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Posted 5/9/08
I think to myself back in the past,
How at times I do things wrong,
I think of myself as an imbecile and an idiot
A image fabricated from the deepest corner of my mind
A moment full of mixed emotions that constantly grins with one another
It was the first time we met
I saw you as a nuisance but yet you talked to me
As the days grew older one by one
I had realized that i have fallen for you
If only I could rewind time,
Make things different,
talk to you more,
enjoyed your company more,
Hopefully leading to a future where both of us smiles
at the warmth and presence of one another
Maybe then I could've been the one to make you smile for all eternity
Posted 5/10/08

azndisaster wrote:

I think to myself back in the past,
How at times I do things wrong,
I think of myself as an imbecile and an idiot
A image fabricated from the deepest corner of my mind
A moment full of mixed emotions that constantly grins with one another
It was the first time we met
I saw you as a nuisance but yet you talked to me
As the days grew older one by one
I had realized that i have fallen for you
If only I could rewind time,
Make things different,
talk to you more,
enjoyed your company more,

Hopefully leading to a future where both of us smiles
at the warmth and presence of one another
Maybe then I could've been the one to make you smile for all eternity



Ano...this really touched me deeply...you are really good....^_^
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Posted 5/10/08
I like ur Poem!!!...is full of truth!!!...Congratulations, sometime i feel the same!!!...very good!!!
Posted 5/11/08
nice poem...i can relate to it XD
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