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"Kokoro-ni" by yaidoll
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Posted 7/16/08
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Episode 8 will b posted at the end of this week. sry for the delay, but I have a deadline from the manga comming up and have been working on it day and night. But I promise u guys that it will b posted before this week is over.
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As I promised, ep 9 has been posted! Pls read it and hope u enjoy it!
ps, there is a very good surprice in it. Its getting really good, so don't mis out on reading it!
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Posted 7/21/08
Hey, if anyone is reading this, I would like some comments once in a while. I like to know what u guys think of it so far!
Thanks for reading, Yaidoll!
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Posted 7/22/08
ouch ... my eyes sting a little ... wish i had a book mark or sumthing to hold my spot ...
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It really does sound like they are talking in old fashon english, making it real suiting ...
The plot feels really Norse-Mythology like, using the idea of betraying a nation for power and stufff like that ...


Sorry but heres the nagative
Olimpus? ... Olimpus is Greek/Roman mythology but the names seem to be really misplaced... each name is styleized like it were Japanese due to vowels after aver consanant. when i read the setting i was expecting like Virnus, Cassaundra, Hrothal, or Zues ...
Is this like a different kind of "heaven"? ...
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Posted 7/22/08 , edited 7/22/08

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Oh yeah, thanks a lot for reading!
ouch ... my eyes sting a little ... wish i had a book mark or sumthing to hold my spot ...
As a comment
It really does sound like they are talking in old fashon english, making it real suiting ...
The plot feels really Norse-Mythology like, using the idea of betraying a nation for power and stufff like that ...


Sorry but heres the nagative
Olimpus? ... Olimpus is Greek/Roman mythology but the names seem to be really misplaced... each name is styleized like it were Japanese due to vowels after aver consanant. when i read the setting i was expecting like Virnus, Cassaundra, Hrothal, or Zues ...
Is this like a different kind of "heaven"? ...


Sry about your eyes, I wish I had a marker some times, it gets so confucing!
About Olimpus, yeah its a mixure, I did wanted to step out of the box a little and since I love both Japanese culture and mythology I desided to mix it up a little and yeah, for the time being this a differentolimpus. Fuder on the story I will include some chinto prinsipals, since they blend in quite nicely with mythology. The setting on Earth is some what of a futal Japan somewhere around the Tokagawa dinasty.
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Posted 7/31/08
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New episodes will b posted soon!
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Oh my god! I read your thread, to find that no one is posting. This is just awful. I'm sorry for putting it off this long! I've read only episode 1, so I can't comment much. However, there is one word that can describe roughly what I expect the plot to be like.



I will wait to give any real comments until after a couple more episodes. However, the plot seems agreeably simple.
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Oh my god! I read your thread, to find that no one is posting. This is just awful. I'm sorry for putting it off this long! I've read only episode 1, so I can't comment much. However, there is one word that can describe roughly what I expect the plot to be like.



I will wait to give any real comments until after a couple more episodes. However, the plot seems agreeably simple.


Lols, thanks for your comment, I have got use to it by now. Glad u could read it, and just a little heads up on what will happen on the rest of the episodes, it will get real interesting as vampires, demons and more will show up.
Nope, its not Inuyasha related, or similar, the only thing thats a little similar at the moment is the place and time. This has more to do with mythology both Japanese and Greeck and there is a conflict which involves vampires in it too. It will get really interesting.
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The_8th_Sin wrote:

Oh my god! I read your thread, to find that no one is posting. This is just awful. I'm sorry for putting it off this long! I've read only episode 1, so I can't comment much. However, there is one word that can describe roughly what I expect the plot to be like.



I will wait to give any real comments until after a couple more episodes. However, the plot seems agreeably simple.


Nope, its not Inuyasha related, or similar, the only thing thats a little similar at the moment is the place and time. This has more to do with mythology both Japanese and Greeck and there is a conflict which involves vampires in it too. It will get really interesting.


It also has a boy who travels around with a girl who is from another dimension/realm of being and pretends to hate the heroine but is really falling in love with her and is kind of an idiot. That reminds me of Inuyasha too.

It's not a bad thing in of itself.
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yaidoll wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

Oh my god! I read your thread, to find that no one is posting. This is just awful. I'm sorry for putting it off this long! I've read only episode 1, so I can't comment much. However, there is one word that can describe roughly what I expect the plot to be like.



I will wait to give any real comments until after a couple more episodes. However, the plot seems agreeably simple.


Nope, its not Inuyasha related, or similar, the only thing thats a little similar at the moment is the place and time. This has more to do with mythology both Japanese and Greeck and there is a conflict which involves vampires in it too. It will get really interesting.


It also has a boy who travels around with a girl who is from another dimension/realm of being and pretends to hate the heroine but is really falling in love with her and is kind of an idiot. That reminds me of Inuyasha too.

It's not a bad thing in of itself.


Oh yeah that too! But unlike Inuyasha, the plot is very different and so is their relationship. He'll change his character as u will see in the rest of the episodes.
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sry u guys, I was supposed to post the new eps today, but I'm going to re-do them because I didn't liked their translations. I'm a lil home seek so I guess that must have affected the prosess in a way. When I get the right translations I'll post them. Thanks to all those ppl who have been keeping up with the story so far. Even though u don't leave any comments I know ppl r reading it, so thanks!
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As of next week I'll post an episode of this manga every Sunday!
Pls, read and hope u enjoy as the story will get very interesting!
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Posted 8/18/08 , edited 9/15/08
Chapter 9 Re-edited.
"Essence of Death"



"Bloody Valentine"



End of 2nd vol!

(Beginning of 3rd Volume!)

Kokoro-Ni Chapter/ Episode 11 "Lost with out Return"



"The Secret Scrolls."


"Race Against Time"
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Since no one told me that episode 9 had not ompletely been posted for some reasons that I don't know y it was posted like that, I have reposted ep 9 and the all new episode 10 of Kokoro- ni, hope you enjoy!
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Since no one told me that episode 9 had not ompletely been posted for some reasons that I don't know y it was posted like that, I have reposted ep 9 and the all new episode 10 of Kokoro- ni, hope you enjoy!


Ok I can account for it only posting part of it, you had reached the limit of content allowed in a single post. And sorry, if I had taken a look at the thread sooner, I would have been able to tell you about it before now...and sorry haven't had the chance to read beyond the third chapter which I edited for you on my group. I do hope you'll post some more of these chapters up on the group some time to give the members more to read of your story.
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