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not a real story , just a story i made up =P might have some grammar errors but just ignore it

Chapter 1



Chapter 2



Chapter 3



O-o...what happen next? Bravo, you did a good job..

lol im not done with the whole entire story yet x_x , ima add a chapter a few mins after this , but i cant complete it since i dont have microsoft word on my computer right now cuz it got erased when i removed all programs from my computer x_x . thanks =]

yes, i read it..now i'm excited, haha! this is really interesting..
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Posted 5/24/08

aichmophobian wrote:


lilaznxgirl wrote:


aichmophobian wrote:


lilaznxgirl wrote:

not a real story , just a story i made up =P might have some grammar errors but just ignore it

Chapter 1



Chapter 2



Chapter 3



O-o...what happen next? Bravo, you did a good job..

lol im not done with the whole entire story yet x_x , ima add a chapter a few mins after this , but i cant complete it since i dont have microsoft word on my computer right now cuz it got erased when i removed all programs from my computer x_x . thanks =]

yes, i read it..now i'm excited, haha! this is really interesting..

thanks =] , if i write it without using mircrosoft word i wont know if i made any mistakes x_x
Posted 6/3/08

lilaznxgirl wrote:

not a real story , just a story i made up =P might have some grammar errors but just ignore it

Chapter 1



Chapter 2



Chapter 3



*updated May 23red

Chapter 4




Chapter 5



NICE!!!!!!!!!! it isnt finish yet rigth????
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lilaznxgirl wrote:

not a real story , just a story i made up =P might have some grammar errors but just ignore it

Chapter 1



Chapter 2



Chapter 3



*updated May 23red

Chapter 4




Chapter 5



NICE!!!!!!!!!! it isnt finish yet rigth????

thanks , nope not finished yet
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Living my life i never payed much attention to bad things since it happened quite rarely to me...i had a family that loved me...i had a girlfriend that was loyal and i had friends that i could never replace. My job was good. I was a barman making plenty of cash and getting reputation from the hot and sexy girls that came there regularly which i must be honest was the least beneficial thing in my life. But It was just a good feeling to get attention like that from these girls. It made me feel like i was a nice and good looking young guy. Everyday id get home and call my girlfriend. It was so good to here her voice after a long 12 hours of work. We would talk about the silly things in life and how her day was. I could listen to that shit for days on end ^^. Her voice was sweet it made any trouble in my life just disappear. Most of us long for a feeling like this since a lot of shit pisses everyone off and to be able to just dismiss it at the sounds of something so special makes u feel so warm and fuzzy inside. Like there is a god after all and hes looking after you. My best friend was getting married and above all else he made me the godfather of his child. I was never ever more proud to be the godfather of someones child. When i was young..people used to think i was the most irresponsible person in the whole wide world. Always losing my wallet, always getting lost in places that i did not recognize, never being able to stand up on my own two feet when someone pushed me down. But now i was the soul back up god forbid something ever happened to my best buddy. We were friends since the age of 12 and now us being 21 the friendship was strong as ever. Id always boast about how we never ever had a fight that came between us. There was one case where our ego's came between us and that was when i beat him in a sparing match of boxing when we were 19, for gym.it lasted maybe 3 or four hours before i approached him and said. "Man u threw some awesome punches". He laughed and said "u punch like a girl". With that we went to the cafeteria and he bought me lunch.
Family was always my back up. When i had troubles with girls as a young lad, my mum would always be there for me, picking me up, telling me that life isn't so bad. She used to tell me that girls have a lot of feelings and that you need to understand how they feel. Things don't work out with girls all the time and thats your trial and lesson till you finally find that one day you'll meet a girl that will love you, and you will love her. My mum was the strongest women id ever meet. My dad was a hard man. He did nothing but work. I used think he was the biggest bastard in the world because he never ever showed any feeling toward me and my mother. I never understood why he was the way he was. Often id ask my mum why my dad was like that and what she was doing with a man like that. She always smiled at me and said "when your older you will understand". I used to get confused because i was going through the whole "SEX EDUCATION" thing at school, and figured she was talking about him being good in bed or some gross shit like that. One thing i was sure of was that he was the man of the house. He worked, Payed the bills, put the food on the table and looked after me and my brother like his life depended on it. He didn't show much emotion but somehow i knew he cared. On my 18th birthday he brought me out for a drink. He didn't talk much but somehow i felt that me and him were bonding. We were two men, part of the same family and we were together doing what grown ups do..drinking and shit LOL.....i was always curious about a scar he had on the back of his head and so being aware of this scar for the last 16 years of my life...i just had to ask him where he got it from. He said to me:

"when u were 14 months old me and your mother brought u for a walk into the park. You used to cry a lot as a baby and the only way to quieten you down was if we brought you for a walk. During the walk 3 trouble makers were drunk and grabbed your mums behind while we were walking past. I told them to fuck off and go home before i hurt them. One of the youths picked up a wooden 2"4 (a long wooden plank) and said "WTF are u gonna do old man. Ill fuck you and your wife up. Go back to your own country and take that little rat of a baby with you"...And so i walked over to him and broke his arm. I grabed his neck and put my face to his and said "if u ever say that again ill rip your fucken face off and feed it to your two litte faggot friends". The guy screamed like a little bitch but unfortunately I did not see one of his friend behind me. His friend broke a bottle over my head and thats how i got the scar".

