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"Love contract" by yoyok121204
Posted 5/11/08 , edited 9/27/08
Love Contract



Missing Chapter = 10~13

Chapter 1

My misfortune






Chapter 2

My contract


Chapter 3

My friend



Chapter 4

My demon and angel



Chapter 5

My Heaven and Hell have begun.


Chapter 6

My challenge




Chapter 7

My first basketball



Chapter 8

My new competition.


Chapter 9

My new changes


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I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called, You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one
Posted 5/11/08 , edited 5/11/08

Ichigo-bankai wrote:

I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called, You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one


I'll fix it. It's 11:00 pm here so I'm a little sleepy. Sorry

Episode 2 is out.
Posted 5/11/08 , edited 9/27/08


Chapter 14

My Iincho


Chapter 15

My sister


Chapter 16

My decision


Chapter 17

My morning exercise


Chapter 18

My stalkers

Chapter 19

My halo

Chapter 20

My chase



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Ichigo-bankai wrote:

I see u wrote it in,,, ummm.... whats it called... Scene play? Nooo..... ummm..... Dont remember what it is called, You just have a couple.. a lot of spelling errors and gramatical errors, but that doesnt rlly matter, they can be fixed easily, once you get them fixed, it will be easier to read. I like it, and cant wait for the next one


Screen play.
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I suggest that you put both episodes 1 and 2 together, because they really only have the content for one episode.
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I love it! Nothing much has happened yet, but it looks amazingly promising! The fact that it's written as a screenplay makes the story even more elegant than it already is.
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haha, screenplay, thats it!
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Hmm I didn't excepted it to be a screen play but it's wroten good still... I liked it I agree whit you 8th just the fact that it's written as a screenplay makes the story even more smove than it already is. It's better/easy way to make it an anime! But still it's kinda undevelop I would like to read more of Love Contac so far is great
Posted 5/11/08

Ichigo-bankai wrote:

haha, screenplay, thats it!


Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks.
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Ichigo-bankai wrote:

haha, screenplay, thats it!


Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks.


Can I do that? I've already had quite a bit of practice correcting another fanfic in a different group, so I'd love to help!
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yoyok121204 wrote:


Ichigo-bankai wrote:

haha, screenplay, thats it!


Can I ask you a favor ichigo? Can you please kindly correct my errors? I can only write at night and I'm a bit asleep at that time. More over I'm not good on english. I'll just title it as raw and you post the correct one as subbed. or something like that. Thanks.


i wouldnt mind, seems like Sin wants to do it thoiugh, so he can do it, but if he decides otherwise, i would gladly help
Posted 5/11/08
Thanks for the help.
Posted 5/12/08 , edited 9/27/08
Chapter 21

My shadow


Chapter 22

My abduction


Chapter 23

My kidnappers


Chapter 24

My turn table



Chapter 25

My sister's intuition


Chapter 26

My allies




Chapter 27

My first confession




Chapter 28

My team



Chapter 29

My sleep over







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wow! This is the one I wasnt sure about but its actually really good! Ok next chapter lol
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