"Love contract" by yoyok121204
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I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called,
 You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one |
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Ichigo-bankai wrote: I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called, You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one I'll fix it. It's 11:00 pm here so I'm a little sleepy. SorryEpisode 2 is out. |
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Ichigo-bankai wrote: I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called, You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one Screen play. |
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haha, screenplay, thats it!
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Hmm I didn't excepted it to be a screen play but it's wroten good still... I liked it
I agree whit you 8th just the fact that it's written as a screenplay makes the story even more smove than it already is. It's better/easy way to make it an anime! But still it's kinda undevelop I would like to read more of Love Contac so far is great |
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Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks. |
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yoyok121204 wrote: Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks.Can I do that? I've already had quite a bit of practice correcting another fanfic in a different group, so I'd love to help! |
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yoyok121204 wrote: Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks.i wouldnt mind, seems like Sin wants to do it thoiugh, so he can do it, but if he decides otherwise, i would gladly help |
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Thanks for the help.
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