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Posted 5/5/08
Cold steel bars cage me in
bleek dark outside is all i see
coldness of the air makes it hard to take air in
its cold here...its lonely here and all i want is to be set free

i sit here for what seems like days...months...years..
i sit in silence i do not cry for they are watching
i wont let them see me cry i will not let them see my tears
i sit here in this darkening place, a hell neverending

by day it grows bleaker and darker
its so dark i can no longer see
but i can still feel the hate out there as my pain grows steeper
who is this being? who is it i call me?

ive lost to the void...the darkness of the world today
ive lost to the people...even tho i swore id never sway..

what now.. what is there to do..
its sad that fairy tales...realy never do come true..
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Posted 5/14/08
Wow! i love it ....
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Posted 5/15/08

sasunaruplays wrote:

its sad that fairy tales...realy never do come true..


It seems the last line of this poem caught my attention, which has a great depiction of the darkness and a thought of that occured not long ago. Its a great poem that has its unique way of a body and usage of the quotations which is rather beautiful and does a good job playing the role in the poem. cool poem and enjoyed reading it.
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