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"Love contract" by yoyok121204
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Posted 5/12/08
Nice. What gender is the angel by the way? The story didn't make it clear.
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The_8th_Sin wrote:

Nice. What gender is the angel by the way? The story didn't make it clear.


Ilino is a guy.
When Enma wait for him he said Where is that guy?
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yoyok121204 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

Nice. What gender is the angel by the way? The story didn't make it clear.


Ilino is a guy.
When Enma wait for him he said Where is that guy?


Thanks. I missed that.
Posted 5/12/08 , edited 9/27/08
Chapter 30

My invitation



Chapter 31

My lunch is a problem



Chapter 32

My new classmates


Chapter 33

My two lunch in different places



Chapter 34

My match with Yamataro


Chapter 35

My promise


Chapter 36

My unknown enemy


Chapter 37

My cold friendship.


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Posted 5/13/08
Nice! Things are looking good. Be careful though. If I were in your position, I'd have no idea how to go about starting the love thing. Depending how you structure it, it may fail miserably, or ascend into heaven because of how awesome it is. Good luck! It might be hard.
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Posted 5/13/08
Grammar and spelling changes for episode one!


Posted 5/13/08
Thank you very much for fixing the episode one.
Thanks for the advice
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No problem. Should I fix typos in the other chapters too?
Posted 5/13/08 , edited 5/13/08
Thanks.
Please fix it too.
That's why I put the chapters as Raw which means there's some errors there.
Thanks for the help.
Posted 5/13/08 , edited 10/10/08
Chapter 42

My enemies assembles


























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Posted 5/14/08
Your story is very good. Harem fans would surely like your story. I'm sure that you are the first one in the world to make a story like this. I'm just afraid that you might run out of idea since 100 girls means that you will surely have a lot of characters. Well I like this so far and I hope things goes well. Keep it up.
Posted 5/19/08 , edited 5/19/08
Episode 6 Raw

My challenge




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Good stuff. I have little to say. Please keep going.
Posted 5/19/08 , edited 5/19/08

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Good stuff. I have little to say. Please keep going.


But the next episode would be the hardest
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Whoa this is amazing good stuff keep up the good work ^.^
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