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M / London, UK
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Posted 11/18/07
ok...
1. have you ever heard of the term "vanishing point"?
2. her arm is bent and look abnormal
3. learn how to draw hands

..... ok.... you really need help on these things. i could help you, but it would be kinda hard because its over the net... Heres one thing tip on how to draw hands. Draw a cirle or an oval, and put circles on where the nuckles of the fingers and thumbs go. then level it out, and make sure to draw sausages. And also, to do highlighting, make sure you use 0.5 or 0.7 mm pens. They are best for highlighting in manga, and all the pros use em, but your other pages look really great to me. keep it up^^
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Posted 11/18/07
Hey its pretty good.
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26 / USA
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Posted 11/18/07
love the backgrounds, but that girls arm is weird xD
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25 / F / a place in the world
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Posted 11/19/07
hmmmm.... which page was that again?
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Posted 11/20/07
Oh! Look! You have cute pictures, it's really good. You should keep it up! Okay, I'm going to read it now... Lalala.
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Posted 11/20/07
the ppl are disfigured...
u need to study some how to draw manga books
learn some new tecniques too
and i got confused on which way to read it...u said it was a manga, not a cartoon
sometimes u read it like a manga, sometimes like a cartoon (or maybe its just me)
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Posted 11/20/07
also its not very compelling
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Posted 11/20/07
The arm is pretty bizare....

I'm asuming you know what "vanishing point" is, but if you don't then look it up. It will help. A lot.

Also, I sugest buying real tone or a manga editing program. I don't know how much actual tone costs. Most manga editing programs I've seen start at about $50. Photoshop would work, too.
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21 / F / USA
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Posted 11/20/07
I think its good. The arms aren't even that bad...a hecka lot better then what I can do.
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76 / 椅子の上
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Posted 11/20/07
The characters are pretty deformed, it would help if you use a reference. The panels are pretty well done though.

PS. Those How To Draw Manga books usually aren't any good.
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22 / M / Why Would You Wan...
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Posted 11/21/07
theyre great but idk what its bout
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Posted 11/21/07
well i like how u got the general work around, but i consider u do more perspective, and straightening ur lines. other then that, make ur character more life like, but nice work though,
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25 / F / a place in the world
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Posted 11/27/07

chloechan wrote:

The arm is pretty bizare....

I'm asuming you know what "vanishing point" is, but if you don't then look it up. It will help. A lot.

Also, I sugest buying real tone or a manga editing program. I don't know how much actual tone costs. Most manga editing programs I've seen start at about $50. Photoshop would work, too.


ummm..... i did use real tone.....
it WAS expensive.....
I didn't use a computer because i don't like to use computer , not because it didn't occur to me.....
I have about 10 how to draw manga books and i have studied them rigorously. ....

anyhoo, thanks for the comment!
^^
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Posted 11/27/07

sweet_n_spicy wrote:

the ppl are disfigured...
u need to study some how to draw manga books
learn some new tecniques too
and i got confused on which way to read it...u said it was a manga, not a cartoon
sometimes u read it like a manga, sometimes like a cartoon (or maybe its just me)

i'm american, theres no need for it to read right to left. cartoons are american animation, comics are american comics. The orientation of the comic is not what makes it manga or not manga.....
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Posted 12/1/07
handwriting is a bit crooked and the arm is a little messed up

other than that its good
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