Post Reply My poor little Angel
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Posted 5/5/08
Seeing a
stone angel
looking out over
this dead
graveyard
so torn and grey the angel is
whit one
broken wing
as small raindrops
run down
the face
but still the angel
smile
a smile
that hide the side eyes
eyes whitout soul

When I look at it
I can
undearstand the angel
underneat
wher it stand
a broken heart
lies
that ended
its day so young
whit no
hapiness

Was this right
to let her
be born
into this world
she was a girl
whit life
that could
run
and lough
but all that stopped
the loughter
was taken away
and
her running
was turned into small
and unsure steps

Is this a world
where
such small beings
can live in
some dont need to think
about this
whit their
happy lifes
nothing
to think
about the souls
like this little girls
being held down
from sorrow
or
if they see them
some just
turn their backs
and then
it will be to late

The shadow
of the big tree
over the angel
like a monster
it wants to hide
the broken angel
hiding the truth
that it
want to show
just like those
who broke th elittle heart
underneat
the angels feet

Whit the wounds
the stone angel has
is it wounds
from fight
it had have
or
do it show how the
little one
looked like inside

I feel
the cold wet
stone
ageins
my fingers
as I stroke the tears
away
of its face
and I feel my heart
getting scars
and
bleeding

Why is this world
like this
to them
who arent strong enough
and why
dont we help
but...
some just
hurt the weak more
to hide
their fears and weaknes

I know
its not my foult
and
I dont know
the little girl
I have just heard
but still
I feel
myself to blame
why
that I dont know
but I dont care
I just want to show
that
not all
are like that
that there are pepole who want
to open their hearts

as I walk away
I feel a warm wind
ageins my face
and as I turn
to the angel once
agein
I see a angel
so small
and pale
whit wounds
but I see a smile
and I promise
I will
come back to you
My poor little Angel



I liked how this poem turned out ^^ if you want to get the feeling I had when I writed it lisen to this song ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QDm03Foq2T0
the pic dosnt really fit but well well
Posted 5/6/08
awesome poem, the pic is nice even though it doesn't fit with the poem perfectly
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Posted 5/7/08

kagura4 wrote:

awesome poem, the pic is nice even though it doesn't fit with the poem perfectly


thanks ^^ yeah I know it dosnt fit but it was hard to find a pic for it >.<
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Posted 5/8/08
Oh my god!!!...it's awesome!!!...wow!!! ...u were talking about that girl!!!...and she's an angel!!!...oh my god!!!...i'm in shock!!!...Congratulations I love this poem
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david_k_belanova wrote:

Oh my god!!!...it's awesome!!!...wow!!! ...u were talking about that girl!!!...and she's an angel!!!...oh my god!!!...i'm in shock!!!...Congratulations I love this poem


hehe thank you very much ^^ Im glad that you liked it =D jupp the little girl was an angel
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