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25 / F / a place in the world
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Posted 11/14/07
thanks!^^

goodness, if more people don't post, I'm gonna have to start double and triple posting to get this thing on the main forum directory.... i really don't wanna do that......
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Posted 11/14/07
It looks pretty good in my opinion. You already know u have to improve your visual perspectives and proportion. The line art needs to be redone. I suggest cleaning it up. Give it a trace over with tracing paper. Photoshop is the very last step, dont worry about that yet and keep working on the basics. Keep up the good work.
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Posted 11/14/07
I actually reall like it. The art style is unique and different. The people look oddly shaped, but at the same time look really good. I, personally, would read this if I saw it in a bookstore. =] Keep it up!
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Posted 11/14/07

raitothereaper wrote:

I actually reall like it. The art style is unique and different. The people look oddly shaped, but at the same time look really good. I, personally, would read this if I saw it in a bookstore. =] Keep it up!


THANK YOU SO MUCH! ^^
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25 / F / a place in the world
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Posted 11/14/07
let the double posting begin.......
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Posted 11/14/07
hey..i know how hard it is to make that comic..now i'm still working on finding a main character for my own comic...zzzz...tiring but fun,,,,

i admire ur works, although the anatomy is not really proportional, but u can make the movement seems dynamic, and also the drawing becomes better along the way...
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Posted 11/14/07
ooh wow i like it! better than i can ever do
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24 / M / my house
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Posted 11/14/07
lol its better then wat i can draw so...

two thumbs up!
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Posted 11/14/07

Aidenson wrote:

It looks pretty good in my opinion. You already know u have to improve your visual perspectives and proportion. The line art needs to be redone. I suggest cleaning it up. Give it a trace over with tracing paper. Photoshop is the very last step, dont worry about that yet and keep working on the basics. Keep up the good work.


i love how people seem to think that this is a little hobby project i just tossed off. "The line art needs to be redone"? I have no idea what he means by that. I have no computer art programs whatsoever. I did all of this with real pen and ink, not even technical pens. All the tone used was sent to me by my sister when she was on student exchange in Japan. I'm not redoing this manga till I am old and have nothing better to do. What you see is what you get......

sorry for the rant, but I think the internet community in general is far to used to the smooth, glossy either completely professional or computer-manga program users create....

god, so much for "thick skin" ! ^^ sorry!

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Posted 11/14/07

himechi_90 wrote:

hey..i know how hard it is to make that comic..now i'm still working on finding a main character for my own comic...zzzz...tiring but fun,,,,

i admire ur works, although the anatomy is not really proportional, but u can make the movement seems dynamic, and also the drawing becomes better along the way...


THanks! ^^
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Posted 11/14/07
having no artistic talents at all.. i'd say this is very good. XD

anyway.. it's good that you keep getting better at this. i'm really envious you know.. i only know how to appreciate good work.. so.. i give you two thumbs up for your art.
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Posted 11/14/07

missymace wrote:

having no artistic talents at all.. i'd say this is very good. XD

anyway.. it's good that you keep getting better at this. i'm really envious you know.. i only know how to appreciate good work.. so.. i give you two thumbs up for your art.




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Posted 11/14/07
^^ It was great! Nice plot, very creative. If you handed in to a teacher, you'd get an A for sure! Drawing was very nice, but like others have said, a little bit deformed. The hands I can understand, drawing those fingers drive me crazy! Can't wait to read the rest of the story
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35 / M / Philly
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Posted 11/14/07
Im sorry u took it negatively. I only meant to encourage u. If u feel as though u are good enough then ok. What's the point of creating a manga if someone cannot get past the artwork. U said it is not a hobby but u dont want it to look as good as possible. At least color inside the lines....geez lol.
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Posted 11/14/07

anime_otaku-nerd wrote:

^^ It was great! Nice plot, very creative. If you handed in to a teacher, you'd get an A for sure! Drawing was very nice, but like others have said, a little bit deformed. The hands I can understand, drawing those fingers drive me crazy! Can't wait to read the rest of the story



Thanks! ^^
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