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taking a step into the clear falling rain
i catch a tear drop from the sky and cry along
i can feel its agony and understand its pain
this melody ive heard before, its a sad tune, a eerie song
i close my eyes to listen to its rythym sound
to the beat of its drum as it hits the soil
i close my eyes and silently sing along to this tune that has me bound
longer i listen the more my soul beging to boil
I feel rage from the lightning bolts as they strike at the ground with fury
my blood boils with anger as the sky rumbles in protest
i understand its reason, its hatred and sadness during this night so dreary
i froget all else and listen, i forget the world, i forget the rest
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i really like it you can hear the rain and feel the storm as it stirs inside ^_^
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heh ^_^
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It has an e.e. cummings feel to the poem, but i think it's generally ok... could be better though (: just keep writing  |
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sorry if the heh offended meant it in a good way great poem ^_^
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