have you done to the portal...Oh such a soft carpet you have...No! Bunny snap out of it! Anyways, what have you done to my portal you evil witch?!" He yelled, making me have a headache from his high voice and making angry at the same time, how dare he accuse me? I didn't even do anything to his stupid portal!

I growled angrily and slammed the wall beside me, causing it to shake abit as I took two short angry strides towards that annoying bunny. "Look, I did NOT do ANYTHING with that FUCKING DAMNED portal fo yours! And for your information, I don't anything about HOW, WHY, did you come here!! Now, shut it pip-queak(He's shorter at one head) and explain how I stuff you back in that fucking portal!!" I yelled as I was few inches close to that bunny's face, the bunny quickly whimpered at the sound of my voice and his ears flattened down, making a very scared( I hate to admit but it's cute)face. I rolled my eyes and soften my voice this time, making the bunny perk up slightly, "Look...Just tell me how to make that portal..." I said while patting the bunny boy's head. He now looked up at me, his eyes shining with happiness as he chirped, "It's very simple! To find it! But Bunny doesn't know where he is at..." and drooped his ears again. My eye twitched, why did this kid have to be so damn cute?

Wait...My mind clicked and I quickly took the "Alice in Wonderland" book towards the bunny and asked, "You're from Wonderland right?". He then nodded vigorously and my hands shook aggresively as the book suddenly shook all over, making the bunny boy widen his eyes in terror as he grabbed the hinge of my long sleeved shirt(I took of my coat), "Bunny really scared!!! Bunny really really scared!" he whimpered, beads of tears from the corners of his eyes threatening to spill. Remind to ask how really old he was, I thought, mentally sweatdropping slightly. "It's...Okay Bunny...I think...This book...IS the portal..." I said, gulping the bit of saliva running through my mouth, I shakily(The book and my apartment was shaking)opened the middle of the book, but a sudden flood of light blinded my vision in an instant; making me see different coloured blotches in my eyes. "Argh!!! Damn light!" I growled, rubbing my eyes as I did, I saw a flash of red coming right at my face, and...

"WHAM!!" That...Hurt...Alot...I shoved the heavy object off my face, only to find a crying bunny boy infront of me. Oh god can you have alittle mercy on me?! I then felt empty down on my legs, so I looked down, and almost wanted to punch that granny who sold me this book. I wasn't wearing my normal clothes anymore, I was wearing a red frilly alice like dress; it was like Alice's dress, but not blue, and the bows weren't white, but black. And the ends kinda scrunched up in a pretty way. And I wore pure white stockings with black Alice shoes.

"What...The hell?"

"Oh oh oh! You look so pretty witty!! Not like that bossy ol' Alice last time..." The bunny boy muttered while smiling at me, but when he glanced at his watch, his face turned as white as a sheet. "O-Oh!! Bunny's very very late!! Good bye Pretty Alice! And say hello to Cheshire for me!!!" He yelled as he disappeared into the dark bushes of the forest. Cheshire? Cheshire Cat? I raised an eyebrow, he expects me to find that cat without help? Yeah...How fruitful of shit is that...I then quickly turned around and walked towards the north part of the forest quickly, only to be stopped abruptly by a pair of hands covering my eyes. I growled angrily, causing whoever that was blinding me to chuckle, "Now now...Don't be so angered my dear..." the figure purred into my ear, making my temper fire up more."Well.I.Would'nt.Be.This.Angry.If.WHOEVER.YOU.ARE.HADN'T.DID.THAT!!!" I said between growls, but the person ignored my comment and sighed, his voice acting as if their hurt, yet having that playful tone in them. "Do what? Alright alright...Unless you can guess who I am then..." I rolled my eyes, this guy can purr like a cat, wasn't it obvious already? "Cheshire Cat." I said in an defiant tone, making the person laugh, "That was too simple dear Alice...But I made the deal with you anyway." Cheshire said smirking lightly. "Whatever...But now, will you please tell me on why I am here?" I asked, only to be replied by a simple smile and bow, "I have no place to tell you that though, find Charlie the Caterpillar, he'll answer your questions. By the way, we'll meet there. If you survive that is. Fufufufu..." And he disappeared instantly. (He was alittle hot...If I had to admit that...) Cheshire Cat (Nickname's Chesnut or Chess)

"What...What the heck?! He didn't even tell me where to find him!! Damn...This place is...Crazy..."I muttered while walking toward the entrance of the forest, but feeling cold as I went in there. "Tch.." I glared at the sky, it was filled with different sorts of colours, making my gut feel uncomfortable.

