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Posted 11/15/07
very nice... just take some Anatomy and Figure Drawing classes and you should be all set. (^-^)
Posted 11/15/07
yeah the people are a little disfigured but other than that its pretty good
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Posted 11/15/07
Thanks! ^^ In fact, today, after taking the overwhelming feedback of "improve figures" to heart, I started re-teaching myself figure drawing. While I will try not to loose the distinct look my strongest supporters admire, I will try and make them jest a little less warped...

lala la, editing to get back on front page.....
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Posted 11/16/07
Well, the story is definitely interesting, and the art isn't too bad. I don't really have any real comments on improving your art, it looks like you are doing that on your own. ; )

Actually, I was kinda interested in seeing what happens next when it ran out of pages. I was getting the feeling that I could probably figure out what was going on because it seemed a bit predictable, but who knows you might surprise me. : D

Good job so far and good luck. ^_~

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Posted 11/16/07
nice pen work and that's pretty good for by hand
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Posted 11/16/07

hikaruchan16 wrote:

Well, the story is definitely interesting, and the art isn't too bad. I don't really have any real comments on improving your art, it looks like you are doing that on your own. ; )

Actually, I was kinda interested in seeing what happens next when it ran out of pages. I was getting the feeling that I could probably figure out what was going on because it seemed a bit predictable, but who knows you might surprise me. : D

Good job so far and good luck. ^_~





Thanks! ^^
actually, to be honest, the first chapter plays out pretty much like a cheap horror flick. Its only after the first chapter things start to actualy get original. Sadly, I realised I have not full thought out the the entire, rather long story, so after the first chapter (of which there are still 4 pages I havent done) I'm not going to be working on this series for a while. I do, however, have a rare short story (i'm terrible at keeping stories short) that will probably be only 20-40 pages and will have really cool backgrounds. Sorry to all the people who are really interested in the story. I don't know why I decided to make my first manga the begining of a long, confusing saga....
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Posted 11/16/07

abby-chan wrote:


hikaruchan16 wrote:

Well, the story is definitely interesting, and the art isn't too bad. I don't really have any real comments on improving your art, it looks like you are doing that on your own. ; )

Actually, I was kinda interested in seeing what happens next when it ran out of pages. I was getting the feeling that I could probably figure out what was going on because it seemed a bit predictable, but who knows you might surprise me. : D

Good job so far and good luck. ^_~





Thanks! ^^
actually, to be honest, the first chapter plays out pretty much like a cheap horror flick. Its only after the first chapter things start to actualy get original. Sadly, I realised I have not full thought out the the entire, rather long story, so after the first chapter (of which there are still 4 pages I havent done) I'm not going to be working on this series for a while. I do, however, have a rare short story (i'm terrible at keeping stories short) that will probably be only 20-40 pages and will have really cool backgrounds. Sorry to all the people who are really interested in the story. I don't know why I decided to make my first manga the begining of a long, confusing saga....


s'alright. At least you are dedicated to making an attempt, and for that I admire you.

Whenever I draw fan manga or write fanfiction, I stop in the middle and never finish!! o.0;; But then again, I take advantage of the fact that it's just a hobby and I don't plan on doing anything with it (that could change though, and on accident at that. Because I'm just weird that way...)

Anyway, just keep it up if it's what you really want to do, and you'll be just fine.

And if you ever get into that situation where people pressure you to update, you just come to me and I'll chew them out for you.
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Posted 11/16/07

hikaruchan16 wrote:


abby-chan wrote:


hikaruchan16 wrote:

Well, the story is definitely interesting, and the art isn't too bad. I don't really have any real comments on improving your art, it looks like you are doing that on your own. ; )

Actually, I was kinda interested in seeing what happens next when it ran out of pages. I was getting the feeling that I could probably figure out what was going on because it seemed a bit predictable, but who knows you might surprise me. : D

Good job so far and good luck. ^_~





Thanks! ^^
actually, to be honest, the first chapter plays out pretty much like a cheap horror flick. Its only after the first chapter things start to actualy get original. Sadly, I realised I have not full thought out the the entire, rather long story, so after the first chapter (of which there are still 4 pages I havent done) I'm not going to be working on this series for a while. I do, however, have a rare short story (i'm terrible at keeping stories short) that will probably be only 20-40 pages and will have really cool backgrounds. Sorry to all the people who are really interested in the story. I don't know why I decided to make my first manga the begining of a long, confusing saga....


s'alright. At least you are dedicated to making an attempt, and for that I admire you.

Whenever I draw fan manga or write fanfiction, I stop in the middle and never finish!! o.0;; But then again, I take advantage of the fact that it's just a hobby and I don't plan on doing anything with it (that could change though, and on accident at that. Because I'm just weird that way...)

Anyway, just keep it up if it's what you really want to do, and you'll be just fine.

And if you ever get into that situation where people pressure you to update, you just come to me and I'll chew them out for you.


^o^ thanks! I will be sure to do that! ^^
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Posted 11/16/07
Yeah, you just need to refine your style a bit, but it looks cool.
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Posted 11/18/07
thanks! ^^
Kyaaaaa..... good reviews make me so happy! ^^
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Posted 11/18/07
you should stop bumping your own thread if you're not going to add anything important.

And for some reason, the links aren't working.
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Posted 11/18/07
Links aren't working
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Posted 11/18/07

RealJudgement_Mohinder wrote:

you should stop bumping your own thread if you're not going to add anything important.

And for some reason, the links aren't working. :(


I know, its really stupid, but I just want a lot of feedback, and i'm not going to get a lot if this thread gets shoved to the back. I feel bad doing it, but when it comes to my manga, I take no prisoners.
Its to bad the links arent working. maybe I could send them to you?

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Posted 11/18/07
if its a comic, i got no comments.. but if its a manga.. then u might need training. basic shading, shapes, contrast, reflections.. light bounces off objects.. u get the idea.
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Posted 11/18/07
yup, i get the idea. ^^
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