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Posted 5/8/08
I wrote this to help myself out a few years ago. I was feeling a bit depressed at the time and I wanted some relief. I normally don't tell people what's going on with me in anyway; however I'll write about it, keep it for a few years until I either forgot about it or don't care about it, then decide whether to throw it away or show people. It varies by moods.

The "sweet" age in life
Was the saddest in mine.
The closest to me
In this spiteful world,
Has past into another.
A child was lost,
Along with a friend.
So much pain.
Leaving my friends
At the age of 15
I loose something
I can never get back.
Another loss,
I cannot stand it.
14 was the year
That I wanted to die.
13 was the time
I thought I would
Forever be sad.
For once again
A loved one
Was lost to this world.
12 I tried to have
Friends when all
Betrayed.
I was happy
for once at 11.
10 and down
My mother & brother fought,
I thought I was the youngest.
Taken from my biological father
Before I was one.
That's my life.
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Posted 5/8/08
Thats a really heavy poem , Which is really nice and great poem has a lot powerful description that embeds time in it...really nice
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Posted 5/8/08
awesome... this is way better that mine( i think so anyway) !!ENCORE!!
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Posted 5/8/08
I have about 22 poems already posted on poetry.com if anyone's interested let me know and i'll tell you the name to search under.
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