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"Kokoro-ni" by yaidoll
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Kokoro-ni, Enjoy!

English translation: Twin Souls
(Opening song)
"Angel of Darkness"


(Ending)
"Marionette"
by: Ayumi Hamasaki
Lyrics and Translation:




(Update)
Character Profiles will b posted soon! Ps if u have seen the music video for "Marionette", that is exsacly how the AMV for this manga will b.


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Kokoro-ni Chapter 1 Part A.


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Chapter III is at my groups page, I'll put it up when I'm done with chapter 4, but if U want to read it you are more that welcome to do so at my site. Hope you enjoy it. I had to put the Copy Rights on it because it will be released in my city next week.
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Dont post them all seperatly, lol, just edit your 1st post, and are you trying to put the stories in the spoilers?
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At certain points, the head guy was called: "Lord Kami-sama," which translates to "Lord Lord God."

Anyway, I've only read the first episode, but I will read the rest later.
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Lol, I know that I'm just having a rough time this week. I'll make it better starting from now. That is if I can get my thought coordinated enough so I know what I'm doing.
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lol, alright, want me to put them in spoilers for u?
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Guys episode 4 will be up before the end of this week. I know it should have been posted allready, but I took a little time off. The character of Kami-sama is called at times Lord Kami-sama because the original one is completely writen in Japanese and I'm re-typing it and translating it for u guys to read. If there r any translation mistakes like this one that flows away with out me knotecing it when typing pls let me know and I'll gladly clearify it. Sorry, retyping and translating this has been harder than I thought. Thank god is my own work, it would have been pothetic if I did this to someone elses, but so far it has been translated exsacly as it is, nothing has been changed. I'm very happy for that!
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"Red Moon Dual" Kokoro-Ni episode 6-Chapter 6.


"Rising Beginnings" Kokoro-Ni episode 7-Chapter 7



“Stranger’s innocence & Guardian’s deal”

Chapter 9-Episode 9 “Essence of Death”
Scene 1.
Yoshiro, Momo and Yume had been riding the bike threw the valleys and forests for almost and entire day. The sun was setting and temperatures were rapidly declining. The surroundings looked desolated and not one single soul would pass by, they couldn’t see any villages or towns near by either.
Yoshiro: This doesn’t look good, at this rate the night will fall and we will have to camp out under the frozen sky tonight.
He says worried.
Yume: Yes, you are right, this woods look deserted!
She says shivering and pulling her body close to hi s back to fell his warmth.
As predicted the sun sat and a frizzing breeze flowed through them penetrating their cloths and hitting them like a bloc of ice.
Momo: Look over there! He points to a flicker of light in the distance. That looks like a small house and it looks like there is people living in it.
Yoshiro: Why on earth would people want to live out here in the middle of nowhere? I’m my opinion they are crazy!
Momo: Have you forgotten that at the moment we are in the middle of nowhere too?
Yoshiro: Dam brat! Who asked your opinion? He says hitting him with his close first in the young boys head.
Momo: ouch, that hurts! He says robbing his head with his right hand. Besides I was just making a polite remark!
*2 tear drops rolled down his chicks.*
Yume: Yoshiro, that was not nice of you to do; besides Momo is right!
Says Yume with a soft voice.
Yoshiro: All right, I’m sorry, let’s go check that house out.
He says as if asking for permission to his words and tong to speak.
Scene 2.
They arrived at the house, which looked a lot like a hovel or a small cabin. It was made of bamboo, but in horrible bad shape, the front door was falling apart and the windows were broken.

