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Posted 5/26/08

xBlackRosex wrote:

i well i kinda like the first one but while writting the story here why dont u write the othe on a paper like tat when u finished the story u put here u could immidiatly put the other on e n the chapters will come fater n we could read u story faster 2


thats a good idea ^ ^ i already finsihed chapter 1 but im going to wait until im done with my babysitter then post up my other story it's gonna be a while probably
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Posted 5/29/08

ahlor wrote:

thanks both of you ^ ^ and i do RALLY!!! wanna make a story about vampires heheh it will be FUN!!!~ im sure of it, maybe i will make one hehe i'll tell you if i do k? im 98% sure i am


I made one before~
but i like reading stuff that other people made!
(I would post it butt...... i'm kinda lazy about it....
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Posted 5/29/08

kyahikaru wrote:


ahlor wrote:

thanks both of you ^ ^ and i do RALLY!!! wanna make a story about vampires heheh it will be FUN!!!~ im sure of it, maybe i will make one hehe i'll tell you if i do k? im 98% sure i am


I made one before~
but i like reading stuff that other people made!
(I would post it butt...... i'm kinda lazy about it....


omg u did??!! u should really do!! >.< i really wanna see it
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Posted 6/5/08
wow the 2 stories are really similar but also completely different haha i think i like story 1 (cause of the outer personality) but i also like story 2 (cause of the stuff animal..) hey why don't you merge them both?
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Posted 6/6/08

ahlor wrote:

ok, im making another manga with midnightangel123 but i don't know which one to do sooo, i wanna know which one do u guys wanna read? plz pick one ir if u dont't like any of these think i'll make up another one ok?



story #1
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>>well...i didn't think about the names yet (im not that far yet) just a short summary.
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>>Every since Miu entered middle school, she lost all of her friends (even her old ones) After 3 years of lonelyness she had developed a outer personalitly (which means she doesn't talk to anybody really, and made a TOATLY!!! different personality,she's very quiet and so call smart which all the other kids think thats how she is) After all those 3 years, she wished from the bottom of her heart to just disappear!!!. But what if she really did disappear? The next mourning she wakes up and finds herself sleeping with a GUY!!! thats she doesn't even know!!!
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>>[i know it sounds stupid and boring but trust me when i make it. it'll be sooo kool!!! >.<]
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>>Story #2 (it's kinda like the story #1)
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>>Have you ever meet a girl, who never had a singel friend in her life time? never had a boyfriend? never CRY?! ALWAYS HAVE BAD LUCK!!!! well your here's your chance to meet that person. Yume had all of those (maybe she's has more bad luck) . With her parents gone to another country, she's always alone. On a rainy windy day, as she was leaving school. Her umbrella flew (cause u know she's bad luck) and brought her to a ragged stuff animal with one missing eye. She quickly brought it home (she likes stuff animals) and fixed up. The very next day she finds a guy in her ROOM!! staring at her!!!
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>>[yup!~ and don't worry if it sounds stupid, it'll be good once i make it ^ ^]
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can't decide!!!! i like both!! but i like my babysitter better!!!

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Posted 6/11/08
OMGosh!!!
i like BOTH.
but i mostly like.... both!!!!

MAKE IT NOW!!!
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Posted 6/11/08

Botchapinn wrote:

OMGosh!!!
i like BOTH.
but i mostly like.... both!!!!

MAKE IT NOW!!!


yup me did i think im going to make chapter 1 of them both and see which one u people likke better ok?
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Posted 6/11/08

XiiaoWitchiie wrote:

wow the 2 stories are really similar but also completely different haha i think i like story 1 (cause of the outer personality) but i also like story 2 (cause of the stuff animal..) hey why don't you merge them both?


yea im trying to but it's kinda hard too TT_TT
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Posted 6/12/08
I like both!
do both? kay?
but do first one1st then the 2nd one or yeahh. :>
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Posted 6/12/08
i love both, but if having to choose one, the second one!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well i did it!! ^ ^ but i kinda made it different i tried to mix it, but it was kinda hard.....iono i might just do them both seperatly ok so here's the first one, o yea and i havne't done the other one....this one is kinda mix so here u go

