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Kokoro-ni Story/Manga by Yaidoll
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Kokoro-ni Chapter 1 Part A.


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Posted 5/10/08
Its really good! Im loving the plot! you just need to work on yuor spelling and grammar. Your right the way its set out is a bit weird but I could still follow it easily, so I wouldnt change it to much
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Thanks I like that comment, as for the spelling and grammer is type way to fast so is commun for me to incorrecly misspell words and make gramatical errors. I apologise for that I don't do it in the regular bases.
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Posted 5/11/08 , edited 6/2/08
Kokoro-Ni Episode 2-Chapter II

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Posted 5/12/08
Please give me your opinio so far, I would like to hear your point of view from different perspectives, not mine.
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Posted 5/13/08 , edited 6/30/08
Episode 3-Chapter III.



Chapter 4-episode 4 "Awaken"

Chapter 4-Episode 4 "Awaken"



"Dance of Blood" Chapter 5-episode 5.




"Red Moon Dual" Chapter 6-Episode 6.

"Rising Beginnings" Kokoro-ni Chapter 7-Episode 7.

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Posted 5/14/08
The fourth episode its going to be delayed because I have way too much work.
Posted 5/23/08
Lol nice story I only read the first chapter . I liked it, keep up the good work. I can see that the plot line is epic. And lol Lord Kami-sama is translated to Lord Lord God
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Posted 5/27/08

RihgisKhan wrote:

Lol nice story I only read the first chapter . I liked it, keep up the good work. I can see that the plot line is epic. And lol Lord Kami-sama is translated to Lord Lord God


I'm glad u liked it. Sorry for the translation errors, the story is entyrely written in Japanese, so I had to go back and translate it to English for u guys, lol. I guess I missed that one.
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Posted 6/9/08
Episodes 4 and 5 of Kokoro-ni r posted. Pleas reed them and give me your oppinions.
Don't look at the grammer errors, I'm still stuck with that stupid bet.
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Posted 6/22/08
iv read up to episode 4 now and its fantastic as predicted sorry i took so long to read it I noticed that u started to do txt speach in it lol prob cuz u type it up so fast dnt worry i do it too Its just funny when you're reading other peoples work and they've done it il read the 5th soon maybe tonight if I can arsed lol
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iv read up to episode 4 now and its fantastic as predicted sorry i took so long to read it I noticed that u started to do txt speach in it lol prob cuz u type it up so fast dnt worry i do it too Its just funny when you're reading other peoples work and they've done it il read the 5th soon maybe tonight if I can arsed lol


Thanks I'm glad u liked it!
I also amaced myself with the speach, I had to go back and correct some of it because by accident I typed the syber speach that we use in japan.
I should have been up to ep 10, but I have so much work that I can not keep up with everything. But I'll post them up soon.
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Posted 6/23/08

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FallenAngel159 wrote:

iv read up to episode 4 now and its fantastic as predicted sorry i took so long to read it I noticed that u started to do txt speach in it lol prob cuz u type it up so fast dnt worry i do it too Its just funny when you're reading other peoples work and they've done it il read the 5th soon maybe tonight if I can arsed lol


Thanks I'm glad u liked it!
I also amaced myself with the speach, I had to go back and correct some of it because by accident I typed the syber speach that we use in japan.
I should have been up to ep 10, but I have so much work that I can not keep up with everything. But I'll post them up soon.


well we cant wait 4 them I know wot u mea about the speach thing I do it all the time its quite funny when you read it
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Posted 6/23/08
Ok everyone episode 6 of Kokoro-ni is up, pls give me your opinions!
Enjoy!
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