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Post Reply "Urdumkeit" by The_8th_Sin
Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08
8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

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I just have to say: WTF?!?!
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Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

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I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?

Edit: On a more general note, I feel absolutely no urge to change the way I preview episodes. As you said it was "weird and random," but so what? You lose nothing, which is the beauty of unclear previews.
Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

[marked red]

I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?


Well in a hard translation to my language it means he's gonna die. Literally.
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Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

[marked red]

I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?


Well in a hard translation to my language it means he's gonna die. Literally.


im·pale –verb (used with object), -paled, -pal·ing.
1. to fasten, stick, or fix upon a sharpened stake or the like.
2. to pierce with a sharpened stake thrust up through the body, as for torture or punishment.
3. to fix upon, or pierce through with, anything pointed.

The definition of impale. There is no mention of certain death, although being impaled often leads to it.
Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

[marked red]

I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?


Well in a hard translation to my language it means he's gonna die. Literally.


im·pale –verb (used with object), -paled, -pal·ing.
1. to fasten, stick, or fix upon a sharpened stake or the like.
2. to pierce with a sharpened stake thrust up through the body, as for torture or punishment.
3. to fix upon, or pierce through with, anything pointed.

The definition of impale. There is no mention of certain death, although being impaled often leads to it.


Yeah. Well sorry if I confused you.
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Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

[marked red]

I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?


Well in a hard translation to my language it means he's gonna die. Literally.


im·pale –verb (used with object), -paled, -pal·ing.
1. to fasten, stick, or fix upon a sharpened stake or the like.
2. to pierce with a sharpened stake thrust up through the body, as for torture or punishment.
3. to fix upon, or pierce through with, anything pointed.

The definition of impale. There is no mention of certain death, although being impaled often leads to it.


Yeah. Well sorry if I confused you.


Did you know when you made that comment that I had absolutely no way to understand your complaint?
Posted 6/29/08 , edited 10/29/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

8th I have to hand it to you, this story is well detailed. Which makes it even more awesome (well kinda necessarily longer at some points...). Anyhow I just dropped by to leave a comment. I am at the chapter 6 and this "preview" was kinda weird and random (even through it is just a preview and I suppose it should be like that?) ...Jeyod being impaled by Trew’s naginata, Eve and Jeyod sitting under a tree, flipping through a book, Ellard yelling.

[marked red]

I just have to say: WTF?!?!


What's so strange about Jeyod being impaled? He's going to fight during the next episode, so surely, someone would try to stab him, right?


Well in a hard translation to my language it means he's gonna die. Literally.


im·pale –verb (used with object), -paled, -pal·ing.
1. to fasten, stick, or fix upon a sharpened stake or the like.
2. to pierce with a sharpened stake thrust up through the body, as for torture or punishment.
3. to fix upon, or pierce through with, anything pointed.

The definition of impale. There is no mention of certain death, although being impaled often leads to it.


Yeah. Well sorry if I confused you.


Did you know when you made that comment that I had absolutely no way to understand your complaint?


Nope. I apologize. Blame caffeine.
Posted 6/30/08 , edited 10/29/08
And you could state where is he impaled. Then I might not get confused. And the whole preview is roughly said.
Posted 6/30/08
well for a preview u dont want to say exactly what happens in the next ep...lol....or there really isnt a reason to read it. . .;P
Posted 6/30/08
I think you don't need a preview. It's kinda stupid to have previews in a story (not a managa, anime, movie etc.)

What you need is ONE HUGE F***ING CLIFFHANGER!
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Posted 6/30/08 , edited 6/30/08

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well for a preview u dont want to say exactly what happens in the next ep...lol....or there really isnt a reason to read it. . .;P


Haven't you seen animes where the preview was very unclear or cryptic? Or better yet, was near impossible to connect to the coming events? They are the most beautiful kind of preview by far.
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Posted 6/30/08

RihgisKhan wrote:

I think you don't need a preview. It's kinda stupid to have previews in a story (not a managa, anime, movie etc.)

What you need is ONE HUGE F***ING CLIFFHANGER!


I don't see how a preview makes the story worse.
Posted 6/30/08 , edited 6/30/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:

I think you don't need a preview. It's kinda stupid to have previews in a story (not a managa, anime, movie etc.)

What you need is ONE HUGE F***ING CLIFFHANGER!


I don't see how a preview makes the story worse.


Trust me they can. Snice they're bad. Please don't do previews.

Oh okay. I simply won't read them.
Posted 6/30/08

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kiyosuke wrote:

well for a preview u dont want to say exactly what happens in the next ep...lol....or there really isnt a reason to read it. . .;P


Haven't you seen animes where the preview was very unclear or cryptic? Or better yet, was near impossible to connect to the coming events? They are the most beautiful kind of preview by far.


hell yea i know wut ur talking about....ever see the higurashi previews? they gave me goose bumps lol....haha i cant wait for the third season! >.<

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Posted 6/30/08

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FallenAngel159 wrote:

I want the next Ep now! he im giddy Im so excited lol u made my bad week not so bad thankyou
and I really like the preview Idea It makes me really excite about the next one and makes me want to read it even more if that's possible


Why are you having a bad week?


eh just random crap getting me down nothing exciting but I'v now got a killer clod to make things worse lol
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