Always alone
Mr. Bear???
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>>>>>> Everybody in class: *talking and playing around* [note: everybody is outside]
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>>>>>>Kari: ….*sigh* another day alone huh? [note: she’s talking to herself]
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>>>>>>[note: everybody else is outside and Kari is left alone in the classroom, she’s looking though the window]
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>>>>>>Kari: it looks like their really having fun *gazing at them* I- I to want to go outside….just like everyone else, laugh like everyone, joke around, just being able to smile…
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>>>>>>Kari: hahaha look at me, alone in the classroom talking to myself….just like everyday TT~TT
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>>>>>>Kari: but I’ll be ok,I have to be strong just like my mom said, I won’t shed a single tear drop not anymore….i promise you…mom *smiles*
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>>>>>>Kari: when I think about it, it all happened so fast….next thing I knew she was gone….
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>>>>>>[flash back]
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>>>>>>Mom: im sorry Kari, but i won’t be able to eat breakfast with you not today, I have to go to work *looks at her watch* AHH!! Im going to be late!! AGAIN!!! Bye honey *kisses on the forehead*
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>>>>>>Kari: *sad* …..bye…
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>>>>>>Mom: don’t worry I’ll be back ^ ^ and remember be strong!!, don’t give ok? I’ll always be here for you don’t you forget that =)
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>>>>>>Kari: *happy* un! ^_^ (I love my mom very much)
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>>>>>>Mom: AAHHH!! Im already 30 minutes late bye honey!!
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>>>>>>Kari: bye bye *smiles*
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>>>>>>[school]
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>>>>>>Kari: ok!, don’t worry kari u’ll be ok. YOSH! Time to do my best!! I can’t give up gotta be strong.
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>>>>>>Kari: today, I’ll finally make a friend DENFINTILY!!!
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>>>>>>Girls: *whispering to each other* haha did u see that girl?, talking to herself is she crazy
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>>>>>>Kari: *overheard* …..i won’t give in!! I WON’T! *smiles* that won’t bother me anymore
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>>>>>>[in classroom]
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>>>>>>Kari: (….ahh..let see 5! Means 5x4x3x2x1 so…)
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>>>>>>Teacher: Kari you have a phone call
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>>>>>>Kari: uh..yes *going to pick the phone*
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>>>>>>Grandma: kari I have something very important to tell you
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>>>>>>Kari: ok…(she sounds so serious)
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>>>>>>Grandma: but promise me that u won’t cry
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>>>>>>Kari: uh…ok.. (what is she talking about??)
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>>>>>>Grandma: your…mother..….*weeping*
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>>>>>>Grandma: ....d-die.....today...
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>>>>>>Kari: *shock* …..*phone drops* (no…no...no!..NO!)
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>>>>>>Grandma: kari? KARI??!! Are u there??!!
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>>>>>>Kari:*runs out the door* (mom…mom!...you can’t die u can’t leave me!! MOM!!) *crying*
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>>>>>>Kari: *runs all the way home* *opens the door* MOM!!!....MOM?....mom……..*begins crying while checking all the rooms one by one and calling her name at the same time*
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>>>>>>Kari: (only one more room left, mom’s room) *sacred to death* (should I open it??) (…I have to be strong!) *opens it*
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>>>>>>Kari: *crying really loud* MOM!!!! MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crying even louder* (she’s not here….it really is true)
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>>>>>>Person: kari? *puts her hands on her shoulder*
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>>>>>>Kari: *turns around quickly* mom??!!
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>>>>>>Kari: *takes another look* …(no it’s not mom it’s grandma)
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>>>>>>Grandma: im soo sorry kari *hugs her very tightly*
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>>>>>>Kari and grandma: *both crying*
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>>>>>>[flash back ends]
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>>>>>>Kari: *feeling the wind as it blows her hair* (…it all seems like it was a nightmare…and eventually mom will wake me up and we’ll go on with our daily life, like always….mom would wake up late for work again….we’ll eat breakfast together…..but none of those will ever happened again……..)
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>>>>>>*bell rings*
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>>>>>>Kari: it’s already time to leave already?? That was quick finally I get to go home ^^
