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Posted 5/10/08 , edited 5/10/08
I was rapping with my mates
then i realise it was getting late
i won't go home
cause my mother just mones
i heard a sound
and guess who i found
it was the idiotic policeman
so i hit him with my can
and then i ran
He was normally slow
but today he was on the go
i was arrested for the first time
when my parents came they were not kind
they left me in jail
and they said they will always mail
i am alone
and i'm not at home
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Posted 5/10/08
I like the beat, it sounds a little like rap. and it was pretty confusing at first since it jumps from one thought to another. but the overall meaning of the poem was revealed at the end.
great poem =]
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Wow!!!...nice poem!!!...i hope it's not true!!...or is it?...well the hisotry is cool!!!...i like the can which hit him!!!...hahahaha good job!!! Congratulations
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Posted 5/11/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

Wow!!!...nice poem!!!...i hope it's not true!!...or is it?...well the hisotry is cool!!!...i like the can which hit him!!!...hahahaha good job!!! Congratulations


thanks you and no it's not a true story
Posted 5/11/08
i agree with azndisaster again =3
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