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Posted 5/8/08 , edited 5/9/08
i just wanted to get this one story out...it's from my sister's class..*copy righted* (very long)

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"Banzai!" A word got yelled through the radio, into my ears. "Oh god, can't they ever shut up?" I climbed out of my bed, and kicked my brother on my way down. My name's Kurogame Nomure. I have a little brother named Sora and he's two years younger than me, which made him eighteen years old. I sat down next to him, "What happened?" he asked. "Dunno," I shrunk my shoulder, "who cares" Hurry and get up, we are going to the beach today."
It was Spring 1944, i walked out of the room, Mom and Dad must have gone to the farm. I putt four pieces of toasts into the toaster, three for me, one for my brother. I also took out butter and jam, jam for me, butter for Sora. He and I had the total opposite personalities, but we got along surprisingly well. Sora walked out and grabbed his toast. "let's go." he said.
We stopped by Amane's house down the street, right at the corner. "Amane" I yelled. Amane was my close friend since we were four. I think she liked me, and I kind of liked her back, sora kept encouraging me to ask her out, but I'm too shy and lazy, but mainly because i'm lazy. She peeks out from her window on the second floor, "Are we still going?" She asked.

(MAYBE TOO LONG< BETTER YET STILL COMING< I DON"T KNOW IF YOU WOULD WANT MORE>>>)..if you like it plz comment! ..so i know if you want more..cuz i might not upload more..
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Hmmm it's an interesting start to a story. It sounds good.
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ya nice one..........
Posted 7/24/08
Well I'm going to share my real life love story so please be kind.

When I was in 2nd grade I met this guy named Sunney he was really nice and we became friends really fast. But as we progressed thru 2nd grade we became very close. I think we both noticed because he came up to me at recess and asked "Will you go out with me?" Of course I said yes. And we just started going out. We would hold hands and hug all the time. But one day something amazing happened between us. One day at recess we were just sitting on a bench. We talked all recess and it seemed as if we'd run out of things to say. So he stared into my eyes and I stared into his. He leaned closer towards me and I did the same. I could feel my heart beating out of my body. Then our lips met and it stayed that way for five seconds. After those five seconds, we stared into each others eyes again...and smiled...It turns out our friends saw everything and they kept sayng, "AWWWW!" But me and Sunney ignored them. While our friends were still spreading gossip about our kiss, I asked sunney this," How did you know how to kiss?"....and he said,"My older brother lets me watch him and his girlfriend do it.....He said I have to be good with my girlfriend,"....then he asked,"How did you know how to kiss?".....I said,"I used to date Jonatan in 1st grade, he was my first kiss.".....Jonatan was this mexican guy that I had become friends with......Then the recess bell rang and we walked hand and hand to our lines.....He whispered into my ear," I love you and I'll beat up Jonatan".....I whispered the same thing in his ear....except for the Jonatan part.....then he kissed me on my cheek.....and guess what?....he did beat Jonatan up......Our relationship lasted till the middle of 4th grade....he told me he was moving.....then he gave me one last kiss......And the he was gone.......My friends helped me get thru it.........Now I'm in 7th grade and I still think of him.......hes still my Sunney....and I'm still his Janice.

True story by:JNinja(aka Janice)

I LOVE YOU SUNNEY!!!!!!!!!!
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JNinja wrote:

Well I'm going to share my real life love story so please be kind.

When I was in 2nd grade I met this guy named Sunney he was really nice and we became friends really fast. But as we progressed thru 2nd grade we became very close. I think we both noticed because he came up to me at recess and asked "Will you go out with me?" Of course I said yes. And we just started going out. We would hold hands and hug all the time. But one day something amazing happened between us. One day at recess we were just sitting on a bench. We talked all recess and it seemed as if we'd run out of things to say. So he stared into my eyes and I stared into his. He leaned closer towards me and I did the same. I could feel my heart beating out of my body. Then our lips met and it stayed that way for five seconds. After those five seconds, we stared into each others eyes again...and smiled...It turns out our friends saw everything and they kept sayng, "AWWWW!" But me and Sunney ignored them. While our friends were still spreading gossip about our kiss, I asked sunney this," How did you know how to kiss?"....and he said,"My older brother lets me watch him and his girlfriend do it.....He said I have to be good with my girlfriend,"....then he asked,"How did you know how to kiss?".....I said,"I used to date Jonatan in 1st grade, he was my first kiss.".....Jonatan was this mexican guy that I had become friends with......Then the recess bell rang and we walked hand and hand to our lines.....He whispered into my ear," I love you and I'll beat up Jonatan".....I whispered the same thing in his ear....except for the Jonatan part.....then he kissed me on my cheek.....and guess what?....he did beat Jonatan up......Our relationship lasted till the middle of 4th grade....he told me he was moving.....then he gave me one last kiss......And the he was gone.......My friends helped me get thru it.........Now I'm in 7th grade and I still think of him.......hes still my Sunney....and I'm still his Janice.