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>>>>>>Kari: *gets out of class* GREAT! It’s raining super hard *sigh* (o well….i want to walk in the rain today…) *begins to walk in the rain*
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>>>>>>Kari: this is kinda nice….*walking* (something feels weird under my feet?? It feels soft..) *looks down*
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>>>>>>Kari: huh? What’s this?? *looks closely*
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>>>>>>Kari: a teddy bear??? What is it doing here?? Huh? It’s missing one eye poor thing….*thinking* it must be lost….i think I’ll take it home with me ^ ^
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>>>>>>[Kari’s house]
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>>>>>>kari: im home *closes the door*
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>>>>>>grandma: welcome home kari ^ ^ look at you, your all soaking wet, go change
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>>>>>>Kari: yes grandma ^ ^ ( I live with my grandma now…ever since mom die. She’s really nice, just like mom)
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>>>>>>[Kari’s room]
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>>>>>>Kari: look at u Mr. Bear, your all soaking wet too hehe I’ll fix you up right after I change
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>>>>>>Kari: *begins taking off her clothes*
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>>>>>>Kari: *notices Mr. Bear’s face is bright red* eh??...why Mr. bear red?? Does this teddy bear change color or something?
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>>>>>>Kari: maybe it’s sick too *she said that sarcastically* *holds the bear to her chest* [note: she’s trying to warm up the bear, because it’s wet]
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: *wiggles*
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>>>>>>Kari: *felt something move* (did Mr. bear just move?? No it can’t be I must be just shivering*
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>>>>>>Kari: *puts on clothes* ok now it’s time for Mr.bear turn ^ ^ let me go find a button for ur eye
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>>>>>>Kari: …no that one won’t work…how bout this one nope to big…there has to be one that’s the same sizes….
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>>>>>>Kari: found one! Well….it’s the same size but it’s blue though…o well this’ll work for now *puts it on Mr. bear and cleans him*
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>>>>>>{33 minutes later}
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>>>>>>Kari: THERE! *wipes off sweats* all done! Now u look brand new ^ ^
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>>>>>>Kari: *sparkling eyes* WOW!! I didn’t know Mr. bear was this cute! Hehe *snuggles Mr. bear*
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>>>>>>Kari: eh?, why is Mr. bear’s face pink??....(it looks like it’s blusing??...)
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>>>>>>Kari: *tried from cleaning Mr. bear* *yawn* im getting tried…boy it’s sure is hard taking care of u Mr. bear ^ ^
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>>>>>>Kari: from now on ur going to be sleeping with me ^ ^ and I’ll be taking care of you, my name is Kari Fushi
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>>>>>>Kari: ne?, Mr. bear do u have anybody u really love that pass away? *daze* my mom die….just a year ago…but I won’t cry anymore because I promise her that, so lets both do our best ok?! ^ ^ *falls asleep 15 minutes later, while talking to Mr. bear*
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>>>>>>Kari: ….m-mom…don’t go….*sleep talking*
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: *puts the cover over her* *goes down the bed and sleeps on the floor instead*
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>>>>>>[Mourning]
>>>>>>Kari: *rubs eyes* *steps on something soft and warm* …..what is this?....
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: OW!! that hurts…I didn’t do anything wrong..
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>>>>>>Kari: *scare* w-who’s there??!! [now her feet is completely cover Mr. bear up]
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: WILL U KINDLY STEP OFF OF ME
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>>>>>>Kari: *looks down on her feet* *sees the bear trying to escape from her feet*
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: thank you! You stepped on me for a pretty long time….i think you broke my back…*rubbing his back* ouch…
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>>>>>>Kari: …ahh…ahhhh…AAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *falls backward*
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>>>>>>Omg what happened?? And why can the bear move??? What the hell is happened??!!
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>>>>>>Find out in the next chapter!!!! >.<
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Posted 6/26/08
it might be kinda boring in the beginning though....-_-
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Posted 6/29/08
uhmm.. i really like story 2 it seems intresting
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Posted 7/4/08

hihi72 wrote:

uhmm.. i really like story 2 it seems intresting


really?? kool ^ ^ maybe i'll write that one cause everybody been saying that ^ ^
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Posted 7/5/08
OMG. o.o its sooooo cute!!~ lol. i want chap. 2. :>:>
make it in a forum thing. give it a title pls. and thankies.~ soo.
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