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Posted 5/10/08
something i wrote during class, i was kinda day dreaming abut a show i had seen and this poped into my head
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When i see u i want to cry, when i hear u i want to laugh, when i miss you it makes my heart ache, when i talk to you my words seem to fly. i know i shouldn't, but i have, i know this would burden u, but i already have. can i pretend that nothings there can i pretend that your smile is for me? i want to know if i could be yours, i want to know if i could stand next to you with your arms around me, i want to know if i can say that i'm with you. i want to be apart of your world, but can i?

i was 16 and you were 17, i meet you in the libarry, you had your book, i had mine. you sat down, i stood standing. i said hi, you replied. u brought me a drink and we talked. years later, you asked her hand in marriage, i stood watching walk up and say "i do" i saw you two kiss and say "i love you" even though u married my sister, i still love you.
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Posted 5/15/08

i0luv0sweets wrote:

something i wrote during class, i was kinda day dreaming abut a show i had seen and this poped into my head
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When i see u i want to cry, when i hear u i want to laugh, when i miss you it makes my heart ache, when i talk to you my words seem to fly. i know i shouldn't, but i have, i know this would burden u, but i already have. can i pretend that nothings there can i pretend that your smile is for me? i want to know if i could be yours, i want to know if i could stand next to you with your arms around me, i want to know if i can say that i'm with you. i want to be apart of your world, but can i?

i was 16 and you were 17, i meet you in the libarry, you had your book, i had mine. you sat down, i stood standing. i said hi, you replied. u brought me a drink and we talked. years later, you asked her hand in marriage, i stood watching walk up and say "i do" i saw you two kiss and say "i love you" even though u married my sister, i still love you.
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this reli hurts does it..?.. but hey, this one while reading this..i can feel the feelings u want to show..i like it..
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Posted 5/19/08
omg that was so sad and painful but its a good story for a drabble. right on!!!
Posted 5/20/08
this is sad makes me wana cry a little
Posted 5/20/08
aww! is was a short story, but it was totally good! I want more!
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Posted 6/7/08
that hurts... but was really good!
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Posted 6/12/08 , edited 6/12/08
omg... it was your sister whose he's married with... tooo sad...
I hope you'll find the right man for you..
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Posted 7/3/08
awwww I liked it
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Posted 7/5/08
wow!! that was so tragic!! i like it a lot
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Posted 7/16/08
ouch.........short story but very interesting........make me wanna CrY~~`
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Posted 7/17/08
~sad story~
i night a girl waited her boy to pick her up, it was thier 1st anniversary but the guy didn't show up,
the girl was so upset so she phone up her friends and decided to went out with
them. when she came home the girl saw her boy standing close to her with flowers in his hands
she was mad at him so she turned away but the guy hold her hands, hug her tight and said
"i'm sorry baby i didn't show up on time, happy anniversary baby i love you so much" the girl close her eyes and the guy whispered...."times up baby, God gave me only 1 minute to be with you ... i love you"
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Posted 8/19/08
haha thats a good short love story ...

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both scream_rocky and i0luv0sweets had such wonderful stories. Both sad and very tragic.
i liked it KEEP IT UP!!!
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