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The first priestess of Crestalia~ Emengard

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The past of Crestalia

Crestalia was once said that was formed from volcanic rock 60 years ago. After it sprung up the first king ruled it with a lot of people suffering, in order to achieve harmony the people of this kingdom asked for help from the priestess of that time. The priestess couldn’t do anything to help them for her life was in danger within the king’s wrath. But she consulted the mighty one, she asked what will she do and the mighty one’s answer was “Do what you think is right for it will set you free.” After this answer the priestess knew that she has to sacrifice her own life for this kingdom. She called everyone within the kingdom, “From now on I won’t be with you anymore. But before I leave I’ll bestow upon this kingdom it’s harmony that it has dreamt of. These charms will hold my power until it finds its rightful owner and gains it own power. The charms pure white and pure black hearts will only show to the rightful twins. And now I say my good bye.” After the priestess said these words she immediately died and her powers were transferred to the crests. The crests immediately glowed with bright light and this bright light killed the first king of Crestalia. After this the kingdom had a new king, who was kinder. The crests were left within the shrine. Soon the 12 souls were established and took guard on the crests. The crests will only shine to the rightful girl they have chose but in order for the crests to gain its own power it must go true many hardships and battles. So to find the hundred princesses easily the 30th king of Crestalia established a game for only the hundred princesses will take. This game was called Roze game.

To be continued.......
Posted 5/15/08
ok....so we (12 souls) are not once ppl and became dead........ok.......haha......what is this so called roze game?wohhhh!!1 i want to know already!!!!! haha......wait....just and advise...neh change the text color...it's a bit of an eyesore for the readers
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lolz X D....im excited X D......this sounds cool X D....if i have to choose one of those charms...I WANT ONE OF THE DARKNESS ONES! X D
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Nice back story! Can't wait to read more.

~Oh, and I agree with ayaka on the yellow text, it strains the readers eyes.
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I changed it already.
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it could need revision but overall, nice story ^_^

the yellow text is an eyesore, btw did u get the roze game from something or did u just come up with it???
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oops, sorry, the text was changed when i was typing the last response >_<
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I changed it already.

yey!!!!! thanks!!!!!
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nash_ayakahirusawa wrote:


LovelyCrystal wrote:

I changed it already.

yey!!!!! thanks!!!!!


I need 40 hundred princesses, Ayaka can you change the profile and put more crowns for the hundred princesses
Posted 5/15/08
Can u put Outsider on there....and me on it X D.......that way i can be on anyside i want....i can do it for MONEY! X D im one of those paying job people or ifi want i can do it for free if i like them X D
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kodieloiler wrote:

Can u put Outsider on there....and me on it X D.......that way i can be on anyside i want....i can do it for MONEY! X D im one of those paying job people or ifi want i can do it for free if i like them X D


So u mean like a freelance mercenary???
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yeah! X D....(???)
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kodieloiler wrote:

Can u put Outsider on there....and me on it X D.......that way i can be on anyside i want....i can do it for MONEY! X D im one of those paying job people or ifi want i can do it for free if i like them X D


So u mean like a freelance mercenary???


What's a freelance mercenary?????
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Mercenary Def.
1. working or acting merely for money or other reward; venal.
2. hired to serve in a foreign army, guerrilla organization, etc.

basically its a sword for higher that has no affiliation with any group or organization, they simply do what they are paid for or what they want to do though it depends on the leader
( upper def. from Dictionary.com, lower one is mine)
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