True story by:JNinja(aka Janice)

I LOVE YOU SUNNEY!!!!!!!!!!


Such a sweet story about you. I liked it!!
Posted 10/5/08

konichiwa2u wrote:


JNinja wrote:

Well I'm going to share my real life love story so please be kind.

When I was in 2nd grade I met this guy named Sunney he was really nice and we became friends really fast. But as we progressed thru 2nd grade we became very close. I think we both noticed because he came up to me at recess and asked "Will you go out with me?" Of course I said yes. And we just started going out. We would hold hands and hug all the time. But one day something amazing happened between us. One day at recess we were just sitting on a bench. We talked all recess and it seemed as if we'd run out of things to say. So he stared into my eyes and I stared into his. He leaned closer towards me and I did the same. I could feel my heart beating out of my body. Then our lips met and it stayed that way for five seconds. After those five seconds, we stared into each others eyes again...and smiled...It turns out our friends saw everything and they kept sayng, "AWWWW!" But me and Sunney ignored them. While our friends were still spreading gossip about our kiss, I asked sunney this," How did you know how to kiss?"....and he said,"My older brother lets me watch him and his girlfriend do it.....He said I have to be good with my girlfriend,"....then he asked,"How did you know how to kiss?".....I said,"I used to date Jonatan in 1st grade, he was my first kiss.".....Jonatan was this mexican guy that I had become friends with......Then the recess bell rang and we walked hand and hand to our lines.....He whispered into my ear," I love you and I'll beat up Jonatan".....I whispered the same thing in his ear....except for the Jonatan part.....then he kissed me on my cheek.....and guess what?....he did beat Jonatan up......Our relationship lasted till the middle of 4th grade....he told me he was moving.....then he gave me one last kiss......And the he was gone.......My friends helped me get thru it.........Now I'm in 7th grade and I still think of him.......hes still my Sunney....and I'm still his Janice.

True story by:JNinja(aka Janice)

I LOVE YOU SUNNEY!!!!!!!!!!


Such a sweet story about you. I liked it!!


Thank u!!!!

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JNinja wrote:


konichiwa2u wrote:


JNinja wrote:

Well I'm going to share my real life love story so please be kind.

When I was in 2nd grade I met this guy named Sunney he was really nice and we became friends really fast. But as we progressed thru 2nd grade we became very close. I think we both noticed because he came up to me at recess and asked "Will you go out with me?" Of course I said yes. And we just started going out. We would hold hands and hug all the time. But one day something amazing happened between us. One day at recess we were just sitting on a bench. We talked all recess and it seemed as if we'd run out of things to say. So he stared into my eyes and I stared into his. He leaned closer towards me and I did the same. I could feel my heart beating out of my body. Then our lips met and it stayed that way for five seconds. After those five seconds, we stared into each others eyes again...and smiled...It turns out our friends saw everything and they kept sayng, "AWWWW!" But me and Sunney ignored them. While our friends were still spreading gossip about our kiss, I asked sunney this," How did you know how to kiss?"....and he said,"My older brother lets me watch him and his girlfriend do it.....He said I have to be good with my girlfriend,"....then he asked,"How did you know how to kiss?".....I said,"I used to date Jonatan in 1st grade, he was my first kiss.".....Jonatan was this mexican guy that I had become friends with......Then the recess bell rang and we walked hand and hand to our lines.....He whispered into my ear," I love you and I'll beat up Jonatan".....I whispered the same thing in his ear....except for the Jonatan part.....then he kissed me on my cheek.....and guess what?....he did beat Jonatan up......Our relationship lasted till the middle of 4th grade....he told me he was moving.....then he gave me one last kiss......And the he was gone.......My friends helped me get thru it.........Now I'm in 7th grade and I still think of him.......hes still my Sunney....and I'm still his Janice.

True story by:JNinja(aka Janice)

I LOVE YOU SUNNEY!!!!!!!!!!


Such a sweet story about you. I liked it!!


Thank u!!!!



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