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**Create Your Own Character With Status and Abilities
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28 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 1/28/07
=Status=
Name : Devil_Avatar
Type : Demon
Abilities : Final Fantasy 7 : Could Abilities
Age : 46
World : Celestria

=Body=
Hair : White and spikey
Face : Dark
Eyes : Light Blue
Body : Scars all over it

=Equipment=
Weapon : Duel Damacus
Armor : Plate Armor With Devil Wings
Helmet : Devil Helmet

=Story=
Story : Me , Devil_Avatar was once a great defender of hell with my pet Ceberus , when I was sent to war with the angels , I was killed by the most powerful Zues the lord of lighting , I was sent back to where I am and trained back to gain my revenge , until far times ... I trained hard but it ends me nothing , I heard about a rumor about a great weapon called the Excalibur , once a great weapon by the angels .

My Story will begin ... At the start of the war " Angels & Devils "

Example Finish ^^

Rate it with :

Status : ?/10
Body : ?/10
Equipment : ?/10
Story : ?/10

PS : ^^
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24 / M / California, San D...
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Posted 1/28/07
=Status=
Name : Sadayoshi Akimoto
Type : Shinigami
Abilities : Shadow
Age : 12
World : Soul Society

=Body=
Hair : Black and downish
Face : Calm and lifeless
Eyes : Brown/Black
Body : Dragon tatto(black)

=Equipment=
Weapon : Zanpaku-to(Masakado Kurofuji)
Armor : Shinigami Robes
Helmet : none
=Story=
Story : His best friend was killed in front of him, rescued by his captian. Can form shadows into physical beings to attack with team sync strikes. Seeks to kill a hollow that kill his friend.

Rate it with :
Status : 9/10
Body : 6/10
Equipment : 8/10
Story : 7/10

I do stats???
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28 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 1/28/07
hehe ... you should edit that Rate It With , I'll show you how to Rate ...

Rate ( Sadayoshi Akimoto )

Status : 7/10
Body : 9/10
Equipment : 4/10
Story : 3/10

This is how you rate other person ^^ I think your story should get it longer ^^
Posted 1/28/07
=Status=
Name : Hyde
Type : Angel of Death
Abilities : Light
Age : 17
World : Kleo

=Body=
Hair : Brown and spiky
Face : Fair
Eyes : Sapphire
Body : Athletic body lol

=Equipment=
Weapon : Heaven's Gate
Armor : Robe and a Cape
Helmet : Hajimaki
Edit:
=Story=
Story : Hyde was a prince who was said to be the next King of their world and will protect his family and people. His parents were killed by his elder brother Hale, who betrayed their kingdom when Hyde was still 8 years old. He promised to himself that he would avenge his parents and will retrieve the lost kingdom.

After his parents were killed an old man helped him and while he grows older and older the old man always train the child hard.

and so, my story will begin after 9 years of growth

Beginning is finished

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Status : 6/10
Body : 7/10
Equipment : 8/10
Story : 4/10

PS : hehehe ^_^


~to be continued
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28 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 1/28/07
Rate ( Hyde )

Status : 7/10
Body : 8/10
Equipment : 6/10
Story : 5/10

To be continue ? that would be an interesting story coming up in your mind ^^ I'll see I'll see
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F / Hogwarts
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Posted 1/29/07
mine wud be my avatar, angel knight
shes good with guns, super strength

kinda like black cat female version. but she hates milk. =P coz i dont really like milk.

shes in her 20's, kills evil that affects people.
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28 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 1/30/07
=Status=
Name : Satarcruize
Type : Human
Abilities : Flash Blade , Heavy Strike , Wind Slash
Age : 25
World : Nether World

=Body=
Hair : Black and long
Face : Fair
Eyes : Blind Fold
Body : Muscles

=Equipment=
Weapon : Heavy Excalibur
Armor : Lether Armor
Helmet : None

=Story=
Story : I am born from a small village when I was 13 , our village was peaceful and calm with foods and brews , until one day ... An evil force of dark riders came over our village steals and kills everything that blocks thier way , some of us escaped that battle ground ... Some are suffered in death and pain ... I was taken away by an old man with arts that he'll teach me the way of battle to protect myself .

I swear to my families and villagers , I will take my revenge with the Dark forces of riders ... I swear to kill them when I had the chance ... Until now I am ready ...

( 12 years later ... ) ( To be continued )
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24 / M / California, San D...
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Posted 2/1/07
Status : 8/10, didnt mention the gender
Body : 4/10
Equipment : 5/10
Story : 7/10
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26 / F / Tokyo, Japan
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Posted 2/4/07
=Status= (NOTE: I made this story before Death Note was even aired)
Name : Scarlet Syndell (Uruha)
Type : Human
Abilities : (basically, she's like a Shinigami) shorten a human's life span and makes hers even longer, sees people's life spans, has a Shinigami guardian
Age : 16
Gender : Female
World : Earth

=Body=
Hair : Black and long...has straight bangs
Face : Fair
Eyes : red
Body : slim/slender

=Equipment=
Weapon : a scythe and a sword
Armor : Cloth armor (normal clothes)
Helmet : None

=Guardian=
Name : Raine
Type : Shinigami
Features : Black wings, black hair tied in a pony...has diagonal bangs, covering her right eye...looks like a human...very attractive

=Story=
Story : born in a eerie place covered in mist, a winged creature walks up to the infant and carries her in its arms...this creature...the Shinigami named Raine, then spread its wings and flew straight below....

moments later, as she reached the ground, she placed the sleeping infant on a front porch of the nearest house, rang the doorbell and flew away...

in an instant, the door opened, and a young couple found the innocent child lying quietly on their porch...without hesitation, they took this infant as their own..not knowing what lies ahead of them...

