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HI..

Everyone....here is moi story corner....

Hope u all like my story.....

Moi story mostly not very long and moi spelling might be wrong something..

so hope u all understand.....

arigatoo gozaimasu....


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i look forward to it.
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----------------------------------Part 1-------------------------

There is a guy name jason age 17 and a girl name kelly age 16...they both from the same sch...

For kelly she is beautiful, kind hearted,cute and sweet....but there is a problem...she had heart disease...

She can't run or play during physical class.....all she do is study and rest more.....

She just like a pill bottle.....everyday she has to eat medicine to control her heart disease...

she had heart disease when she was born.....she dun have any friends around her.....

but she is a cheerful girl she always look at the bright side no matter wat people she abt her....

but her life changed be coz of a soccer ball...............


----------------------------New Life Started------------------------

One fine day while kelly sitting under a tree....reading her book....
Suddenly a soccer ball hit her head and she fainted....

Jason rush toward her wanna to see if she was alright....
jason call her but she didn't react to him......
so jason carry her to the school sick bay...

-----------------------------after an hour later----------------------

Ouch.........where am i........??"
you at the sick bay....jason said
kelly turn over and saw a guy.....!! Who are you?? and why am i here??
Actually i'm the one who accidently hit you with my soccer ball.....I'm sorry
it's ok.....i'm fine now....are u the one who send me here...??
Yup.....(smile)
i see....arigatoo gozaimasu....
so you learn japanese??
ya......(smile)

Some one called jason...
Jason...... the coach ask you to go back for the training...
OK.....I'm coming.....
ok...see u gal...

"walking away in a cool style..."


-----------------------------------------The bell rang....sch end--------------------------

Kelly walking alone the side way outside the school.....
She heard someone shout...

Hey.....pretty girl wait up......

she didn't turn back and look..becoz she tot that it might be the group of irritating boys whom always make fun of her..

Hey girl wait up....why are u walking so fast....

someone touched her shoulder...
she turn around and saw it was that boys who send her to sick bay...

Oh....hi.....sorry for ignoring you...i tot it is somebody else....
Oh i see...haha....so where are u goin now....
i'm goin home now...(smile)
so where u stay.....
Two bus stop away....
O.....i also stay some where over there.....
izzit......i see....
by the way what your name??
Kelly....You??
Jason.....17 from soccer team...you??
i'm 16.....i dun have any CCA....( cca aka club activity)
why?? you dun like outdoor or club....
No...it because i have heart disease....
izzit.....are you sure you are ok...after been hit by my soccer ball??
Ya....i'm alright.....

both of them heard somebody call....
AH....JASON JASON...WAIT FOR US......
jason turn back and saw a group of crazy girl running toward her.....
so he pull kelly hand and run.....
"kelly woder why he wanna to run....
so kelly just follow him....
after a few distance they stop and see whether those crazy girl still follow them..

"no sight of them"

Wow....they nv caught up.....jumping happily...
cough!!
O...are u ok sorry for pulling you to run with me...
dun worry i'm ok..i nv run this way before it was my first time..."cough while smiling"
I'm think i will send u home first ok....??
erm.....I....ok...hehe....

so jason send kelly home...

Bye jason....
bye kelly...
o..by the way can i send u to sch tomorrow??
huh....ok....erm.....what time...
6.50 tomorrow morning.....
ok....sure...bye...

jason when home too.....


---------------------------------------------------end of part 1---------------------------------

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ok, i'm not trying to insult...
but why all the "..." after the sentences?
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gomen.....i dun really know how to write in the right way so i just write in a way i like......
it is easy for miie....
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------------------------------Part 2-------------------------

The next day they both meet up....

kelly:Hi...jason....
jason:wow...you early den me.....i tot i will be the one was reach here first..
kelly:hehe.....so let go....
jason:ok sure......