"I really have a bad feeling about this...This Wonderland is FAR from wonderful..."

End of Chapter 1

(I don't know whether I should continue this or not. But I'm excited on writing this one though. "Chapter 2 - Charlie the Grumpy Caterpillar & The Annoying Tweedle Dee and Dum". People please comment and tell me some ideas? If you can of course. Although I don't know whether its suppose to go to dream forum or not. Because there's romance in this one anyway.)

Next Chapter Characters --> (Butterfly and Caterpillar Man)
(Twins Tweedle Dee & Dum)
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O.o...No responses...But oh well... I still am going to post this.

Chapter 2 - Charlie the Caterpillar and The annoying Tweedle Dee & Tweedle Dum( I changed the title slightly)

I tumbled and scraped my legs against one of those long thorny tree stumps on the floor. Again. Now how many times have I fell down already? Ah yes, TEN times already. I narrowed my eyes in frustration and kicked the thorny stump, making it have a heart-satisfying 'crack'. Now that this problem is solved...I looked around, everything was dark, and the skies were painted in blotches of crimson and black, weird. But that's how Wonderland is anyway, I thought, walking deeper and deeper in this god-forsaken thick black forest. And as I was walking towards north, something shiny caught my eye, and it was silver coloured door, not faraway. "Finally!! Maybe if I could climb over there, or just walk in, hopefully that hard-to-find-damned-mysterious caterpillar guy would be there!!" I said, throwing a victorious fist straight in the air, grinning as I did.

But then...I was close to breaking that god damned door with my fists. You want to know why? That damn door was locked and it could talk, yes, t-a-l-k, and laughing at my now angry red face. "Hahaha---!! You stupid girl, stupid girl. Don't you know you need a key?" it said in an oddly high-pitched voice, making me glare at it furiously and kick the door's face, which was the knob anyway. "Ouch!! Stupid stupid girl---" I glared at it once again, and pulled the door's face straight, making it cry out in pain. 'Ow ow ow...OK OK I'm sorry!!!" it apologized while muttering a few unlikely words, I rolled my eyes and sighed in exshapiration(sp?), now how am I going to open this damn door? As I was slumping down onto the grass, two pairs of hands roughly grabbed my wrists and threw me away from the door, making me growl as my butt painfully kissed the grass. What the hell? I looked up, only to find two mischevious looking faces staring at me like no tomorrow.

"Why the fuck did you throw me, and who.the.hell.are.you?"I said in a dark voice, only earning an amused chuckle from the two. "Kukukuku...I'm Tweedle Dee!!" the blond one said, while the black haired one giggled creepily and added, "Fufufufu...And I'm Tweedle Dum!!". Then they both made a weird stance and bowed to me, faces making a inhuman smile at me, causing me to shudder but glare at them more. "Now now now...Don't be so glum--" I grabbed both of them by the collars and my face was inches from them, my menacing black aura coming out from as I said one word by one word, all dripping in venom. "Let.Me.Pass." But they both just chuckled and jumped away from my grasp, and then said something that lightened my mood, "We'll let you pass...If you answer our riddle...Answer's wrong, and you die here." they said while cackling menacingly, making my mood go down the dumps. "What--"

"Now let's start the riddle then! What does man love more than life, Fear more than death or mortal strife, What the poor have, the rich require, And what contented men desire, What misers spend, and spendthrifts save, And all men carry to the grave? Guess it right and we'll let you pass, we'll even walk you there! But remember...Guess it wrong and you die here." they asked, cutting me off rudely, I furrowed my eyebrows, this was a little hard...What is it? What does man love more than life? Money? Women? Something doesn't feel right though...Contented men desire? But they're already contented!! The two annoying twins then yawned and grinned, saying "Will you hurry up now? The sun has set and we are deathly tired.", if you both can shut up then I could give you an answer. What the poor have...They have?...Oh I can't think of anything!! I have nothing beside me to protect myself if I answer wrongly...Damn...Wait...Then it clicked through my mind, and I smirked, gaining two raised eyebrows. I then opened my mouth to say the answer, the twin's faces became scowls as I said this :