(I already have the continuation...I'll post the link if people are interested with my story and all..hehe)
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29 / M / Beyond
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Posted 2/4/07
=Status=
Name : Lucence Airglyph
Type : Ethereal
Abilities : Categorized into 3: "Flow," "Silence," and "Absolute.": "Flow" pertains to abilities that manipulate the inertial energy of objects. "Silence" on the other hand is based on the ability to minutely change spatial properties of objects. Finally, "Absolute" is the manipulation of the Ethereal matter qualities in any way he wishes.
Sex: Male
Age : 12 ("Ethereal" years), 44 (human years)
World : "The Transience"

=Body=
Hair : Medium length unkempt hair
Face : Clear, aqualine, oval with slightly feminine features yet still remains to be distinctly masculine. A tattoo stretches from slightly past his earlobes (inches beneath the outer tips of his eyes) to the back of his neck to the opposite side. A runic knife insignia is present on his forehead.
Eyes : White with a blue Iris
Body : Asiatic light skin color (distinct from the Aryan race type of white), medium-build comparable to the shaping of swimmer's bodies, earthen-like tattoos cover his arms starting from the elbow leading towards the tips of his fingers and central to them is the same distinct knife-like insignia as seen on his forehead.

=Equipment=
Weapon : "Dreamkeeper" Dirge (An efficient aerodynamically designed blade- much like a Katana) with a strange and often seemingly amorphous hilt. Sheath is behind his waist near the buttock area.
Clothing : Black, straight-cut nylon slacks. Midnight blue cotton shirt with a mist-like design; sleeves extending 1 1/2 inch past this elbow. Bands cut across near the bicep area of the shirt. A mantle with luminous white lining covers the neck area from harsh elements with a turtleneck- its front is partially opened just for aesthetic purposes. Also two belt-like accessories are attached to the mantle that may serve as one of his possible weapons if the occasion calls for it. Belt holsters hold additional space for weapons/items near the thigh area. His black, belt-snap on boots rise up midway to his shin. A skeletal-wings design pendant hangs from his neck- signifying his rank and his association with the "Raven" division.
Headgear : None

=Story=

Beings from "The Transience" or the Ethereals as they are more commonly called are ones of great mystery to all those outside of their realm. A common knowledge though is that as compared to the human species, the Ethereals experience a more immediate physical, mental, and emotional growth - oft "fully mature" at the Ethereal age of 3 (or 8 human years) and that their lifespans stretch a couple centuries more than the common human species. So great is the Ethereal lifespan that there is one rumored to be have lived half the life of the great world-tree.

Though one of the youngest Ethereals in existence, Lucence has proven his worth a multitude of times that his assistance has been required - and ability-wise, far exceeding the growth ratio of an ordinary Ethereal.
As part of the tasks assigned to him was to oversee the beings within the scope of interest of "Pride" (134 individuals who oversee relations between the different races) - one of them a talented young painter. His task is to merely watch and report what occurs to the young girl... which is to say continued under all circumstances. He follows protocol and grows attached to her despite never approaching or letting her know of her existence.
The girl is then killed in an accident, but rather than the cessation of her existence altogether...

Thus the story begins here.
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Posted 2/4/07
=Status=
Name : Doraemon
Type : Robotic cat from the future
Abilities : Magical Pouch
Age : ?
World : Future

=Body=
Body:Cat

=Equipment=
Pouch:Magical Pouch

=Story=
Adorable robotic cat from the future.

hell yeah,mines original
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24 / M / Edison, NJ(where...
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Posted 2/4/07
=Status=
Name : Jessica
Type : sexy beast
Abilities : um, the ability to look good?
Age : 18
World : My bedroom

=Body=
Hair : Long and flowing, either darkish or blondish
Face : um, hot?
Eyes : very light blue, like crystalish
Body : um, sexy?

=Equipment=
Weapon : hm, (perverted answer) vibrator
Armor : not wearing anything
Helmet : not applicable
Edit:
=Story=
Story : Once upon a time I met this "Jessica" and we fell madly in love and in the process having good sex.

Rate it with :

Status : 10/10
Body : on a 1 to 10, she's a certified 20
Equipment : 10/10
Story : 10/10
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M / Posto se Azijati...
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Posted 2/4/07
=Status=
Name:Darius
Type:Human
Abilities:Wall running,Recall,cyclone of fate,eye of storm,...(just like prince of Persia)
Age:18
World:Past

=Body=
Hair:Long,black hair
Face:I do not know
Eyes:Brown
Body:Muscular

=Equipment=
Weapon:Sword of the Stars
Armor:Light armor
Helmet:No helmet

=Story=
This guy is a mix of me and the prince of Persia

Rate it with :
Status:?/10
Body:?/10
Equipment:?/10
Story:1/10
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Posted 2/4/07
XD These all scream Mary Sue.
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Posted 2/6/07
Hehe , all of you had a wonderful character imagination ~ I would like to see some more ~
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