I was speechless when he told me that story. I asked him "so what happened??" my dad smiled and said "well hows life for u now? if it went bad would u and me be here right now? The next day i asked my mum about that story. My mum never lies and said it was all true. She told me that..this is what she meant by "You'll understand when your older".



Im gonna continue the story when i get more sleep LOLOL!!!..let me know if u think its interesting..its the beggining of a project i working on :)
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Living my life i never payed much attention to bad things since it happened quite rarely to me...i had a family that loved me...i had a girlfriend that was loyal and i had friends that i could never replace. My job was good. I was a barman making plenty of cash and getting reputation from the hot and sexy girls that came there regularly which i must be honest was the least beneficial thing in my life. But It was just a good feeling to get attention like that from these girls. It made me feel like i was a nice and good looking young guy. Everyday id get home and call my girlfriend. It was so good to here her voice after a long 12 hours of work. We would talk about the silly things in life and how her day was. I could listen to that shit for days on end ^^. Her voice was sweet it made any trouble in my life just disappear. Most of us long for a feeling like this since a lot of shit pisses everyone off and to be able to just dismiss it at the sounds of something so special makes u feel so warm and fuzzy inside. Like there is a god after all and hes looking after you. My best friend was getting married and above all else he made me the godfather of his child. I was never ever more proud to be the godfather of someones child. When i was young..people used to think i was the most irresponsible person in the whole wide world. Always losing my wallet, always getting lost in places that i did not recognize, never being able to stand up on my own two feet when someone pushed me down. But now i was the soul back up god forbid something ever happened to my best buddy. We were friends since the age of 12 and now us being 21 the friendship was strong as ever. Id always boast about how we never ever had a fight that came between us. There was one case where our ego's came between us and that was when i beat him in a sparing match of boxing when we were 19, for gym.it lasted maybe 3 or four hours before i approached him and said. "Man u threw some awesome punches". He laughed and said "u punch like a girl". With that we went to the cafeteria and he bought me lunch.
Family was always my back up. When i had troubles with girls as a young lad, my mum would always be there for me, picking me up, telling me that life isn't so bad. She used to tell me that girls have a lot of feelings and that you need to understand how they feel. Things don't work out with girls all the time and thats your trial and lesson till you finally find that one day you'll meet a girl that will love you, and you will love her. My mum was the strongest women id ever meet. My dad was a hard man. He did nothing but work. I used think he was the biggest bastard in the world because he never ever showed any feeling toward me and my mother. I never understood why he was the way he was. Often id ask my mum why my dad was like that and what she was doing with a man like that. She always smiled at me and said "when your older you will understand". I used to get confused because i was going through the whole "SEX EDUCATION" thing at school, and figured she was talking about him being good in bed or some gross shit like that. One thing i was sure of was that he was the man of the house. He worked, Payed the bills, put the food on the table and looked after me and my brother like his life depended on it. He didn't show much emotion but somehow i knew he cared. On my 18th birthday he brought me out for a drink. He didn't talk much but somehow i felt that me and him were bonding. We were two men, part of the same family and we were together doing what grown ups do..drinking and shit LOL.....i was always curious about a scar he had on the back of his head and so being aware of this scar for the last 16 years of my life...i just had to ask him where he got it from. He said to me:

"when u were 14 months old me and your mother brought u for a walk into the park. You used to cry a lot as a baby and the only way to quieten you down was if we brought you for a walk. During the walk 3 trouble makers were drunk and grabbed your mums behind while we were walking past. I told them to fuck off and go home before i hurt them. One of the youths picked up a wooden 2"4 (a long wooden plank) and said "WTF are u gonna do old man. Ill fuck you and your wife up. Go back to your own country and take that little rat of a baby with you"...And so i walked over to him and broke his arm. I grabed his neck and put my face to his and said "if u ever say that again ill rip your fucken face off and feed it to your two litte faggot friends". The guy screamed like a little bitch but unfortunately I did not see one of his friend behind me. His friend broke a bottle over my head and thats how i got the scar".

I was speechless when he told me that story. I asked him "so what happened??" my dad smiled and said "well hows life for u now? if it went bad would u and me be here right now? The next day i asked my mum about that story. My mum never lies and said it was all true. She told me that..this is what she meant by "You'll understand when your older".