"It is nothing. Nothing but nothing else." I said while giving them a wide triumphant smile, "And now, the door?" I asked pointing at the two. Tweedle Dee sighed and Tweedle Dum scowled, taking out the key, they turned the lock and click went the sound, then they skipped inside, me following them behind. "Jeez, I just won fair and square alright? Why'd you have to be so cranky about it?" I said while huffing tiredly, we had been walking for miles and miles, never stopping at all; and the twins stopped abruptly to a sudden halt, causing me to fall on their backs. They turned and pouted cutely at me, Tweedle Dee pointed at me and then said, "Because you've won!!...", Tweedle Dum continued "And we never lost once!!". I rolled my eyes at this but smiled at them, well they still were kids after all(Judging by their attitude), and I patted their heads earning wide eyes from them, while saying"There's always a once in a time. So don't be all so sour about it. Now...Where the heck is that caterpillar anyway?"I was annoyed by the fact that I kept walking, without rest, and now...That caterpillar was...

The twins pointed upwards, their cheeks burning red from the petting just now, and I looked up. Almost screaming when my face was inches away from an annoyed one. With anttenas(sp?). "Ugh...How noisy you are...And you really are as slow as a snail..." it was a long red haired man infront of me, his body was striped with red and orange, while him wearing a bright red yukata, hanging loose over his shoulders. Snail? My eye twitched, who is he calling a snail? He's being the grouchy one and he's being the noisy one here anyway!! Grumpy caterpillar. The man glared at me, his cheeks red frm anger but he smoked again, blowing it off. "That wasn't very nice on the caterpillar part." he said while puffing out the smoke, what the...He can mind re--"Yes yes yes...I can mind-read but I am going straight to the point now : Wonderland is now drowned in insanity and we need your help--" I cut him off with wide eyes, "What? I'm just a--". "Do NOT cut me off when I am talking girl! Anyways, we need your help Alice, because right now, the Queen of Hearts, ever since that old Alice left, she became mad; She wreaked havoc, and killed countless of people here, due to this, everyone, is MAD here. We're all stuck in insanity, so Cheshire, me, Mad Hatter, Hare, and Bunny, we all need YOUR help..." he said inhaling another cloud of smoke. "So...Wait wait wait...You mean...I have to destroy that queen? That fat old lady whose butt can't get over a small thing?" I asked incredulously, making Charlie laugh slightly, "I wouldn't call the queen fat anymore Alice, she's changed. She even killed the king too." at this part Charlie sighed, puffing out smoke again. Then...How the heck--"You can destroy the queen if you have our help Alice, so be rest assured. And...Mad Hatter will accompany you to do so. I have sent him my letter, and you could say he wasn't this happy about it, since he doesn't trust a girl like you, can defeat the Queen." I then scoffed at this.

"Well, I'll just have to prove myself anyways. I don't trust you guys either. So be rest assured." I mimicked him at the last part, making him smirk, "Oh you will Alice...You will indeed...Now shoo! Go towards far north and you'll find Mad Hatter. But be careful...Ever since Wonderland became mad, the Ogre has been very, very hungry, so hope you'll live anyways. Or not. Now SHOO!!" Wow, thanks so much for the support...Sarcasm much.

End of chapter 2 (Wow I can't believe the first chapter and the second chapter sucked. Anyways, will Alice meet the ogre and survive? Will Alice meet more trouble on the way? Will Alice meet Mad Hatter in one piece? Tune in next for the next chapter then : Chapter 3 - "Ogres and Flowers...I am so dead..." Message and support?)

Mad Hatter(He's my favourite character, the definite one is Alice though) -- Ogre - Demon Rose(On my opinion this one scares me alittle, btw you'll meet it soon enough.) --
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