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Posted 5/11/08

Kouta_XIII wrote:


SakuraSenin wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:

Than again I have heard of people getting arrested for writing,
But nothing on the internet. That I'm aware of at least. I even asked my friend whose like...the goddess of the internet. -_- She doesn't know of anything either.
PS...That's not an exaggeration. She's seen nearly everything on the internet.


>o everything???!!! ZOMG that sound wrong! >0 the internet can be an evil place! EVERT YOUR EYES FROM EVIL! XP i'm being so random. So have you read part of my story yet?

It's true! >-<
I think she's even seen the yuri of stuff!!! .*everts.*

Mhm. I read it.


Do you like it? Is it wrong? Are there any flaws i need to fix? From what isee you're a good story teller. <_<; Now i think i have a crush on Tatsuya . . .
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And heres what I say...For the sake of being a Mangaka in the future, or maybe becoming a Manga Editor too. Here's my power at work...!
I like the style of writing, very detailed and the conversations seem to flow naturally. Not like mine. I lack human interaction so the conversations don't always flow naturally for me. XD
It seems like at the end theres always something that makes readers want to know what happens next. Very well done, a lot of people usually forget that part. Always make the reader want to come back for more. I look forward to know what happens next...


YAYYYY! Arigato Kouta-kun!
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SakuraSenin wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:


SakuraSenin wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:

Than again I have heard of people getting arrested for writing,
But nothing on the internet. That I'm aware of at least. I even asked my friend whose like...the goddess of the internet. -_- She doesn't know of anything either.
PS...That's not an exaggeration. She's seen nearly everything on the internet.


>o everything???!!! ZOMG that sound wrong! >0 the internet can be an evil place! EVERT YOUR EYES FROM EVIL! XP i'm being so random. So have you read part of my story yet?

It's true! >-<
I think she's even seen the yuri of stuff!!! .*everts.*

Mhm. I read it.


Do you like it? Is it wrong? Are there any flaws i need to fix? From what isee you're a good story teller. <_<; Now i think i have a crush on Tatsuya . . .

Tatsuya:
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By the way Kouta-kun i got 39 on 40 on a english assignment which was the short version the Amethyst Crystal. I got the highest mark in class.
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Posted 5/11/08

Kouta_XIII wrote:


SakuraSenin wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:


SakuraSenin wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:

Than again I have heard of people getting arrested for writing,
But nothing on the internet. That I'm aware of at least. I even asked my friend whose like...the goddess of the internet. -_- She doesn't know of anything either.
PS...That's not an exaggeration. She's seen nearly everything on the internet.


>o everything???!!! ZOMG that sound wrong! >0 the internet can be an evil place! EVERT YOUR EYES FROM EVIL! XP i'm being so random. So have you read part of my story yet?

It's true! >-<
I think she's even seen the yuri of stuff!!! .*everts.*

Mhm. I read it.


Do you like it? Is it wrong? Are there any flaws i need to fix? From what isee you're a good story teller. <_<; Now i think i have a crush on Tatsuya . . .

Tatsuya:


yup xD
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Nice. I always get the highest scores in my english class. I even answer the extra credit right...
I don't even study...or have a locker.
Imagine what I could do if I applied myself.
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Nice. I always get the highest scores in my english class. I even answer the extra credit right...
I don't even study...or have a locker.
Imagine what I could do if I applied myself.


same for me
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Posted 5/11/08
READ If you want a small summary of the Amethyst Crystal go to my profile page. It's tat the bottom. Also there's small summaries of the other stories i plan to write in the future.
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sorry people if i made spelling mistakes.
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i have to put the second chapter on hold for now. You'll have to wait until tomorrow.
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Posted 5/12/08
Yo pe0plez! I'mma back! For those who are excited to read the rest of the second chapter i'll be writing it up soon. Just gimme a minute! XP
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Amazing! Sugoi I cant believe anyone( I think your pretty young so) could make up something like that and when you mentioned all the romance and stuff I was totally convinced that your book or whatever is going to be really great. I think your style of writing is very good and interesting the only flaw I guess is that you put to many buts Thats all pretty much
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woah!! it's awesomeness!!^____^
but maybe you should make a few more ENTERs so if it's long, it won't be an eyesore. but overall, it's great!! plz write more!

~misterywaters, the Creator(lol that sounds creepy)
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