Post Reply Good things
Posted 5/10/08 , edited 5/10/08
Jumping in the autmn leaves.....
While watching the rain fall in Spring...
Makes you really wonder....
"In life what are the good things?"

Staying by the fire....
Watching it blaze....
Kissing your Lover....
Lower the gaze....

Running to catch the train....
Making sure that you're not late...
Not getting in trouble....
For the things that you break....

Your family members....
Mom and Chris....
Are all that I have....
And with that I say this....

To Chris...My Brother:
To you good luck and about Pilar I don't give a care in the world about...
But you love her so I'll shout: TAKE CARE OF HIM!!!!!!

To Mom: Happy Mother's Day.....To you my Mother...you've been through so much..
For me and for Chris..and for it i'm so touched.....



Heh heh...sorry if it creeps you out but most of my poems here were made out of thin air......
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Posted 5/11/08
No, it doesn't creep me out. it's really good and it came from your own emotions. Thats the true essence of poem making. =] continue up with the good work
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Posted 5/11/08
no creeping out here ^^ really great poem keep up the great work!
Posted 5/11/08
i agree with yamira ^^
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