Im gonna continue the story when i get more sleep LOLOL!!!..let me know if u think its interesting..its the beggining of a project i working on :)

Red Alert: Please plese please please continue!! Luv it!!
Posted 7/2/08

Okay Guys... Here I go... My first free story.... Tell me what do u think ^_^
By the Way... I'm also Lolle... the creator of the group... I've got 2 accounts... hehe

The darkness invaded the hole scenery and the full moon was hidden by the clouds. The girl hardly opened her eyes and slowly started to stand up. There were small rats running on the desert streets. The people went on without talking, they were shadows and ghosts but no more human beings. They hearts were full of anger and madness, there was no more hope in that world. Small tears cleaned the bloody face of the girl while she was calling her relatives' names. The darkness and the silence swallowed the noise of her weak voice. She continued to cry the names even knowing that she'll never had an answer. Her breath became harder and her force begun to disappear. Strong arms took her before she fell down.
-Don't be afraid, clam down! Let's move on, here there is too much dust to breath.- The young guy looked gentle and kind. His face was clean even if the ashes and the fire were wherever the eyes turned. -What's your name?-
-My name?- the girl wasn't sure about him so she didn't tell him her true name.-I'm Susy, Who're you?-
-I'm Alex. Don't worry, be sure I'm not a bad guy!- He was probably the same age of her but he looked sad and tired of life.
Susy met his eyes and felt something strange into her heart. She was scared but also excited because of his presence. Slowly her cheeks became more and more red in front of his eyes.
He was talking again. - The people away from this city is telling at the radio that the war is finishing but in this place there isn't enough hope.- Strangely he became serious all of a sudden.
-Maybe it is finishing away from here but the fire never burned out since the last week. I'm sure the soldiers will return here soon.- She didn't met his eyes again but she feels his look at her.
-Where is your family?-
-And yours?-
It filled the silence again. The two of them don't talk for a long time.
-Susy! They're arriving! RUN!- He took her hand and went on from the small bridge to the other side of the city.
The images became unclear, Alex became a shadow or a ghost.
-Alex! Alex!- His warm hand disappeared slowly.
Other shadows were running near of them. The noise became far and weak.

-Emily! Wake up Emily!- strong arms were shaking her. Her eyes hardly opened. The scenery was completely different.
-Where am I?-
-What do you mean? We're at home, Where else?-
She was sleeping in warm and white sheets.
-Alex, Did the war finish?-
-Emy, it was a bad dream! The war has finished nine years ago!-
Slowly she started remembering. The shadows, the fire, the ashes, the blood and in the end... The Pace! She smiled to her husband and hugged him.
-Daddy, what happened to mom?- The little sweet girl came to the room with fear.
-Nothing Susy! Mommy is free now...-



Hope u liked it!!!^_^
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Read Prolouge only.. The 1st chapter is still being typed.. I'll continue it tmr!

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Chapter 1: New Alliances and An old friend
Posted 7/12/08 , edited 7/12/08
hi! wow, this is the first time i'm gonna post a story here. anyway, this one isn't true...it's fiction. i'm dabbling at fiction so i hope you tell me how this goes...

Part 1


...to be continued if you think it's not a waste of time. lol

Posted 7/13/08

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hi! wow, this is the first time i'm gonna post a story here. anyway, this one isn't true...it's fiction. i'm dabbling at fiction so i hope you tell me how this goes...

Part 1


...to be continued if you think it's not a waste of time. lol



NOOOO not a waste of time at all!!!!! But u cannot finish it that way!!!!! I'm getting curious!!! Hope to see the rest soon ^_^ *hugs!*
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majorjean wrote:

hi! wow, this is the first time i'm gonna post a story here. anyway, this one isn't true...it's fiction. i'm dabbling at fiction so i hope you tell me how this goes...

Part 1


...to be continued if you think it's not a waste of time. lol




this is not a waste of time, i hope you continue it can't wait to read what happens next, seriously i'm really curious now on what's going to happen
Posted 7/20/08

majorjean wrote:

hi! wow, this is the first time i'm gonna post a story here. anyway, this one isn't true...it's fiction. i'm dabbling at fiction so i hope you tell me how this goes...

Part 1


...to be continued if you think it's not a waste of time. lol



wow! awesome! you really should continue this story^^



Posted 7/25/08 , edited 7/29/08
here's the second part of the story. hope you enjoy rdg it!

Part 2



to be continued...
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Heres something i thought we could all enjoy :D...let me know if u wanna be in the story
Actually i thought i could make this story more interesting if i used people from these very forums. I did my best to match their personalities to the actual person. Some of it will be from my imagination aswell but u know....just for fun and jokes. send me a message if u want to be in it. iv already added some people i know to the first chapter. P.S. i still got some characters to fill in so let me know asap if u wanna be in the story :)!

its action adventure lol! LOL @_@; hope u enjoy



Chapter one - the blind maN, the dark figure and the Silly girl.

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Heres something i thought we could all enjoy :D...let me know if u wanna be in the story
Actually i thought i could make this story more interesting if i used people from these very forums. I did my best to match their personalities to the actual person. Some of it will be from my imagination aswell but u know....just for fun and jokes. send me a message if u want to be in it. iv already added some people i know to the first chapter. P.S. i still got some characters to fill in so let me know asap if u wanna be in the story :)!

its action adventure lol! LOL @_@; hope u enjoy



Chapter one - the blind maN, the dark figure and the Silly girl.



Chad!! You little...So naughty!! Poor Jenny, XXD btw, thumbs up!! I missed you so much, hehe..
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