Yoshiro got off from the bike and slowly approached the front door.
“Nock, nock, nock” *he politely knocked on the door*
Who is it? Asked an elder voice coming from the inside.
I’m a troubler who seeks refuge for me and my friends during this cold night, can u please spear a room, or some floor for us to spend the night?
Steps where herd from the inside coming towards the door, they were very slow and it sounded as if the person was dragging its feet. An old lady of small stature with gray hair , a pair of round black framed glasses and yellow eyes, which looked worn out by life it self opened the door. She was wearing a white kimono with a purple obi (the sash worn at the waste of the kimono) and brown worn out wooden sandals.
Old lady: Yes, come on in! Please feel at home! It’s not much, but u can stay here in the living room if you like?
Yoshiro, Yume and Momo took off their shoos and entered the small house.
All three of them say: Thank you mam, it’s very noble of you to let us spend the night here!
*they bowed in front of her*
Old lady: Ah please there is no need for that! Besides is what any one with a heart would do for 3 souls in need!
They all sat down on white tatami mats with their legs crossed. The lady sat in front of a sowing machine, she seemed very concentrated on sowing some piece of cloth. Yoshiro, Yume and Momo sat in a line directly in front of her. To the side of the room was a fire place with burning wood to keep the small home warm. Next to it was a hallway and at the end a dark door, which could perhaps be a room.
Old lady: My name is Yoko! What brings you 3 to this desolated woods?
She says slightly lifting her eyes from her sowing.
Yume: It’s nice to meet you! We are on our way to visit our family; they leave on the other side of the forest How about you? Why are you all the way out here and alone?
Yoko: Is very simple, my entire family died during a civil war a long time ago and since I love nature and so did day, I decided to spend the rest of my days living out here in the woods where I’m constantly surrounded by nature. I feel much closer to them.
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Yoshiro: But you are constantly in danger of being attacked by wild creatures, aren’t you afraid?
He says very concerned.
Yoko: No, not really I’m used to these woods and the creatures know I mean no harm to them.
She says standing up. I’m going to go out for a second, the wood in the fire place is almost all burned out, so I’ll get some more from the back of the house before the fire extinguishes and the room gets too cold. I’ll be right back, make yourselves at home, but don’t wonder around too much, I don’t like people roaming around my things.
As she turned on her heals, picked up her Cain and headed to the door, Yoshiro got up and getting in her way says: There is no need for you to go out there so late at night, let me go get the wood, you just stay here and relax!
Yoko pushing him aside says: no, no, no, as your host it’s my duty to make sure you guys are as comfortable as possible, so I’ll get it!
Yoshiro: Please meam, I insist, let me go instead?
Yoko got a little irritated and says: No! I’ll go get it, sty here!
She pushed him aside once again and shot the door behind her.
Momo: She sure is a persistent one!
Yoshiro: Naaaa, its old people’s syndrome! They are as stubborn as hell and there is no way to change their minds!
He says sitting down next to Yume who had a puzzled look in her face.
Yoshiro: Yume, Yume, what’s wrong? He got no answer; she was staring blank into space. Yuhooo! Earth to Yume! Is there anyone inside that head? He says several times waving his hands in front of Yume’s face to get her attention.
Yume: Ahhhh! What is it Yoshi-kun? Did you say something just now?
She says jumping back in surprise and l little scared.
Yoshiro: just wondering what was wrong, why are you spacing out so much? Is something wrong?
He says gently putting his right hand on her laps.
Yume: I have been feeling very strange since we walked in, is like a bad premonition, I Feel that we are in danger here, maybe we should get out of here while we have time!
Yoshiro: It’s just that! There is nothing to worry, we are perfectly safe in here and out of harms way, what sort of harm could a sweet and lonely old lady cause us? COME ON relax, nothing will happen!
He says taking her hands and holding them tight.
Yume: Oh all right, but I still can’t help to feel a beat uneasy about all this. Something about this
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Episode 6 will b up soon!
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Guys, plz b patient, I'll upload ep 6 soon.
I'm a little busy with work and summer brake homework.
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Good news everyone!
Episode 6 is posted, to find it got to the post of ep 5.
read it, its pretty good and has lots of action!
pls excuse my grammer, still struggling with that baka bet.
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Episode 7 has been posted. pls ppl give me some fead-back!
Arigato.
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