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Hm, I want to start writing the next part...
Hmmmmm...
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(Posts are in short bursts.

I think I leveled up in my story abilities. )

Phase 2: "The first battle, Weiss vs. Nero"

-part 1-

"How long...have I been confined in this prison?" Souji said to himself, sitting the corner. His hands and feet restrained in a straight jacket...it wasn't because of mental issues.
Based on Souji's recorded battles, giving him even ONE free limb was dangerous enough.
For appearances, Souji had a court case...but in truth, it was just a fake case.
The public wanted answers, they wanted to blame someone, they wanted someone to be the bad guy...Souji just happened to be the guy who survived.

The steel door slid open, light flowing into the dark room. "Yukimora-san...It's time." A voice said before him.
Souji felt hands lift him up by the straps around the straight jacket.
"Any last words?"
"....." Souji remained silent, what words could he say in this situation? 'I'm innocent?' 'Watch out for Nero?' 'I have a plan in motion?' 'Give me your wallet?'
There wasn't really a lot to say here that would've made a difference anyways.

Souji was led up a giant pedestal, a top a land-carrier.
He wore a steel helmet and a bullet-proof vest now. Probably to keep people from taking shots at him.
He had to suffer of course, a quick death would've been meaningless. Than again, this entire death sentence was meaningless as well.
His hands and feet were restrained by handcuffs that were chained to the pedestal. It allowed him limited movement, in case he tried to escape.
The gates opened, a road was made clear for the land carrier. On both ends of the road, a booing crowd jeered.
To keep them from inciting a riot, Mk. 202 Units were stationed within the crowd to keep them from trying anything stupid.

The carrier started moving, guarded by about 6 Mk. 303 Units. obviously, people would throw things...like rotten foods and heavy objects of course. None of it really injured Souji, it was just an annoyance...

-end of part 1-
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part 2!!^-^
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Okay. *Types out part 2*
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-part 2-


"Everything is set." Ikumi said to herself, she put on the helmet to hide her identity. "And now...let the game begin..." She flipped a switch.
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The land carrier was coming to a turn, a building with a giant TV on it was showing the carrier from different angles.
Suddenly, the screen went fuzzy for a moment...
Nero suddenly appeared on the screen.
(When I say, Nero, I mean Ikumi wearing the disguise.)

"Good evening to all of you," She spoke with a voice mask, the people expressed their reactions: -Confusion and questioning-
The soldiers around the carrier moved in closer, in case it was a terrorist attack.

'So you've made your move, Nero.' Souji had predicted this much, there were still a few more stages to clear but it looks like the objectives were falling within the precited perimeters...
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(Yah, part 2 was short. So here's part 3 to keep you content. )

-part 3-

She pointed directly at the audience, "To those few who believe the culprit of the terrorist attack over a month ago was the person before you," she paused for dramatic effect, a smile appeared on her face, though with the mask it was unseen by the public. "You have been lied to, this entire trial is a hoax, a fake, to mask the truth." She had a switch in her hand, she pressed the button without a moment's notice.
It was at that moment, the TV showed clips of the battle between the military and the terrorists...The truth, not the lie.

The way that neither side cared for civilian casualties, the people had no idea what to think anymore...

Nero appeared on the screen again once the footage was done, "If it hadn't been stopped, than many more people would've been killed," Nero spread out her arms, "That is why, the one who dropped the tower was not him...BUT ME!!!" Nero said the last part with a tone of command and power.

There was a mixed reaction from the public.
She lowered her arms, the cloak around her shoulders covering her body. "False accusation, corruption, willingly and knowingly sacrificing the lives of non-combatants, abuse of power, " She face palmed herself, "The empress would weep had she known." Nero started laughing, "That's right...! As if all that wasn't enough, the true masterminds behind this have committed and act of High Treason!!!" Nero laughed once more, "It's obvious, these sins can not go unexcused. So now, people, here me..." She had another switch in hand, "I AM NERO!!!" She shouted out the last one even louder, spreading out her arms again. "I will enact righteous judgment upon the sinners," she spoke seriously now, "For those of you who do not wish to be involved, now would be a time to run." She flipped the switch, suddenly, at the base of the tower, smoke bombs exploded...blanketing the entire area in a fog of smoke.

Nero's voice spoke into the smoke, "I am Nero...Hear me, those who abuse their power, the evil doers of this world, you are my enemy..." The smoke started to clear, "However, I am not your only enemy..." The smoke completely cleared...

Within the crowds of people, about 30% of them were wearing Nero's costume minus the cloak. They were all equipped with weapons...
"I am merely the leading voice of a silent majority." All the Neros said at once in perfect synchronization...
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Woah...I think I really did level up....
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Hopefully, before school ends. I'll be able to get Nero and Weiss' costumes ready and drawn...they're hard to describe in words.

If not, I have a back up plan just in case...it won't be drawings, but it'll be something at least.
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Behold, my curiosity bests me...

I want to see who can draw Ikumi and Souji best. Based on their descriptions and the way I drew them half a year ago.
(Note: This was drawn HALF A YEAR ago...when I sucked worse than I still do now. )


Ironically, I wasn't originally going to turn the story the way it is now...but it works, doesn't it? And I like it better this way.

Good luck to anyone who thinks they can do it...
Oh, and PS, you can draw them doing whatever...as long as it looks better than my original drawing and I can tell who they are.
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next part!!^-^ wow!! even though ur drawing iz okay i can at least tell who it iz so itz not as bad as u dink it iz^-^ i dont dink i'll draw so...gl 2 those who will try!! :]
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I should put it on the front page so people see it.
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i saw a topic by dattebayo_kawaii nd she said if u need any drawings or stories u can request it so maybe she will help u draw them?^-^
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Okay.
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