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"Love contract" by yoyok121204
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Posted 6/12/08 , edited 6/12/08
I finally caught up and read to episode 13. It's going beautifully.

On a less positive note, I'm having trouble linking the characters' names to the actual characters. It's probably my problem, not a problem with the story.

By the way, is Love Contract ecchi even before Aiko's spanking? How ridiculously huge are the girls' breasts?
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Posted 6/12/08
Wow, this story is getting really good! can''t wait for more!
Posted 6/12/08 , edited 6/12/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:

I finally caught up and read to episode 13. It's going beautifully.

On a less positive note, I'm having trouble linking the characters' names to the actual characters. It's probably my problem, not a problem with the story.

By the way, is Love Contract ecchi even before Aiko's spanking? How ridiculously huge are the girls' breasts?


Well I'm really planning to make this to an ecchi story but not for now. Enma is a pervert demon who would surely push satoshi to his limit. The story is just starting yet. The girls breast? The current girls breast size is just normal. There will be some big breasted and flat chest in the future. Thanks for reading.
Posted 6/12/08
Thanks for reading everyone.
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How human do the angel and demon look? Are they just like everyone else, plus horns or wings, or are they completely unhuman-like?
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How human do the angel and demon look? Are they just like everyone else, plus horns or wings, or are they completely unhuman-like?


Enma have black wing and Ilino have white one. Their appearances is human like. Enma wear gothic dark style clothes while Ilino wear long, white jacket and pants. Enma have two horns but it was hidden due of his long black hair while Ilino have a halo. You can call both of them as bishonen since they are handsome.
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Posted 6/13/08

yoyok121204 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

How human do the angel and demon look? Are they just like everyone else, plus horns or wings, or are they completely unhuman-like?


Enma have black wing and Ilino have white one. Their appearances is human like. Enma wear gothic dark style clothes while Ilino wear long, white jacket and pants. Enma have two horns but it was hidden due of his long black hair while Ilino have a halo. You can call both of them as bishonen since they are handsome.


How old do they look?
Posted 6/13/08

The_8th_Sin wrote:


yoyok121204 wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

How human do the angel and demon look? Are they just like everyone else, plus horns or wings, or are they completely unhuman-like?


Enma have black wing and Ilino have white one. Their appearances is human like. Enma wear gothic dark style clothes while Ilino wear long, white jacket and pants. Enma have two horns but it was hidden due of his long black hair while Ilino have a halo. You can call both of them as bishonen since they are handsome.


How old do they look?


they are more than 6000 years old but they only look like 20-24 years old.
Posted 6/14/08
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very good. n_n it still retains its character. and.. yeah. however, there are some parts here that are better off expressed as thoughts.. it's kinda weird for someone to say, "what are you doing here alone someone?"
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very good. n_n it still retains its character. and.. yeah. however, there are some parts here that are better off expressed as thoughts.. it's kinda weird for someone to say, "what are you doing here alone someone?"


I don't get the second part. you mean the characters expression?
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atelier7 wrote:

very good. n_n it still retains its character. and.. yeah. however, there are some parts here that are better off expressed as thoughts.. it's kinda weird for someone to say, "what are you doing here alone someone?"


I don't get the second part. you mean the characters expression?


kinda..
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Posted 6/14/08

atelier7 wrote:


blckfox7 wrote:


atelier7 wrote:

very good. n_n it still retains its character. and.. yeah. however, there are some parts here that are better off expressed as thoughts.. it's kinda weird for someone to say, "what are you doing here alone someone?"


I don't get the second part. you mean the characters expression?


kinda..


I guess it can't be help. He's using a screenplay.
I just always remember that when satoshi's words became Italic that means he's talking with enma and ilino. He doesn't use italic on enma and ilino since they can talk or shout without being heard.
You might give yoyok a better idea on his writing if you have. ^_^
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i just read the four latest chapters, and it's really anime-ish! good stuff. i was smirking while reading. man, it plays out as an anime should. some parts could have been said in a better way but the enjoyable factor kicks in and whitewashes the errors away.
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Posted 7/21/08
If only someone would turn this into a manga then this story would surely rocks. I mean not even the manga-ka's in japan have ever thought of this story. Very unique. I can imagine it now if this turn into an anime. The plot is not too serious but it have an enjoyable atmosphere. I like Enma so far. He's the one always carrying the comedy
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