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Posted 5/8/08
Hello good Sir how be you today?
I am Fine it's such a gorgeous day
Come Sit and join me, relax for a while.
I cannot dear Sir i must bid you adu
For the chores are not finished and the door is left open.
If that is what you choose then let me give you a message of adu,
Enjoy the sun
Enjoy the rain
Enjoy your day
And the life that goes with it
We only get one life left to live
So look both ways and enjoy it
Stop to see the Flowers
Smell their sweet Fragrance
Dont forget to look
For before you know it, it is through
And you realize you let it slip right through your fingers
Only remembering the memories of the feelings inside
So Dear Sir i ask that you enjoy your life
And over look the negatives of this cruel world
Only to see the beauty hidden in plain site
So i bide yea adu and good luck with your day
Enjoy it and smile for it's a new day.
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Posted 5/17/08
AWSOME poem!
I love the wording.
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23 / M / California, US
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Posted 5/17/08
Thats a cool poem really fun to read
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19 / F / ~ iN dA sChOoL, o...
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Posted 6/7/08
what a beutifull poem luv it:D its like story in short. nice nice
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Posted 7/28/08
well everything i can think of to say to this great poem has already been said hehe
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