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Posted 5/10/08
Two guys....and me.....
14-years-old....I can hardly see..
They both love me a lot....
So it kinda puts me in a tough spot...

One on an island and one in the states....
Both are far and quick to evade.....
But I cant hide forever...I need to give a response....
I want to love both but what are the odds...

To love without judgement....is that what I did...
One left and it filled me with dread
But he came back and i'm fine
His smile is all I need to shine...

The other I love...he's special and rare...
Never a sad moment to spare....
3 year age difference but I dont care
BECAUSE I LOVE HIM AND I THINK IT'S FAIR
.....
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Posted 5/10/08
I like your style of poetry and how it visualizes and portrays conflicts that are fairly common with people nowadays. Great job
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Posted 5/10/08
Really a great poem! you really showe a problem that many have: to chose the one to love when you have two to chose from
really a great job ^^
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Posted 5/10/08
That's cool!!!...i hope u cand find the love u're looking for!!!...and u're right in soemthing!!!...his years could be more than yours!!!...but it doesn't care!!!...the love is what we need to care!!!...^^Congratulations
Posted 5/11/08
i agree with azndisaster =3
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