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Posted 5/14/08 , edited 5/14/08
there was once
a person
who allways
looked at the one person
when ever
she walked
beside him
and
talked
it sounded like the
sweetest sound
in the world
and when he looked
at her
from afar
he would wisper
"I love you"

Days past
and days go
and still
his heart wants the one
and this time
he says it louder
then a wisper
" I love you"
but
she dont hear him

One day
he finally
stands there
so close to the one
and
then he says it
" I love you"
so loud and clear
but she looks at him
whit
confused eyes
and no love in them

he feels the ground
have left his
feet
as sorrow
take over
and it let it take
him to a place
he never should
have gone

days have past
and
days have come
and one place
a girl cries
a letter
in her hands
whit words
from a broken heart
if she just have heard
and not
started the music
then she would
have told the
boy
those words
that he wanted to hear
and
that she wisper now..
"I love you too"

I just got the idear and I just love this pic its so sweet!
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Posted 5/14/08 , edited 5/14/08
thats a really awesome poem =] good job on it
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Posted 5/14/08 , edited 5/14/08
thank you very much ^^
Posted 5/15/08 , edited 5/15/08
Wow I lyk this one !!! its so cool!!!!
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Posted 5/15/08 , edited 5/15/08

Inu-kage wrote:

Wow I lyk this one !!! its so cool!!!!


thank you very much ^^
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Posted 5/15/08 , edited 5/15/08
It's beautiful!!!....Ur poem!!!...she was bad!!!...Poor him!!!...and ur picture explain very good ur poem!!!...and ur poem explain very good the picture Congratulations
Posted 5/15/08 , edited 5/15/08
i really like this poem it matches the pic perfectly ( kinda sad T^T, but still cute X3)
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Posted 5/16/08 , edited 5/16/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

It's beautiful!!!....Ur poem!!!...she was bad!!!...Poor him!!!...and ur picture explain very good ur poem!!!...and ur poem explain very good the picture Congratulations


thank you ^^
well the girl wasnt really bad....or did it sound like that ?? but thank you very much <3
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kagura4 wrote:

i really like this poem it matches the pic perfectly ( kinda sad T^T, but still cute X3)


thank you ^^
I made the poem for that pic I have allways wanted to make one and it turned out perfectly =D
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Posted 5/18/08 , edited 5/19/08
i really like ur poem and i love that pic too!!
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Posted 5/19/08 , edited 5/19/08

LeSLy77 wrote:

i really like ur poem and i love that pic too!!


Thank you very much <3
Posted 6/2/08 , edited 6/3/08
oh i love that poem
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baltro9 wrote:

oh i love that poem


thank you ^^ glad you liked it =D
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