So they both walk to sch.....on the way to sch there are some girl looking at them..
it was kelly classmate......they wondering why jason and kelly walking together...
so they walk toward kelly and jason to find out the ans...

classmate:Hi jason
jason:hi
classmate:jason why are u walking with that virus disease girl...
jason:huh....wat r u talking about.....i tot she had heart disease??
classmate: whateven...it is the same.... we aur so unlucky to be same class as her..
(jason stop and turn to those girl)
jason: how can u say this kind of this to hurt a weak girl....
Classmate: whateven...just to be to close with her.....
jason:Stop it !! get lost now...i dun wan to saw u all again....GO NOW....
(those girl walk away as fast as possible)
Jason:Are u alright kelly...
kelly:yup.....jason dun be angry with them.....they just dun understand about my illness..
Jason: dun u feel angry or sad??
kelly:No....at first i might be a bit sad but.....now i'm use to it already...
jason:haiz.....u are just to kind to them...
kelly:(smile) jason....i think u better dun be to close to me...i scare..
jason:u scare that my friend would avoid me...?? dun be silly..true friend won't treat u this way..
kelly:But.....
Jason:stop ur but now....if we dun start walking we will be late....(smile)
kelly:Oh....ya...

they both continue walk to sch...after reaching the sch they when back to their form class..
After wat jason do to kelly classmate....her classmate become more hate her and wanna to bully her more..
kelly clasmate started to bully her by closes the toilet light when kelly at the toilet....
wet kelly book when kelly not around.....while kelly holding a plate of rice they bang on her and make it drop..
But no matter wat they do kelly nv cry or angry....but for jason he saw wat happen at the canteen(place for student to buy food)
Jason stop the girl who bang on kelly and wanna her to pay for the rice.....but kelly stopped it..

Kelly:jason it is alright let her go...
Jason:but she bang on u and not even saying sorry to u and wanna to walk away like this...
kelly:jason I'm use....
jason: to it........right.....kelly they are bullying u...why u dun wanna to stand for urself??...hey girl.....
(that girl run away)
Kelly: jason(stopping jason to catch that girl by pulling his hand)
Jason:kelly....
kelly: say no more....plz jason.....
jason:erm......haiz....ok...

So from that day onward when jason have chance to be will kelly he will no leave kelly by herself
only this way he can protect her.......he everyday send her home, walk with her to sch and eat with her when lunch break..
jason even started to know kelly parent....kelly was happy that her parent allow her to be friend with jason..

-----------------------------3 month later--------------------

Kelly:hey jason are u free tomorrow night??
jason: erm...let me think.....yup...i'm free...why??
kelly:Oh is like tat...my mum wanna to invite you to my house to have dinner together with us...can??
jason:sure......i can't wait till tomorrow....haha...
kelly:hehe...ok...see u after school....
jason:ok...bye....see ya...

they both when back to their class.......jason sit down in the class room and look out the window...
think of tomorrow night.........at this time jason best friend calvin walk toward him...

calvin:hey jason...wat are u looking at??
jason:nothing just think of something.....
calvin:wat thing??
jason:erm...nothing la....just that kelly mum asked me to go over her house to have dinner tomorrow...
calvin: O..i see having dinner with ur lover parent.... (say in a joking way)
jason:hey....wat shit u talking....
calvin: huh.....dun u fall in love with kelly??
jason: huh......love....(think at kelly this moment)
calvin:ya...love...as a outsider i can see that u have fall for her..and for kelly...maybe too...
jason: really?? u can see that i have fall for kelly.....
calvin:yup.....dun u think so??
jason: i tot about it before but i just dun confirm about it....
calvin:really.....why dun u ask her to be ur girlfriend??
jason:wat.....dun be crazy...wat if she reject...
calvin:den treat her as a friend.....atleast u know the ans..right
jason:ya..u r right but when should i ask her....
calvin:i think today after school when u send her home...how
jason:erm....ok...i will....
calvin:if she say yes den...tomorrow night after dinner tell her parent about it..see wether they allow anot...ok
jason: OK....everything will go with the plan.....


----------------------end of part 2-------------------------------------------

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hmm...i cant give any comments yet..lemme see more^.^
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oo...sis faster miie wan see the ending...
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hee hee^-^ kawaii story but it was pwetty predictable^-^' but still good :]
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--------------------------part 3----------------------------

Jason: hi kelly..
Kelly:hi....
Jason:Erm...i.....i.....nothing let go...
kelly:o...k....r u ok...
Jason: HUH......ya ya i'm ok...
kelly:hmm....ok let go...

Jason was scare...he dunno how to ask.....they both just as pernormal walk back home...
only the way jason ask kelly something....

Jason:HAHA..(look silly)...Kelly do...do..do..
Kelly:do wat??
Jason:Do....do...do u have someone that u admire??(looking away while say)
Kelly:HUH.... blush....(dunno wat to say)...erm.......ya.....(saying very fast)
Jason: (turn back and look at kelly) REALLY.......(look sad)
Kelly: erm........yup...
Jason: haha(laugh sadly)who tat person...maybe i can help...(saying sadly)
Kelly:erm.....he is fit,caring,helpful and.......................away stay on my side(walking away as fast as possible)
Jason:Huh....hey wait....(trying to catch up)....is there someone like this?? i tot i'm the only one?

Jason :suddenly stop down..... and thinking....i'm the only one....so kelly admire is me?? tat right..
(running toward kelly)....Kelly.......(run and stopped.....standing infront of kelly putting his hand on kelly shoulder)

At this moment both of their face was red......jason look into kelly eyes and say..

Jason:am i the one??(hoping for a yes)
Kelly:erm.....(nodding her head)
Jason:REALLY......(pull kelly toward him and hug her)
Kelly:Jason do u like me??
Jason: YEs yes yes...ofcoz yes.....that was wat i wanna to tell u...(looking at kelly)
Kelly:(smiling back.....)
Jason:but will ur parent allow us to be together??
Kelly:I'm not sure too....i know my parent have a good impression on u but i dunno will they allow us to be BF & GF.
Jason: How about we ask them tomorrow...since i'm goin over ur house to have dinner..
Kelly: erm....really....ok...
Jason:hmm...let go...(holding kelly hand while walking)

on the way home,they are happy but abit worry about tomorrow.....walk and walk...reach kelly home..

jason: bye kelly(smiling happily)
Kelly:Bye jason(smiling happily too)

-------------------------------------------next day--------------------------------------

The next morning they went to school as pernormal....have lunch together,chatting under a tree and walking home together...
on the way home kelly look worry and jason hold her hand and say...everything will be fine....he wanna kelly to trust him..
jason bring kelly home denhe when back home to have bath and change.....

-------------------------------------2 hours later-----------------------------------------

DingDong DingDong...the doorbell rang...
The open and jason saw kelly mum...

Jason:HI aunty....
Kelly mum:hi jason...welcome...come in..
Jason: aunty here are some fruit.....
Kelly mum.....Oh...thank you..
Jason: no no no..i should be the one who say thankyou...for inviting me..
kelly dad: hahaha....let stop saying thank you......jason welcome..
Jason:Hi uncle....
kelly dad: come and have sit....
jason:ok...(sitting down)
Kelly mum: ok...i will go prepare the food...
Jason:ok...hehe.....uncle where is kelly??
kelly dad: she is at her room.....i will help u call her..(Shouting KELLY...JASON IS HERE)
kelly:OK....i'm coming...(open her room door and walk toward her dad and jason....)HI jason
Jason:hi....

Kelly sit beside jason...kelly dad walk to the kitchen to help out......jason hold kelly hand and they look at each other...
telling each other everything will be ok.....and at this moment kelly dad saw they both hold hand and he turn walk back to kitchen after putting the food....kelly dad told kelly mum about it.......

Kellymum:kelly jason dinner is ready(smiling)
Kelly:ok...
Jason:ok...

They 4 of them sit down...

Kelly: Dad eat, mum eat
Jason:uncle aunty eat
Kelly dad and mum...ok..let eat..

while having dinner kelly parent didn't say about anything....kelly and jason too..
after finish dinner kelly helped her mum wash up all the thing......after wash all of them sit at the living room watch tv..
suddenly jason called...kelly parent...

Jason:uncle aunty...i have something to tell both of you...
kelly dad:Izzit about u and kelly relationship??
Jason and kelly: HUH....(shock)
Jason:you know thing about us....
kelly dad:ya...i saw u hold kelly hand just now...
Kelly:really but why u didn't say anything...
kelly dad:it is becoz i wanna u both to say first...
Jason:so uncle will u let ketty be with me??
K.dad: of coz i will...but..
K.mum:but kelly had heart problem....her condition won't be better....only will be even bad....she might die too..
Jason: I know that.....but i will she love her....even if she will only have 1 month left or even less... i will still love her...
K.mum:are u still u will not regart having her to be ur GF?
Jason:i won't...i promise...
K.mum:ok i will let both of u together.....but u must take care of her...
Jason:ofcoz i will...i will love her more and more...my love for her won't become less..

all of them laugh and smiling happily.....


--------------------------------Part 3 ended---------------------------------------------






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